四级开放式作文素材【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级开放式作文素材【二】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级开放式作文素材【三】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
四级开放式作文素材【四】
这种是以大班带小班的活动，不仅增进了孩子们的友情，而且最大限度地挖掘、升发了每名幼儿的潜能，新《纲要》中指出，幼儿园与家庭、社区密切合作，综合利用各种教育资源，如果我们每一个幼儿园、每一个班级的每一位老师都能做到综合利用多种资源那我们将会在贯彻实施新《纲要》的道路上迈出可喜的一大步！
四级开放式作文素材【五】
如果你在一个好的年纪，你就放开去跑。
这是书上的一句话，虽然看上去像一时的有感而发，但却成了我最信服的一句话。
当我挂上“初中生”这一名号时，我还没醒。我每天积极又消极地面对它，它不耐烦了，初中生活的齿轮越转越快，我每天只能在日子上落荒而逃，耳边是朱自清“时间为什么一去不复返”的感叹，使得我拼了命地去追时间。
到了第一次月考，我喘不过气来，慢慢放慢了速度，时间把我远远甩在脑后，我望尘莫及，放弃了。语文的时候，阳光从桌子脚爬到桌头，我若路人般嘲笑日子苟延残喘地飞奔，好像要奔跑着出生入，它已经待我不及了，我也不愿花大力气去与它周旋，匆匆写完试卷，出了考场便以为有了一片自由放松的天地。我在看到我分数下了九十以后，才意识到自己必须得去奔跑了，我只好匆匆收起行装，拼命去追那远在天边的时间，可是哪里追得上?
它每时每刻在用毕生的精力努力向着太阳飞奔，而我松懈过一次，就要用相等的速度去追。
日子它不待人，你想在人生旅途上停下脚步去休息一下也不行，因为奔跑不需要理由。
时间可以让人堕落，也可以让人成功，没有人会选择前者，但你要付出更多，不然成功不会停下来和你招手。
也许这就是你奔跑的理由，如果万物都不等你，那么你别无选择。请你让我奔跑在时间的齿轮上，你在那上面跑，就不会在梦里。
四级开放式作文素材【六】
和谐的.工作氛围能极大地调动我们工作积极性和主动性，同样和谐的师幼关系能极大地调动幼儿参与活动的积极性、主动性和创造性，有利于幼儿个性的社会化发展，但是和谐的师幼关系的建立却并不是一件容易的事，除了要求把幼儿当成平等的独立的个体，热爱并尊重每一个幼儿，还要掌握一定得技巧。如：微笑、爱抚和拥他入怀来表示赞许和喜爱。运用积极地语言早已为我们所掌握，而积极地表情和身体语言更可以拉近我们与孩子的距离，孩子会从这些细小的地方感知我们的温情，从而真正的接纳我们。
四级开放式作文素材【七】
绿漠上,那么多的星星点点,那么美,那么耀眼,却似乎没有一朵为自己而绽放.
是不懂花语,还是过于自私?
想想,开花,不就是历练、萃纯么?开花,所经历的吞吐吸纳,难道不就是生命的孕育?日落日出,悄无声息,或绚丽,或灿烂,或丰韵;渐变,而至突变.弄花非人人可做,花语,亦非人人可懂.花之需求,花的性情,实在表征着一切生命本原和本质.有道是,"落红不是无情物".亘古自然与人和谐佳处,早已缀满无边无际烂漫花形花色花语的动人密码.
这样想着,还有什么可担忧、怀疑,甚至抱怨的?
总有人不依不饶,给出种种理由:播种施肥不就是为了丰收的果实么,花不能吃,整这些好看不中用的花瓶为的什么?此一态度,看似颇通人情,也许颇有市场,但我们即以井蛙之见浅俗思之,如果没有美丽的花儿为自己招来蜂蝶与鸟雀,它又何以结果?没有多彩的花儿为这个世界"张灯结彩",你我又如何把握前进的方向?历史又怎会如此厚重而灿烂?所以,常有人只会为最直接的目的而埋头苦干,这本无可厚非,不过正因此,他似乎忘了,某个本不该放弃或忽略的过程或环节,往往却是导致困难、碰壁或者失败的因缘.
此刻记起,哪位曾给了我们这诗意般哲理点示,"也许,就是那不经意的一转身,命运之神便与你擦肩而过.它只能哀叹着在你陷下去的洞上附上一层薄薄的春泥,插上一朵蒲公英,承载着下次的希望顺着朝阳渐行渐远."因此,在辛勤耕耘的过程中,我们不能迷失自我,不妨常提醒自己:结果,也许不是最重要的,生命或事物的任何过程和姿态,哪怕开花那一瞬,都不要轻忽,更不要忘记!因为它们,同样的美好,或者一样的不好,都是我们的`机缘遇合,只要你或参与,或注目,或洗礼;只要初衷还在,过程动人,哪怕有点惊心,有点恍惚,又何妨它们依旧风神.
其实,我们本不需如此纠结徘徊,在我们的内心深处,一直都盛开着一朵洁白的雪莲,这个十足物质化的社会,我们也渐渐物质和实际化了.孩子们抛开了童真,少年郎抛开了梦想,中年人抛开了希望,老年人抛开了回首.如果有一天,我们在贫瘠的原野上看到了一束花,一丛绿,那是不是还会感到惊喜,顿觉心颤?为什么不让这惊喜持续,这心颤留守?!灿耀漫山的花朵,何尝不是永恒的乐趣与希望?!
浮生若梦,无妨就当它是梦,尽兴地梦它一场;世事如花,无妨就当它是花,从容地赏它无限.无论如何,不忘却开花和畅梦的所有过程和姿态,同于我们欣赏云起云落,仰观朝霞万千变化.
