I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
在那炎炎夏日,要是能到一个开满荷花的湖边欣赏荷花,在观赏荷花时,还有微风拂面,湖面上漾起一条条细细的波纹――这可是骄阳似火的夏天的一大享受啊!
这不,今天爸爸说要带我去梁园玩。梁园,到底是什么呢?我心里升起了一个大大的问号。到了梁园,我才知道梁园是一个大大的院子。
这个院子可真大呀!里面的景色非常美丽。难道不是吗?荷香小榭有很多很多的荷花,那么艳丽,那么迷人;在很远就能闻到它的香味。荷花的一边有一个小凉 亭,凉亭的中间有一块大树雕,上面雕着百鸟归巢。韵桥上也有一个凉亭,只不过在桥的中间罢了。但韵桥原桥已在清末民初时倒塌了。韵桥的这次重建是按原桥的 结构以及式样重建的。湖中石形状千姿百态……梁园处处尽显大自然的生机,这一点,不难看出,绕着湖走一圈就明白了。除此之外,梁园还有好多奇景呢,但我一 时也找不了这么多,留着下次再找吧!最后,我老大不情愿地走出了梁园的大门。因为梁园的景色那么美,干嘛不多呆一会儿再走呢?
啊,梁园真美!
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
去年暑假,我去了北京,游览北京城作文。那儿非常好玩,下面让我来介绍一下吧!故宫是一个闻名世界的旅游景点,它占地6875000平方米,分为999间房子。
每间屋子都是木质结构,有精美的雕刻,例如:人、马、桃花等,每个雕刻都非常逼真。屋顶的四角都有一个立体雕刻,一般都是龙、马、老虎,每个雕刻都活灵活现,像真的一样,这说明我国劳动人民有着高超的'技艺。故宫里最豪华的房间是皇宫,金碧辉煌。皇宫正中间是皇上坐的龙椅,龙椅上雕刻着一幅精美的梅花图。
但因为不能接近,我只好远远的观看。北京的颐和园也很出名,我和几个小朋友在长廊上追逐,很开心。长廊顶上有许多画,让人既看不完,也百看不厌,有鸭子戏水、小儿玩球等。园中的湖面上波光粼粼,远处是大片的荷花,荷叶碧绿碧绿的,好像接着天,无穷无尽,令人赏心悦目。北京还有世界八大奇迹之一——长城。我登上了八达岭长城,放眼望去,只见千山一碧,长城就像一条巨龙,在群山之间蜿蜒盘旋,根本就看不到尽头,真是壮观极了
。我不懂的是:长城都建在陡峭的山坡上,我们古代的劳动人民是如何搬运一吨多重的石头的呢?毫无疑问,他们是用智慧搬运的。北京城是祖国的首都,也是最美丽的城市!
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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