上海外教社中学生作文获奖【一】
在株洲，我有五个家人，他们是我的爷爷、奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和小姨，放假的时候我们一般会住在一起。他们都有自己的特点，一点也不一样。
我爷爷最大的特点是勤劳，每天我们还没起床的时候，他就在厨房里忙碌开了，给我们准备早餐并且尽量满足每一个人的需要，有的吃蛋炒饭，有的要吃米粉，有的要吃稀饭，他都不厌其烦地准备好，我真佩服他。吃过饭后还会拖地，天气好了还会晒被子，他怎么就那么不累呢？
我奶奶最喜欢的事情就是交朋友。她没事做的时候就会去别的小区的奶奶家串门，和她们一起喝茶、打毛衣、做鞋子，有时也会打打小牌，别的奶奶有时也会到我们家来，有奶奶的家可真热闹。
我爸爸一天到晚总是忙不赢，也不知道怎么会有那么多的事，很多时候都是半夜三更才回家，在家的时候总是会问我的作业，当然他回得早的时候也会和我一起玩，踢足球呀，下棋什么的，所以很多时候我既盼望爸爸早点回也会害怕他回得太早。
妈妈在放假的时候都是陪着我，我觉得妈妈最大的特点是臭美。她几乎每天都不穿相同的衣服，还喜欢喷香水，当然总是会给自己和我们其他家人买各种各样的新衣服。
我的小姨最喜欢看韩剧，只要有空闲就会看，据说她还会将简单的韩语，我都怀疑她不是中国人，是韩国人了。
我的家人有趣吧？我爱我的家人。
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【二】
我的爸爸有一双炯炯有神的眼睛和一张带黑而又常常面带笑容的脸，爸爸是个非常有责任心的人，也是一个谦虚的人，对工作和学习都一丝不苟。
最近，爸爸单位上要竞争上岗，所以，他就努力学习，争取上岗，也很少和我下围棋了。他每天下班回家就忙着写演讲的稿子。每次写好了都改了又改。有一次，我们去逛街，爸爸看见有关竞争上岗的书，就买了下来，回家去，看着那本书，爸爸又重新写了一篇，每次写好了都要念给妈妈和我听，如果没有5分钟，又要改。爸爸一直都在谦虚地学习，连他最喜欢看的新闻——美国打阿富汗也不看了，因为爸爸如果下岗了，我们这个幸福的家就没了生活来源了，所以爸爸才这么紧张。
演讲开始了，我和妈妈都对爸爸充满了胜利的信心，相信爸爸一定能胜利，能上岗，可我心里还有块大石头。
等爸爸回来，爸爸才对我们说：那些人都没有我说的多，讲得好。这时我心里的大石头才落地了，但是，爸爸能不能上岗，还是一个大问号！
我真爱那个谦虚的爸爸！我真爱那个对工作一丝不苟的爸爸！
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【三】
Dear Mr Pan:
It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.
It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.
You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart. Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.
I've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?
Happy new year.
With every good wish.
Yours sincerely
Dali Wang
XXXX.X.X
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【四】
青海湖
我们从西宁机场一下飞机就直接驱车赶往青海湖，因天色已晚，所以决定明早再去游青海湖。
天刚刚蒙蒙亮，我和妈妈就早早的起了床。我们刚走出房间，就看见对面有一只小鹿，真可爱！于是我赶紧拿出相机，“咔嚓”一声，就把小鹿照进了相机。“瞧，日出！”姐姐打叫起来，顺着她手指的方向，我顿眼望去，哇，好美的日出啊！太阳好像一个娃娃，一睡醒，就不停地踢着被子，很久很久。。。。。才露出一个圆圆的脸，害羞地张望着大地，湖面上波光粼粼，像仙女撒下的一把碎金，整个水面金光闪烁。只见青海湖里的小鱼，有的在和伙伴捉迷藏，有的在休息，还有的在追逐、嬉戏。接着，我们还去了二郎剑，这里最好玩的'是骑牦牛，骑在牛背上，摸着他柔软的皮毛，真舒服！
现在我们马上赶往下一个景点——
张掖
沿途有许许多多美丽的风景：祁连大草原，牛羊成群，像一颗颗黑白相间的珍珠镶嵌在碧绿的地毯上。茶卡盐湖，坐上小火车，眺望两岸的风景，碧水蓝天，胜似人间天堂。门源油菜花，芳草绿野，仿佛世外桃源。瓜州，瓜果飘香，果肥汁甜。酒泉，卫星发射基地，处处有航天。。。。
终于达到了今天的目的地——张掖。张掖是世界著名的丹霞地貌之一，你们知道丹霞是怎么形成的吗？丹霞是由红色砂砾岩经长期风化剥离和流水年久侵蚀所形成的孤立山峰和陡峭的奇岩怪石。张掖的丹霞地貌分布广阔，蔚为壮观，造型奇特，色彩艳丽，这里层级错落交替，岩壁陡峭，气势磅礴，形态丰富，煞是好看。其中以色彩斑斓而称奇的有七彩峡、七彩湖、刀山、火海，无一不是奇妙景观，令人不得不赞叹大自然的鬼斧神工。
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【五】
Dear Mr.Huang,
We have never seen for one year, I miss you very much.It is say that you did an operation in September.How are you now? I hope that you have recovered.
