英语动物作文五年级【一】
我走上前去，厉声质问妈妈：“你为什么要宰我的鸭儿。你不觉得这样很残忍吗？它是我的好伙伴，你却这样伤了它。书上不是说动物是人类的好朋友，我们要保护动物吗？”爸爸说：“区区一个鸭子，有什么好哭。”我再也不想跟他们辩了，于是直冲入房，捂住被子，号啕大哭起来。
吃完饭，我打开电视，在转到宠物频道时，我看到有一个人养了一只鸽子。有一天，那鸽子在树上被卡住了，飞不下来。于是，主人就不顾危险爬到树上去，将鸽子救了下来。但是却把他困在了树上，直到有人打了求助电话，他才平安地下来。
是呀，为了一只动物，那个养鸽人却能不顾生命危险去救助，多么令人感动呀！我们人类与动物就应这样和睦相处，好好保护我们地球的生态环境。不过，我听老师说，对圈养来改善生活的家禽、家畜，我们是可以区别地分开来对待的。
爱护弱小，是我们中华民族的传统美德。我想，用在这里，也是相通的。所以，我们一定要珍惜动物的生命，尽量不要伤害他们。
观点明确，论述深刻、发人深省，文约而意丰，论述语言有理有据、有力、富有文采、形象生动具体，给伤害动物的人们敲响了警钟。
英语动物作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语动物作文五年级【三】
小猪捉老鼠一个大热天，小猪热得冒大汗，为了解暑，它特地从超市里买了一个又大又甜的'西瓜， 一蹦一跳地抱回家。
小猪很爱干净，它把西瓜抱回家之后，就去河边洗手。这时候，一群老鼠溜出来了，它 们发现了西瓜，马上钻进西瓜里面，吃光了西瓜肉，只剩下空空的瓜壳。然后，老鼠们摸着 圆鼓鼓的肚子，钻回了洞里。
小猪回来了，家里安然无恙。于是它去拿刀切西瓜了。把西瓜切开来的时候，小猪才发 现西瓜里空空如也，一点果肉也没有。这时，它发现了老鼠啃过的洞，它非常生气，决定要 教训这群可恶的老鼠。它想到了一个非常好的办法。只见小猪把奶酪系在一条绳子上，然后 用剩下的西瓜皮为主老鼠洞，再把奶酪放在老鼠洞前。
小猪准备好了：作战“的材料，摆好陷阱，就等老鼠找上门了。一开始，老鼠们闻到了 奶酪的香味，然后像恶鬼脱胎一样飞速跑来，小猪看见老鼠要上当了，就马上把系在奶酪上 的绳子网上一拉，那群老鼠直接撞到了西瓜皮，连大门牙都掉下来了。剩下的老鼠剪了，吓 得目瞪口呆，全都乖乖投降了。
这个故事告诉我们一个道理，遇到困难要临危不乱，冷静想办法解决问题。
