myfirstjob的英语作文五年级【一】
暑假里读了好多书，唯独这一本给我的印象最深，一有时间，我就会从头到尾把这本书再细细品味一遍；感觉真是回味悠长，犹如青梅煮酒一般。
海蒂是一个天真烂漫、心地善良的小女孩儿，她热爱生活、热爱大自然。年纪虽小，却有着独特的魅力。能够让你和她一起伤心欲绝、一起开怀大笑。书里主要讲了海蒂被姨妈抛弃，不得已和性格孤僻、饱经沧桑的爷爷生活了一段时间，在弗兰多托的艾斯曼先生家又结识了一位身体多病但纯真善良的瘫痪姑娘克拉拉……海蒂用自己纯真的爱温暖着爷爷冷却的心，重新燃起了他对生活的渴望。也正是在海蒂的爱心帮助下，体弱多病的克拉拉鼓起了生活的勇气，坚定了战胜疾病的信念。
书中还有一个特点，就是作者以极其生动的语言描绘了阿尔卑斯山多姿多彩的自然风光和浓郁的风土人情，让我们犹如亲身经历了一场阿尔卑斯山之旅。
看了这本书，最让我震撼的是小海蒂那开朗乐观的性格，这样可爱的她，不管到哪里都非常招人喜欢还有她对别人真挚的感情和爱心，也都让我受益匪浅。
我已读过这本书很长时间了，但它的香气还是经常环绕在我身边。最后，让我们一起感谢瑞士的著名女作家约翰娜。斯比丽为我们呈现的心灵大餐吧！
myfirstjob的英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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myfirstjob的英语作文五年级【三】
看了《海蒂》这本书你必须会流连忘返的，因为海蒂是一个聪明活泼、纯真善良的小女孩。尽管她遭遇父母早亡的不幸，五岁时就被姨妈送到独居在山上的祖父那里，但她却十分坚强。她用自己的爱心影响着周围的人。
美丽的小海蒂，她有一颗美丽善良的心。海蒂是如此这般的喜爱大自然，她已经与大自然结为了一体，祖母说她是一朵跳跃的蔷薇华。小海蒂的爱心感染了每一个人，用她的纯真和热情点燃了别人也照亮了自己，她让她那倔强的爷爷获得了朋友，让爷爷感受到了爱，她让克蕾拉有了独自行走的，并帮忙她实现了这个梦想，她让原本已经绝望的祖母重新对人类充满了信心，她让彼得学会了阅读，她让悲伤的大夫重新振作了起来，让他再一次充满了活力，她让世界变得更加完美！
姨妈再次来到阿尔姆山把海蒂强行带走，去福兰多托陪伴一个残疾体弱的小姑娘克拉拉，海蒂用她乐观、坚强地性格激励着克蕾拉，她们很快就成了好朋友。而她在克蕾拉的影响下，克蕾拉奶奶的鼓励下，海蒂突然开始识字了。就这样，一天又一天，一个月过去了，海蒂每一天都在思念着爷爷和和天然大牧场以及双目失明的奶奶，在第二个月里，她病倒了，得了梦游病和思乡病。医生推荐把海蒂送回家，海蒂最后回到了她日夜思念的阿儿姆牧场，很快病就好了。在一个蓬勃盎然的春天，克蕾拉在其奶奶的陪伴下来到了阿尔姆大牧场。爷爷的真情挽留使克蕾拉留了下来，经过爷爷的细心调养，克拉拉惭惭健康起来。在海蒂的鼓励下，克拉拉出现了奇迹，竟然学会了走路，在阿儿姆山上的两个月里，她们的友谊更加深厚了。故事感人至深，耐人寻味。
看了这本书，让人陶醉的不仅仅仅是阿尔卑斯山多姿多彩的自然风光，朴实深厚的风土民情，还有此书教会了我们要微笑着应对生活，用真心与人相处，就会拥有更多。在阅读中，海蒂应对困难时的坚强品格，乐于助人的优秀品质，以及她她热爱生活，热爱自然的纯真感情，深深地感动了我，教育了我。
夜很静，我怅惘灰天，陷入了深深的沉思：我在要求父母的同时，也要检讨一下自己，争取给父母创造一个像海蒂一样具有完美人格的优秀孩子。
