上海八下期中考英语作文【一】
今天我起得特别早，特别兴奋，因为我和妈妈要去我梦寐以求的上海迪士尼游乐园乐园。
迪士尼游乐园乐园的门口有一个很大的喷泉，喷泉中间有一条用石头雕成的巨大鲸鱼，它喷射出来的水柱上有一个踩着冲浪板的米奇，忽上忽下在冲浪。四周是形态各异，生动有趣的卡通造型。
一进入大门，哇！迪士尼游乐园乐园真漂亮啊！到处是一座座的城堡，简直像来到了童话般的王国，妈妈赶紧拿相机给我拍照留念。但我没敢停留太久，因为还有更多的精彩在等着我。
进入大门后，我先去了明日世界，玩了喷气背包飞行器、巴斯光年星级营救、创极速光轮，还跟史迪奇合了影。创极速光轮实在太刺激了，不仅速度快，还360度旋转，妈妈吓得叫声连连。我倒是还想再玩一次呢。
接着去了梦幻世界，玩了小飞侠天空奇遇、晶彩奇航、七个小矮人过矿山车。“晶彩奇航”让我印象深刻，乘在一条小船里，穿过不同风格的地点，两旁布满各种各样的小人偶，载歌载舞，整个过程十分有趣。
第三站是探险岛，为了玩雷鸣山漂流，我们排了两个小时的队伍，妈妈说这是对我意志的考验。挺好玩的，值得！
我还观看了好几场演出，但最震惊我的是晚上的烟花“夜光幻影秀”。绚丽的灯光与烟花将迪士尼游乐园城堡点缀得格外美丽，让我大饱眼福。
这一天，多么难忘，又多么让人流连忘返！
上海八下期中考英语作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
上海八下期中考英语作文【三】
今年暑假，妈妈带我到上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。我怀着激动的心情来到了这个梦寐以求的地方。
进入规模庞大的迪士尼乐园，我们顺着熙熙攘攘的人流，看到了可爱的白雪公主和七个小矮人、顽皮的冰雪奇缘雪宝，体验了惊险刺激的游乐项目。其中，有两个游乐项目给让我记忆犹新。
第一个项目是上海迪士尼乐园的“七个小矮人矿山车”。当这8个左弯右倒、绿色炫彩的字映入眼帘时，我心里有点兴奋。矿山车看上去特别惊悚，虽然不时地听到车上的游客们传来一阵阵剧烈的“惨叫”声，但是我想玩的诱惑还是战胜了我的恐惧。等待漫长的2个小时后，终于轮到我们了。我刚坐进过矿山车里，两手就开始发麻，手心冒汗，后背发凉。“伙伴们，Let’sgo！”一声令下，过山车启动了，它以45度的倾斜向下坡飞驶去，两边的树丛飞一般地向后倒退。我紧紧抓住把手，身体微微向下伏卧，心脏似乎都要跳出来了。过山车时而穿越高山、直入云宵；时而弯弯曲曲，伸向远方。最后一个90度的下落，吓得我连连尖叫。突然，矿山车进了一个山洞，黑暗中闪烁着亮光，眼前展现出七个小矮人挖矿的场景。他们吹着口哨，哼着歌儿，快活地劳动着。瞧，哪些闪闪发光的宝石，绿的、红的、黄的、紫的、蓝的，就是他们的劳动成果。穿过瀑布，矿山车缓缓停下。我哆哆嗦嗦地走下矿山车，三步并做两步离开了矿山区域。
第二个项目是上海迪士尼乐园的“小飞象”。妈妈带着我来到了“奇想花园”主题园区的游乐项目――小飞象，与它一起翱翔蓝天。排队1个小时后，我坐上了小飞象椅。随着动听的旋律悄然钻进耳朵，小飞象徐徐升起，我的心情也渐渐平静下来。美丽的公主城堡跳入我的眼帘，微风吹来，满是巧克力浓郁的香气，沁人心脾；满身的汗水瞬间消散，不见了踪影。远处的天空上，粉红色的晚霞在微黄的天空上唱着离别歌，月亮姐姐正踏着轻快的步伐上路了。
不知不觉，夜幕降临，我们依依不舍地离开了乐园。回头望去，烟花绽放，迪士尼乐园的夜晚在璀璨的烟花照射下显得更加美丽、动人！
上海八下期中考英语作文【四】
上海迪士尼乐园是中国第一个，亚洲第三个，世界第六个迪士尼主题乐园。它是一个代表着憧憬、希望与童心的奇幻城堡，是我一直梦想的地方。
刚进大门，我们就先看见一座大钟塔，钟面上印着米奇的图像，米奇的两只手竟就是时针和分针，米奇好像就是这个乐园里时间的守护者。
我们来到了神秘的“米奇大街”。仔细观察，我发现建筑的每一层都会比下面一层矮一些。因此才会产生一种奇妙的感觉：我变高了！
走完“米奇大街”，经过“迪士尼小镇”，我们到了“明日世界”。“明日世界”里有在空中飞旋的喷气背包飞行器，有充满互动的巴斯光年星际营救，还有《星球大战》系列的精彩电影片段欣赏……