Thank you for your enlightening in the important time of my life.I won't forget your edification. Iam in the XX University now.It locate in the beautiful city Hangzhou. I invite you to have a journey to Hangzhou next summer if you have time then.My major is English,but I always feel shamed to speak and show in English in the class.I would change the actuality gradually.Now I like sports very much especially basketball.You would see a healthy and stronge David next time.The life in the university is colorful.I like it.And I shall study hard.
The new year is on the way, I pray the God to bless you to be happy and healthy in the coming year.And give my best regards to your families. Happy New Year!
Yours faithfully, David
28th Dec
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【六】
Dear Mrs. Nelson,
My name is Rick Schultz. I don’t know if you remember me, but I was in your English class at Westview High School in 20xx. I used to argue with you about the merits of science fiction as a form of literature. Recently I met several other former students of yours, Gerald Bryant, Ron Brown, Dawn Smith, and Dave Lee. Naturally we spent much of the time we were together talking about your class and how much we enjoyed it. So I decided to write you and find out how you are doing.
As I said, we all remember your class with great fondness. If you are still teaching, I hope your current students appreciate how fortunate they are.
Sincerely yours,
Rick Schultz
XXXX.X.X
上海外教社中学生作文获奖【七】
有一天，画眉鸟正在床上休息，忽然听到一阵阵悠扬，动听的歌声，它循声望去，一看，原来是夜莺在练唱歌呢！“夜莺姐姐的歌声如此动听，我何不向它学学呢？”画眉鸟躺在床上，头枕着双手，翘着二郎推想：“我每天早晨起来练唱歌，终究会练好的。”
这天晚上，画眉鸟拨好小闹钟，第二天天还没亮，画眉鸟儿就来跟夜莺学唱歌。一开始很认真，不厌其烦地一遍一遍地练习。
它把夜莺的几首歌都学会了，就觉得自己唱得差不多了。它想：如果森林里开个歌咏比赛，我就可以和夜莺姐姐比比高低了。
正在它得意洋洋，想入非非的时候，树林深处又传来了夜莺的`歌声。“啊，这是一首新歌，真好听。”画眉鸟也张开嘴巴想唱，但它自己音域不够宽，唱不上去，反复了几遍还是唱不上去，它急得直抓头。这时，音乐家——百灵鸟走过来对画眉说：“要当好歌唱家，应当先练基本功，不能光满足于跟别人学几首歌。”画眉鸟听了点点头，就“1、2、3、4、5、6、7。。。。。”反复地唱了几遍，它觉得不成曲调，枯燥得很，就坚持不下去了，它想：“反正我也学不好了，更当不上什么‘森林歌手’了。”于是又懒洋洋地躺在床上。
有一天，画眉鸟在林中散步，遇见了百灵鸟，百灵鸟问他：“你现在歌唱得如何了？”画眉鸟红着脸，羞答答地说：“基本功太难练，我没有练下去。”百灵鸟对画眉鸟说：“自己认定了一个正确的目标，就要坚定不移地朝着这个目标奋进，无论遇到了多大的困难，也要千方百计地克服它。”
从此以后，画眉鸟接受了这个教训，持之以恒，终于成为了大森林里最出色的歌手了。
