社会热点类作文600字初中生【一】
正能量，什么是正能量?正能量就是助人为乐、拾金不昧，在我的身边，就有这样一股正能量，它深深的影响着我。
在我家门前的公路上，一辆电动车因为转弯的速度过快，发生了侧翻，电动车上的现金散落一地，路过的人见了，纷纷弯腰捡钱，电动车上的阿姨被电动车压得不能动弹，见到路人们弯腰捡钱，她很伤心，因为，那毕竟是她辛辛苦苦地工作、劳动了一年，所得到的，现在却被路人们捡了去。
这时，我在捡钱的`人群中，发现了一个熟悉的身影，仔细一看，原来是我的邻居王大爷，他是个孤寡老人，无儿无女，每个月只能靠政府发的养老金过日子，我看王大爷手里拿着捡来的现金，向电动车上的阿姨走去，我原本以为他会把钱占为己有，没想到，王大爷却把捡来的钱全部还给了电动车上的阿姨，路人们也纷纷排着队把捡来的钱全部还给了电动车上的阿姨，并拨打了120急救电话，这一幕，令电动车上的阿姨非常感动，她以为自己一年的工资就要化为乌有了，没想到，大家又把捡到的钱还给了她。
王大爷走到她的身边，说：“年轻人，点一点，有没有少了钱?”电动车上的阿姨点了点，两万七千元钱，一分不少，完璧归赵的还给了她，电动车上的阿姨激动地说：“谢谢，谢谢大家!”这时，120来到了现场，医护人员将电动车上的阿姨抬上了车，送往医院做进一步检查。
我身边的这股正能量，我会继续将它传递下去，我相信，只要人人献出一点爱，世界会变的更加美好，正能量一定能给这个世界带来无尽的力量，无尽的希望，就像水融入着水，光簇拥着光。
社会热点类作文600字初中生【二】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
社会热点类作文600字初中生【三】
“传播正能量”是最近风靡全国的一句话。那么对于我们小学生来说，到底什么是真能量呢?
我觉得正能量是友善，“最美妈妈”吴菊萍用自己的行动告诉世界：友善的力量是巨大的，是惊人的，有时甚至超过了我们的想象。
20__年的某一天，浙江省杭州市的某个住宅里，由于家长的疏忽，2岁女童妞妞爬上了10楼的窗台，手抓栏杆向下张望，半个身子已经吊在了窗户外。随时有高空坠落的危险，就在人们绝望之际，一位女士伸开双臂，在小女孩落下的那一刹那，接住了孩子。“砰!”沉重的一声，女士和孩子均重重跌倒在草地上，两人都没了声息。经医院诊断，那位女士的伤势非常严重，左手臂骨断了三截，有骨头断端戳出皮肤。
她就是杭州某公司的员工吴菊萍。
吴菊萍的壮举，感动了无数人。无数网名为之动容，称其为“最美妈妈”，并通过各种方式表达对吴菊萍的敬意。
在“最美妈妈”用爱托举生命的感动中，在素不相识的人们护佑生命的爱心接力中，我们可以感受到人间向善的力量，这就是正能量!
我觉得，正能量还是诚信。诚信是社会道德的风向标，是公民的第二个“身份证”。但在21世纪的今天，我国诚信缺失的现象日渐增多，以至于出现了某种程度的诚信危机，有的人丢失了诚信，工作也随之而去，有的人丢失了诚信，使企业倒闭破产。而有的人因为诚信，获得来之不易的工作机会，有的人因为诚信，拥有了数不甚数的财富。诚信是一列开往成功和幸福的列车，是一把可贵的金钥匙，也是一种取之不尽用之不竭的智慧。诚信是正能量，是不可或缺的正能量。
我觉得，正能量还包括很多很多，让我们行动起来，让青春正能量遍布整个世界吧!
社会热点类作文600字初中生【四】
都说人生就像一辆列车，你永远都不知它会开往何方，是否合你心意，旅途中的风景千变万化，但你的心房只有那么一点，那就让我们独留正能量于心中，使你有信心，有勇气走下去。
最近，我在读《红楼梦》，一见面便是“身体面庞虽怯弱不胜，却有一段自然的态度”的林黛玉。她身子骨不好，偏又争强好胜，有时更是扭曲了别人的好意，自己郁闷的心肝疼，内心里总是阴暗的。最终一件一件她所认为的都被她留在心底，不能忘怀的坏人、坏事，让她走向了绝路。如果她的心里能多留些美好的回忆，眼里能多看看这个世界正能量的一面，又何至于失去了留在这世界的信心。在泥潭中，心里尽想些负能量的事，从而越陷越深，无法自拔，最终溺在里面。
再说《红楼梦》里的刘姥姥，她是身份最普通的底层人民，但她活到了最后。就是因为她无论遇到什么事，都尽可能地去跨过这个坎儿，她想着“谋事在人，成事在天”。她有了盼头，于是不管可能性大不大，她都去尝试。她想着孙儿吃糖葫芦的模样，想着来年的丰收。心里有了能量，身体就有了动力。她想着好事，有了希望，有了好心情，于是别人也愿意做个好人，救她于泥潭之中。
林黛玉和刘姥姥都是一本书里的人物，她们一个主角，一个配角，一个有着好身份，过着别人梦寐以求的好日子;一个有着好身体，过着有好心情，有着希望的穷日子。她们一个心中永远充斥着悲伤，一个对生活充满了期盼。
有时，将每个人、每件事想的好些，将美好的风景存进你的心房，让心中充满正能量。你充满希望，坐在列车上也会轻松些，期望看到的风景也会多些!