但我还是玩了全球迪士尼乐园中速度最快的过山车之一——创极速光轮。我排了两个小时的队，终于轮到了我。门打开了，里面灯火一片，赛车沿着轨道停了下来，我坐了上去。当广播发出“三、二、一、零”的声音后。赛车“咻”的一声飞驰起来，顿时眼前一片漆黑，风从我耳边“呼呼”地吹过，速度快得我都无法呼吸。赛车一会儿快，一会儿慢；一会儿向左，一会儿向右；一会儿往上，一会儿往下，翻来覆去地左揺右晃。过程中，不断有人发出刺耳的尖叫。我却轻松极了，感觉就像在驾驶着一辆属于自己的赛车。
出了“明日世界”，我又去玩了“梦幻世界”、“奇想花园”、“宝藏湾”和“探险岛”里的各种游乐项目。
到了晚上八点半，我们还观看了城堡上精彩的烟花表演，我觉得自己收获满满。
上海迪士尼乐园之旅真是一次充满创造力、冒险精神和快乐的旅途！
上海八下期中考英语作文【五】
Shanghai Disneyland will be open soon, as the day is so close, there are all kinds of trial run information released. The public is so looking forward to it and they want to have the honor become the first visitors. While after scanning the released information, they feel unsatisfied.
上海迪士尼乐园很快就要开放了,由于距离开放日子是如此的接近,各种各样的试行信息发布了出来。公众是如此的期待,他们希望能有荣幸成为第一批游客。然而在浏览了发布信息后,他们感到不满意。
The first is about the high entrance ticket. According to the average ticket of about 400 RMB, a family always need to pay at least for 3 persons, which means it takes them more than 1000 RMB. It is only the lowest budget for the local visitors, while for the nonlocal visitors, they need to pay for the hotel, which is a great expense.
第一个是关于高价格的门票。根据平均一张门票约400元,一个家庭总是需要支付至少3人,这意味着他们需要支付超过1000元人民币。然而最低的预算只是对于当地游客来说,而对于外地游客,他们需要支付酒店,这是一笔巨大的开销。
The second is the food in Disneyland. The offcial website has listed the price that offered in the amusement park. A beef burger with cheese is 80 RMB, a child-sized hot dog is 60 RMB and so on. Many people think it is such high price for them to pay. In that way, a family only pays for the food will cost more than 500 RMB!
第二个是迪斯尼乐园的食物。官方网站列出了游乐园提供的食物价格。一个牛肉汉堡和奶酪是80元,一个儿童的热狗是60元等等。许多人认为这是很高的价格。这样的话,一个家庭光支付食物就要超过500元!
The trial run of Shanghai Disneyland exposes many problems and the public concerns about the price. Maybe adjusting the price can attracts more tourists.
上海迪士尼乐园的试行反应了许多问题，公众关心的是价格。也许调整价格可以吸引更多的游客。
上海八下期中考英语作文【六】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
上海八下期中考英语作文【七】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
