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Dear Teacher:
Hello!
"Grateful heart, thank you, with my life. Let me have the courage to do myself, if flowers fall, as I will treasure ... ...
I lay in bed, look at it through the window air venues tend to be sparse in a few stars. Students accompanied by snoring, the request to sing this song, this time calling me in my heart: the teacher ah! Mind you hear this call?
Teacher: Do you remember?
"Yong all, your getting now? Tell me what the difficulties, we are our own people." Every time I heard this, my heart kind of feeling can not tell, maybe! That is happiness. Teacher: I am thankful that you, thank you for such care.
Teacher, you remember?
"What is difficult, not afraid, as long as our brave team to cotton, a strong point of the future will be good." Teacher, when I lost heart With the face of difficulties fail, you angel came to me gave me courage and hopes, always tell me words of encouragement, let me get stronger, you will be sinking my surgery, despair into the hearts of the "confidence" in the sky, into a strong ocean; also into the future success door.
Teacher, I'm grateful you, thank you for your encouragement on me.
Teacher, you remember?
"You have committed to do, all right, as long as next time do not like it." Frequently in front of me to tell me, encouraged me. Teacher, whenever I did something wrong, you always looked at me quietly, his brow with the flat, total eyelashes blinking in that from time to time, but your eyes do not move. Serious face once hung a gentle smile. That is such an eye ah! For love, warmth, there is hope, there are incentives. So bright, so flash, gives a warm, giving people the courage! Teacher, I'm grateful you, thank you for giving me courage to face the error.
Teacher, no matter what I encountered, you will join me in my face. Teacher, in my eyes you are applying, and I thank you from the heart, thanks you, my good teacher, Thank you for everything for me! Suddenly I found that the teacher - his mother, how are so similar, ah, I suddenly changed the life of ideas, teacher, teachers, and care for your child smile shine like my mother. I love you teacher! If you are my second mother. Watching over me every time!
I hope teachers good health and smooth work! This is my biggest wish it!
DearDad:
Youhaveworkedhard!
Inthepast,Iamalwaysafraidtoyouandpositivedialogue。Everytimesomethingwasalwaysafraidtotellyou。Becausewhenyoufacethetotalserious。Todaytotakethisopportunitytosaysomethingtoyouwhispering。Xiaonetworkcomposition
Dad,everyweekend,Iwasalwaysthetimeyouhavetoclosethearrangement。MathematicalOlympiadmorningcompositionclassintheafternoonthereareEnglishclassesinCambridge。Iwouldliketobeabletodominatehistime,eagertorecognizefriends,communityawareness。
Inaddition,thefather,youwillrecallthatIamsickofit?That,whentheytraveltoswimbecausealotoftimes,thesublingualgland,whereanumberofissues,thedoctorssaidanoperationtobecured。
Afterthesurgery,youworkharddayandnightforme,I‘mhungry,youalwaysgivemetobringfoodfromhome;inmysleep,youalwayswatchmyside,IfearwhatThing;inmyheartthecried,youalwayscomfortandunclealongwithme,encouragedme;atatimewhenIeat,youalwayslookedatmequietlyaside。ButIknowwhereyouarebusyatthetimethatIlookattheah!Youcaneventome,butgaveupinthehandsofalargebusiness!Ido,whenthetestoftimeisnotactivelycooperatesothatyouareconcerned,here,ansontellyouIamsorry。
HeartofThanksgiving,thankstohisfather。Dad,thistimeinthemid-termexam,Ididnotenterthetopten。Well,Iloveyou:Ihavetoeatwhatyoudotome;stationerytowhatyoutoldmetobuy。NomatterwhatIwant,aslongasyoucanbuyit,itwoulddefinitelybeavailable,andthenIgave。
Thisiswhattheworldcanpayoff,inadditiontoParents。
Sincerely:
Goodhealth
Smooth
Yourson:YiXin-yuan
Dear dad and mum,
Today is Thanksgiving Day,so I want to write a letter to you.I know you are kind and helpful to me.You cook meals and wash clothes for me every day.At the weekend,you often prepare some of my favorite food.Sometimes you also help me with my lessons.I know you are very strict with me,but when I make a mistake,you first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just complaining about it.You always try to understand me.I think that is a good way for a child to grow up.With your care,I am living and studying happily,so I want to say "I love you,dad and mum" .
Yours
Baby
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