五年中考英语作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
五年中考英语作文【二】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
五年中考英语作文【三】
童年的记忆总是美好的，也是难忘的，正如每个人一样，我也有一个令人难忘的童年，从我有记忆开始就天天跟在哥哥姐姐后面东跑西跑，那个时候学校几乎也不用上课，天天我们有大把的时间可以供自己挥霍，虽然吃的是粗茶淡饭，穿的是哥哥姐姐剩下的衣服，但童年的快乐一点没有因此减少半分。
记得在我十几岁的时候，有一天爸爸回来的时候给我买回来一件绿色的线裤和粉红色的线衣，我高兴的穿上这套盼望已久的衣服在炕上走来走去，那个晚上我兴奋的一个晚上没有睡好觉，第二天一大早又早早起床，找出一条短腿的裤子和一件上衣套在线衣线裤外面，刚好新买的线衣线裤落出来一点点，然后背上书包高高兴兴的上学去了，一路上不停的和小伙伴们说说笑笑，至今那笑声那情景还在我脑海中回荡……
五年中考英语作文【四】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
五年中考英语作文【五】
我的童年像蜜蜂一样甜蜜，让我回味无穷，它深深的引起我的回忆。
记得有一次，在灿烂而又暖和的中午，我和妈妈爬上了白云山顶，往下看广州大半收在眼底，郁郁葱葱的树丛掩映着黄的、绿的、红的、白的花朵。在我无忧无虑的'观赏时，一只蜜蜂趁我不注意飞快地扎了我一下，“啊！”我一下子三火冒三丈，一转头看见一只蜜蜂，我大骂“你——干——嘛——叮——我——！”这个大声，大概连聋子都让我吵着受不了。
那只蜜蜂还在我面前跳舞，好像在说：“不是我叮你的，你有证据吗？”
我怒火加到一百度，我把脖子那根针拔下来，然后把它踩在脚下，后来，我发现他被踩了，我得意得好像是世界的新主人一样。
我告诉了妈妈，她说：“你真是顽皮捣蛋王啊！”我第一次被人这样夸奖，越来越高兴，我一跳，我好像飞到了天上呢！
五年中考英语作文【六】
黄兴南路的步行街是一条繁华的街道，今天，我和妈妈、外婆、小姨、二姨还有弟弟妹妹一起去了这条繁华的街道，游览步行街作文。到了步行街一看，果然是名不虚传啊！
站在外面向里看，步行街一眼望不到头，街道两旁全是各种各样的商店，街道中心是喷泉。一座又一座的喷泉喷出来的水花像珍珠一样点缀着步行街，使它变得更加美丽。走进步行街，里面人山人海，人们摩肩接踵，我们只能随着人群慢慢地移动，花了好长时间才从人群中钻出来。不一会儿，我们看到了一个雕塑，名字叫“掏耳朵”。这个雕塑反映了远古时候的人们在没有钱时只能去给别人掏耳朵赚钱，而那个被掏耳朵的人则显得特别高兴，肯定是觉得很舒服吧。
随后，我们又看到了一个雕塑，名字叫“纳凉”。这个雕塑雕得栩栩如生，内容是爷孙俩坐在凉席上纳凉，小孙子还给爷爷捶背呢。作者连烟斗上的花纹也雕出来了，真不可思议。游览步行街真是一件愉快的事，里面有各种各样的雕塑、喷泉，还有商店，会让你看得眼花缭乱，有机会你也去玩玩吧。
五年中考英语作文【七】
在那炎炎夏日，要是能到一个开满荷花的湖边欣赏荷花，在观赏荷花时，还有微风拂面，湖面上漾起一条条细细的波纹――这可是骄阳似火的夏天的一大享受啊！
这不，今天爸爸说要带我去梁园玩。梁园，到底是什么呢？我心里升起了一个大大的问号。到了梁园，我才知道梁园是一个大大的院子。
这个院子可真大呀！里面的景色非常美丽。难道不是吗？荷香小榭有很多很多的荷花，那么艳丽，那么迷人；在很远就能闻到它的香味。荷花的一边有一个小凉 亭，凉亭的中间有一块大树雕，上面雕着百鸟归巢。韵桥上也有一个凉亭，只不过在桥的中间罢了。但韵桥原桥已在清末民初时倒塌了。韵桥的这次重建是按原桥的 结构以及式样重建的。湖中石形状千姿百态……梁园处处尽显大自然的生机，这一点，不难看出，绕着湖走一圈就明白了。除此之外，梁园还有好多奇景呢，但我一 时也找不了这么多，留着下次再找吧！最后，我老大不情愿地走出了梁园的大门。因为梁园的景色那么美，干嘛不多呆一会儿再走呢？
啊，梁园真美！
