社会捐款类作文(第一次捐款作文小学生450字)

社会捐款类作文(第一次捐款作文小学生450字)

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社会捐款类作文(第一次捐款作文小学生450字)

社会捐款类作文【一】

昨晚,快9点了,爸爸妈妈收到了意外的短信,其实也不算意外,一般来说,他们一起收到信息,那都是我们学校发出的了。

老师通知:10月16日是“郑州慈善日”,号召每个学生捐出一日的零花钱。因学生没有经济能力,学校规定捐款上限,每名学生捐款不超过五元。捐款坚持自愿原则,如您孩子捐款,请于明日交给班主任老师。

我听了,便急着去找我的存钱盒,还不解地问:为什么只让捐这么少?

爸爸告诉我:老师说的很清楚,因为你们是学生,没有经济能力,心意是最重要的,捐款的人多了,得到帮助的人自然也会增多,点点滴滴汇成江河。

是呀!在幼儿园时,老师就教我们唱过:“只要人人都献出一点爱,世界将变成美好的人间!……”只要我们每个人都能献出一点爱,情暖人间!

我想起,在上幼儿园时,为玉树灾区捐款时,我把平时赞的零钱,给妈妈兑换成100元的大钞,认真地放进书包里,爸爸妈妈还高兴地夸奖我是个很有爱心的好孩子!因为我在新闻中也看到了那里的悲惨场面,还哭了,当时哽咽的话都快说不出来了,他们太可怜了!当第二日,我满怀着对玉树地区可怜孩子们的关爱,把100元钱投入到校门口火红的捐款箱时,我们的园长还跑来给我照了张像,感觉很有成就感!

我就是这样,最喜欢做的事就是帮助别人、奉献爱心!妈妈也常给我说:有爱心的人才是最美的!

正如我们常挂在嘴边的一句话:赠人玫瑰,手留余香!

社会捐款类作文【二】

四川汶川大地震,是对四川同胞的一次灾难,也是对我们大家的考验。

听到这个消息,同学们都非常震惊和难过,纷纷表示愿意捐出自己的零花钱,以解灾民的燃眉之急。就在今天的班会上,陈老师组织我们捐款。我们都怀着激动无比的心情一个一个走到捐款箱前,就连我们班的贫困生王明明也捐了5元钱。只见他怯生生地走到捐款箱前,从裤兜里掏出一些皱巴巴的钱,还有几枚硬币,然后庄重地投进捐款箱。这下我可纳闷了!别看我们捐10元、20元,还有捐100元的,那都是父母给的零花钱,而王明明的爸爸有病,妈妈下岗,一年到头不见他穿新衣服,夏天连根冰棒也没看他买过,这回他怎么舍得捐5元钱呢?

放学后,我跟在王明明身后,刚想上前问个明白,见他从兜里掏出一个塑料袋来,还边走边四下观望。这下我更加糊涂了:他为什么不回家?莫非有什么不可告人的密秘?我可要探个究竟。只见他走走停停,时时蹲下捡起丢弃在路上的废纸、废塑料瓶子一类的东西。我恍然大悟,终于明白他的5元钱是怎么来的。看着王明明瘦弱的身影,我的眼睛渐渐模糊了。

爱是什么?爱是妈妈怕你着凉,给你盖上被子;爱是向有困难的同学伸出双手;爱是全世界善良的人们为四川汶川爱很深很大,有时也很渺小,有一首歌唱的好:“只要人人都献出一点爱,世界将变成美好的人间……。”

社会捐款类作文【三】

尊敬的xx实验中学的全体师生、员工:

您们好!

您们的捐款我们如数收到,您们的爱心我们也如数收到!我们全家感谢您们!

感谢您们伸出的仁爱之手,让xx同学增添了战胜病魔的勇气和力量!

感谢您们伸出的博爱之手,让我们全家感受到了全体师生、员工的友情与真爱!

感谢您们伸出的关爱之手,让我们看到了实验中学那充满生机与活力的未来!

感谢您们伸出的真爱之手,让我们体验到了和谐社会里大家庭的温暖与牵挂!

在您们的帮助下,xx同学已经在北京解放军总院住院治疗。xx同学被确诊为低分化式肝癌,也就是肝癌里最严重的一种,属于肝癌晚期,虽然多次经过专家会诊和治疗,但xx同学的病情仍不断恶化,癌细胞转移到了肺部,他本人虽然还不知道病情,但已表现出肝痛、乏力、头晕等不良症状,身体每况愈下。作为孩子的父母,我们虽然难以接受这个现实,但我们在孩子面前还要强装笑脸,不论怎样,只要有一线希望我们也要为孩子治疗,让孩子过好每一天!

孩子的成长倾注了父母所有的心,寄托了父母所有的希望,我们多么希望孩子能重新走进课堂,和同学们在一起享受阳光、享受快乐。然而,一切都将成为过去,可叹生命在病魔面前是那样苍白无力!

我们真挚地希望全体同学能够加强体育锻炼,积极参加有益于身体健康的'活动,陶冶情操,为学习提供旺盛的精力。

祝全体同学健康快乐!学习快乐!

祝实验中学领导健康快乐!事业有成!

祝实验中学老师、员工健康快乐!笑口常开!

祝实验中学年年岁岁岁岁年年硕果累累!

此致,

敬礼!

社会捐款类作文【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

社会捐款类作文【五】

今日,我在广播中听到残疾人写给我们实小的小朋友的一封信。我一边听一边留下了眼泪。我感觉残疾儿童的命运太悲惨了,他们听不到这个世界的声音看不到这个世界的五彩缤纷,多么的痛苦呀!全国助残日快到了,我班李老师说:我们都奉献一点爱心,为残疾儿童捐款吧。我高兴极了!

我回到家,我对妈妈说:全国助残日到了,我想为残疾人捐款!我想尽我的微薄之力为残疾孩子做点事情。妈妈高兴的说:行呀,好孩子,你有这份爱心,妈妈一定支持你。于是,我回到自己的房间,拿出储钱罐,从里面拿出我平时积攒的5元钱。我说:妈妈,我捐助5元好吗?妈妈点头允许了。虽然我捐的钱不多,但是我决定好好学习,长大挣到更多的钱来资助那些残疾儿童。

我把钱交给了老师,老师也笑了。我能为残疾人做事,我真高兴呀!我是小小花木兰,我说到做到,长大以后,我一定要为社会,为残疾做出更多的贡献。

社会捐款类作文【六】

那是一节班会课上,袁老师满面春风的走进了教师,对大家说:“明天要开张帮助山区的孩子上学的捐款,大家记得明天带钱来送给他们,好不好?”老师的话音刚落,大家齐声说:“好”。

第二天,大家像过节一样非常兴奋,我也是,毕竟为了这事,昨晚一夜没睡好。开始捐款了,班里有些人只带了一元钱,捐得多的同学,看着钱,还有些舍不得的呢!我也一样,要知道我可把自己的零花钱三百七十元全拿出了。捐的时候,我心里像被针扎了似得,心疼的快哭了,又一想,这是好事,应该做的,爸爸妈妈都支持我。我果断的把钱投进了箱子。

最后,老师宣布;“全班只有王鑫坤捐的最多,大家要学习。”班里响起了热烈的`掌声,我开心的笑了,不舍之情早就烟消云散了。

又过了几天,老师给了我一封信,深情的说:“鑫坤,这是山区孩子专门给你的信,快看看吧!”我小心的打开一看,呀,里面是返回的五十元钱除此之外,还有一张纸条。

“谢谢你的钱,更感谢你对我的一份关爱!”这句话使我终生难忘。

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