中考英语作文必备八十字【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文必备八十字【二】
长征是一部厚重的史书，更是一部耐人寻味的经典。这是人类史上一个伟大的壮举!
翻开厚重的史书，踏寻红色足迹，书写红色的理想、信仰：
长征苦，最苦的是翻雪山，今天人们也把登山当成体验长征精神的重要方式。然而，80年前红色大军的雪山之行，却无疑是人类历史上最悲壮的行军。
1935年6月中旬，红三军团翻越夹金山，一座主峰海拔4950多米的大雪山。这里山岭逶迤，终年积雪，空气稀薄，被称为“连鸟儿也难飞过”的神山。年仅19岁的谢振华与战士们一起艰难地一步一步往上走。夜越来越深，雪越来越大，战士们个个都变成雪人，整个队形好似一条银蛇!艰苦已经到了人的生理承受极限，是后人难以想象的!在这个时候，谢振华鼓舞大家说：“为了受苦受难的老百姓，为了能让他们翻身解放，为民打天下!一个人，一个军队，一个国家，任何时候都要有信仰，有理想，有精神!如果实在冷得不行，大家就人靠人挤在一起，用体温相互取暖。”
极度疲劳的战士们睡着了，第二天醒来时却发现有的战士已经冻了。雪山的天气像孙猴子的脸说变就变，刚才天气还好好的，万里无云，顷刻间就狂风大作，好多个战友被吹出十几米，直接像炮弹一样飞出去，在冰崖下没了踪影;有的却被陷在冰穴里活活冻饿……谢振华和红军战士们面对山高岭秃，朔风凛冽和冰雪覆盖的高山，用超乎想象的毅力和艰辛终于战胜了雪山!
课后我阅读了著名将军谢振华的战斗故事：四渡赤水，巧夺娄山关，再占遵义城……这些罕见、惊天动地的'人间壮举，谢振华将军都亲身经历过……
谢振华将军和红军战士们视如归、强烈的爱国主义精神已经深深地震撼了我的灵魂!长征精神永存在每个人心
对于我们新的一代来说，就是以长征精神来鼓舞自己，努力学习科学文化知识，在困难面前绝不低头，以祖国的兴衰为己任，为祖国的美好明天而奋斗，让国家更加强盛。
让我们携起手来，一起书写崭新历史，奏响未来更有力的强音吧!
中考英语作文必备八十字【三】
长征，一部读不完的书。
当数万红军踏上征途，近代逐个正处于生存亡的历史关口。红军长征以慷慨悲壮的战，绝处逢身的转折，感怀温暖的情谊，悲喜传奇的记录将长征这部惊心动魄的壮丽诗篇呈现在读者眼前。
直到今天，红军战士那“抛头颅，撒热”的壮志情怀，还让我们记忆犹新。红军跋山涉水、爬冰卧雪、草根果腹、皮带充饥、战湘江、四渡赤水、飞夺泸定桥、转战乌蒙山、强渡嘉陵江、激战独树镇都撒满了红军战士的遍地热。
长征时期，发生了一个又一个动人、感人的故事，我较为了解的一个故事叫《一袋干粮》。它讲述了一个13岁的小红军小兰在随部队一起前进的时候，好不容易得到了一袋干粮，却在过一座桥时为照顾一位伤员不慎把自己的那袋掉入河中冲走了。她为了大家有足够的干粮吃，坚持没告诉他们。为了装成没事发生一样，她拔了许多野菜塞进挎包，塞得鼓鼓的。不久，她的身体就不行了，在护士长发现她吃野菜和挎包中的“干粮”的事后，大家才知道事情的真相，于是大家每人分了一点干粮给她让她到了家的温暖……故事虽小，内涵不小。这些点点滴滴的细节，却能够反映红军战士们的优秀品质——不怕苦、坚强、无私、热心……一个小兰尚且如此，可想而知，我们伟大的红军整支队伍的品质了。
作为少先队员的我们不得不被红军顽强的毅力，强烈的爱国主义精神所打动。然而我们能做更多的就是努力学习科学文化知识，在困难面前决不低头。我们也不能陶醉在祖先创造的业绩中了，而是要自强、自立，创造二十一世纪的伟业。这是一定要做到的，也是完全能够做到的!
我们从红军长征中收获了坚强、智慧、勇敢、自信、顽强、团结……那么，我们我们就要将这些品德付诸与祖国的建设中去。把自己的成长、成材同祖国前途命运紧密地联系起来。立爱国之志，成报国之材。我们的过家将成为世界的强国，我们的民族将成为宇宙的骄子，让我们携起手来，书写崭新的历史，奏响未来更有力的强音!
中考英语作文必备八十字【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
