初三生社会类作文（以社会为主题的初三优秀作文） - 作文仓库

初三生社会类作文【一】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；

2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；

3．你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：

1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。

1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。

2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。

3）传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

初三生社会类作文【二】

人较之动物不同之处在于人有感情，注定了我们要为情所困，这也让我们的生活有欢笑，也有泪水，常常欢笑伴着泪水流。在我们的感情世界里，爱情应该是最强烈、最汹涌的，我曾一度以为爱情应该是我生活的全部，我应该为爱而生，为爱而不顾一切，就算粉身碎骨也无怨无悔，可当伤痕累累后才发觉自己真的够傻，而爱情究竟是什么，是“只在乎曾经拥用，不在乎天长地久”的轰轰烈烈爱一回，还是“执子之手，与子偕老”的长相厮守，到现在也说不清，也许爱情美就美在动情的那一刻，妙就妙在瞬间迸发的火花，正因为短暂炫目，所以才让人觉得异常珍贵而难长久，所以才倍加珍惜，却不知我们珍惜的只是爱情美妙的一瞬，而后来的长相守只是一种习惯、一种责任，已与爱情无关。所以在叶落后对自己说情有时要好好珍惜、好好把握，没有时也不要患得患失，毕竟爱情只是我们生活中的一小部分而已，都说女人是为爱而活，但现在看来女人更应该为自己而活，有爱要美丽，没有爱更应该美丽。

人活着一定要活出自己的精彩，与其将生活的意义寄托在飘渺的爱情上，不如活出一个独立的自我。年少轻狂时也曾庸庸碌碌、得过且过的混日子，只是活着，没有目标，没有理想，过了一天又一天，打发无聊到来的每一天，直到有一天夜里睡不着，回想自己这些年的生活，竟发觉没有什么可让自己骄傲而自豪的，这个发现真的吓倒了自己，不敢往下想，想自己有一天老了回想自己的一生，也是这样碌碌无为，那这一生岂不白活了，才发觉以往的日子真的是在浪费自己的时间，心中没有什么期盼、没有目标，不到目标实现的惊喜，更感受不到超越自己的.快乐。才感觉人活着真的该有自己的目标，不是好高骛远不切实际的幻想，人在每一个时期要有这个时期的目标，人不能活得没有压力，有压力才有动力，当你在经过一番努力实现自己的目标时，你会发现自己真的很伟大，让自己的信心更强，战胜困境的勇气更强，“人生苦乐酸甜”不经历辛苦怎么懂得甜呢？苦辣酸甜才是真实的人生，当你在多年以后回首曾经的付出与所得，才可以对自己说我不虚此生，我没白活一回，有一首歌中是这样写的“把每天当成末日来相爱，一分一秒都美到泪水掉下来”，我想说把每天当成末日来活，一分一秒都要让自己无憾此生，也许有些人会说太言过其实了，那你就算算你一生能有多少分多少秒，在你计算的时候你已经过了一秒、二秒……好好把握你生命中的每一天吧，让它过得有意义、有价值，让你的生活中充满着精彩！

很多人说一个人活着不光是为了自己，更为了亲人而活，觉得这句话很有道理，因为亲情永远是我们无法割舍的感情，它给我们温暖，当你在异国他乡孤单无助时，亲人的一句问候的话语可以冲淡所有旅途中的劳累，安慰孤寂的心灵，当我们一无所有时我们至少可以说我们还有爱我们的亲人，而这份爱是不掺杂任何功利色彩，不要求回报的亲情。年轻时的我太向往自由，太渴望无拘无束的生活，而常常忽略了身边的亲人，记得考学报考志愿都报了外省的，就想能离开这个约束自己的小天地，过自由自在的生活，可离开了家才发现最亲的地方还是家，最爱你的人还是家人，那是你在家时无法体味到的，对于家的依恋源于对家中亲人的爱，这份爱将支撑我们面对生活中种种艰难困苦，而为了这份爱我们会更加努力，让亲人以我们为荣，为我们骄傲。

为何而生？生而为何？也许是我们终其一生在思索的问题，也许在我们白发苍苍时，可以对他人对自己这样说“我这一生仰不愧于天，俯不怍于地，中不疚于己“就足矣！