Country Garden and Me
On the way from Panyu City to Shunde City and approaching the conjunction point of both cities, a big advertisement board of the infamous Country Garden will catch your eyes. And on the board, a lovely girl gently holds a little white pigeon.
She looks at everybody with a sweet smile. Who is this girl? Let me tell you later. Country Garden is located at the Beijao town, Shunde City of Guangdong Province. Ten years ago when my Dad and Mom took me as a baby to Guangzhou, it was a wasteland here. But what does this piece of wasteland look like nowadays? Country Garden has been developed and enlarged rapidly on the ground of this land, and a great number of high-quality houses and apartments have been built up within the garden. Over the past decade, other nine country gardens with various unique designs have been erasing around the great city of Guangzhou. The construction and management of several gardens have engaged the devoted contributions from my Dad and Mom.
Country Garden has grown up together with me, and I am one of the witnesses of its growth and development.
开篇句:Aboutnine O'clock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件
表达方式有:记叙(叙述)、议论、抒情、描写、说明
1、议论:是引发读者思考,点明人物或事件的`意义,突出中心,升华主题,起到画龙点睛的作用。
记叙文结尾的议论:画龙点睛地揭示人物和事件的意义,以深化主题。
段与段之间的议论,能起到承上启下和突出中心的妙用。
2、抒情:是抒发作者真挚深沉的情感,引发读者的感情共鸣,使文章具有强大的感染力。
记叙文中的抒情有直接抒情,有间接抒情。
直接抒情是直抒胸臆,直接抒发自己对事物的思想感情。
间接抒情包括借景抒情、融情于叙、融情于议、借物抒情、借梦抒情等
3、说明:是为了简要地解说事物,阐明事理,使所叙之人、事、物更清楚。
线索种类:物线、事线、人线、感情线、时间线、地点线、见闻线
线索判断技巧:看题目,看议论抒情句,看多次出现的字眼
作用:是贯穿全文的脉络,把文中的人物和事件有机地连在一起,使文章条理清楚、层次清晰。
示例:
(1)以具体事物或事物的特征为线索。 (2)以人物或人物的特征为线索。
(3)以中心事件为线索。 (4)以思想感情为线索。
(5)以时间推移或空间变换为线索。 (6)以“我”的所见所闻为线索。
主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasn't long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
结尾句:Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedid't retreat.
扩展句:1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
1、划线句的作用
答题格式:结构上承上启下(——结合文章内容,如何承上,如何启下);内容上为下文写什么铺垫;与下文什么对比,突出什么的……的特点;揭示了……的中心;语言上运用……修辞手法,表达了什么的……特点(感情)
2、一句话在文中的作用
(1文首:开篇点题;渲染气氛(记叙文、小说),埋下伏笔(记叙文、小说),设置悬念(小说作铺垫;总领下文;
(2文中:承接上文、引出下文、承上启下(过渡)、为后文作铺垫、埋下伏笔
(3文末:点明中心、深化主题、照应开头
3、评价、赏析一句话应从两个方面入手
(1)评写作特色、语言特色,如用了什么修辞手法、表现手法,语言或生动或优美或讲求对称或准确严密……
(2)再评思想内涵,即阐明这一句表达了什么观点,给你什么感受、启迪、教育……
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