要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
Dear teacher,
We'll have a class meeting this afternoon. All of us students hope that you can attend it. Please accept our sincere invitation.
In the class meeting, we will make some plans about all the subjects, including English. We do have some puzzles and we need your help. So we hope you can set some time aside to be with us in the class meeting. We will feel honored if you can come to attend our class meeting.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours
XXX
My dear English teacher:
From my English, I will contact a deeply like English. English let me open view, let me understand the culture of different region amorous feelings to.
I want to use English freely and talk to people, but my spoken English is very bad.Language is a kind of habit, I find it hard to correct his poor pronunciation, this makes me very distressed, but I have worked very hard in the improved.
I feel that learning English is the key to read more look more, I like reading comprehension, it not only let me get some knowledge, but also let me realize the happiness of learning English, I feel very proud can read English article.
Thank you for teaching me. I believe in your teachings, I can certainly through their efforts to learn English well.
Best wishes for you!
Yours,nidemingzi
Yours
XXX
Dear Gack
How are you? I am Mike,I am 14 yaars old and my birthday in November ,I can speak Chinese and a little Franch .I am from China. I want to be a doctor , I think it will help many people and it is very cool in a white unifrom ,I live in lin tong.
how about you?can you wrte to me soon?
Yours,
Li Hua
Hello, we are XX tourism company, we have you and your 2 children 4 to set up tourist routes for you to choose.
From Beijing to Shanghai's tourist routes, you can go play in Shanghai Zoo, which has its own characteristics is a large-scale integrated Zoo. Then you can also go to Shanghai, Nanjing Pedestrian Street shopping, it is a shopper's paradise.
From Beijing to Changsha tourist routes, you can go play Changsha Window of the World, which is a new development in an amusement park. Then you can go take a look at Pinghu Tang and Wangfujing, one of the very many. Yuelu Mountain is you have to go to a place, from the top you can see the whole Changsha.
From Beijing to Guangzhou's tourist routes, you can go a long long amusement park to play, and that there are many excellent recreational facilities, so that you will not regret it. You can also go to Hong Kong the world's wildlife, which is currently China's largest imitation of the Wild Animal Park. Guangzhou's food is delicious, you will like.
From Beijing to Guilin tourism line, you can go to the famous Lijiang River, sitting on the boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery, and then can go to Yinzi Yan, it was China's first large cavern 4. Guilin Yang Shuo in the line of Yang Renjie shopping and you will be a good place to eat. That you will not feel the same with Chinese characteristics.
I hope you are happy to play China
Yours
XXX
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