如何写一篇优秀的叙事作文【一】
A wind and the calendar of the afternoon, me and my mother, cousin and the cousin yo dog to clean air, scenic Geleshan play. Small colorful flowers to welcome our arrival with a smile; Xiaocaohu their small head out and waved to us. We enjoy the beautiful scenery while hiking.
Along the way, yo dog to hop to hop from time to time naughty and jumped into the water hole, the others have a muddy splash. We came to a rock and saw the beautiful, fragrant honeysuckle fill the fields. Cousin cousin and I could not wait to pick up the pick pocket honeysuckle. Pick a pick, and I was honeysuckle mixed with a bit of rattan, the foot-slip, fall down on. If my hand tightly grasped the honeysuckle vines and perhaps on to pieces of it. End mining flowers, the mother asked us: "Do you know what the benefits of honeysuckle it?" Cousin said: "Honeysuckle is Shannon." Cousin said: "Honeysuckle Qingre, Reduce Pathogenic Fire." I said : "Honeysuckle can also be down summer heat." her mother said: "You are right, but the best place honeysuckle is native, does not appreciate other people's live."
After the play, I not only enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also to understand the truth in life. Ah really gain a lot.
如何写一篇优秀的叙事作文【二】
走进六月，走进儿童节;走进幻想的童年，走进天真的童年。六月一日，是我们儿童的'节日，让我们以隆重的盛典来迎接这个不平凡的日子！
今天，阳光明媚，小鸟叽叽喳喳地叫着，好像在说：“欢迎你们，祝你过一个美好的六一。”昆虫们也不甘落后，用演奏的形式为我们奏出欢快的乐曲。最美的还是舞蹈家——蝴蝶了，它在花儿的映衬下翩翩起舞，美丽极了！在这样的氛围下，我们的心情当然也无比愉快。兴致盎然地来到了广场。
广场的景色也十分美丽，路边百花齐放，地面绿草如茵，道路两旁翠柳如眉，叫人多么沉醉呀！小花在一旁招待人家，小草在给人们铺床，大树爷爷在一旁站岗。是多么有趣啊！
在一片绿茵茵的草地上，我偶然发现了几颗（个）雄伟的蘑菇在草地上拔地而起，给小草增添了一种美丽的风景。广场里还有许多用石头做的小船，真有趣。（之后我恋恋不舍的回家了。）
今天的天格外蓝，因为有妈妈陪伴我；今天的云格外美，有的像小兔，有的像小花，还有的像高山……总之千姿百态。这次去广场游玩真令我高兴啊！今天和妈妈同游我更真切地感受到了妈妈对我无私限的、无比真诚的关爱，使我的心情无比愉悦，度过了一个快乐的六一儿童节。
评语：因为快乐，看到的一切事物都是非常的漂亮、美好！小记者笔下的这篇文章就是个例子。因为是六一，在广场游玩，但是因为心情无比美好，所以，小记者笔下的一草一木，都格外的漂亮，看来心情好，能写出好文章哦！也祝小记者一年一个大进步。快乐的渡过童年！
如何写一篇优秀的叙事作文【三】
今天是五一节，爸爸、妈妈带我去上街。一路上，外面下着蒙蒙细雨，到处一片翠绿，花儿特别鲜艳，时而有几滴小水珠滚落下来。我们冒着雨，一路步行。
街上有川流不息的人和车辆，各个商店打出了各种优惠的牌子，人们就抢着买。
我们全家人一起来到大兴超市。大兴超市的门前摆满了各种化妆品。前面放着八折优惠的牌子。有很多人在选购
物品。一进门，有好多小朋友在那里坐电梯，我也去坐电梯。我站在一个格子上电梯自动地把我送上去。我下来又上去，玩了又玩。
玩累了就到旁边椅子上坐下来，看到有小朋友在吃汉堡包，我就要爸爸给我买。买回来一看，汉堡包就是两块面包中夹一块鸡肉和一点黄瓜、奶油做成的。尝一口，味到好极了。
妈妈给我讲“五一”劳动节的由来，使我懂得了“五一”劳动节是来之不易：是全世界无产阶级和劳动人民团结奋斗的结果。我们要珍惜今天的幸福生活，不能玩，要用心学习。
今天是多么难忘的、快乐一天呀。
如何写一篇优秀的叙事作文【四】
On the first day of the rest, mom and dad and I went to ningbo sea world and youngor zoo.
We first came to the sea world. Once in the aquarium, dad took me to see the sea precious animals. Have the hippocampus, giant salamander, heavy sea turtles, and cute little penguins. Overhead transparent glass in all kinds of fish swimming happily in the, I seem to feel also came to the underwater world.
Out of the aquarium, went to the ocean theatre, there are Marine animals.
Walrus in sit-ups, music we call "good", then we show the water ballet, see it stretch your head, around circle, also push the feet, how interesting! From Japan's "three sisters" sea lions, each have each skill: within a will do ten arithmetic, a lifting weights, is another ball player. Next, two beluga whales the staff with mouth top up from the water. Finally, dolphins sang a song for us, that caused a cheer.
Out of the sea world, we went to the youngor zoo. In the zoo, I saw a fierce the east-northern tiger and the tiger, mighty lion and white lion. In the panda garden, I finally met our national treasure, the giant panda. They are naughty flip, also eat bamboo. Beautiful peacock contended for the tail, to show us their beauty.
Travel over, although very tired, but I am very happy!
