9-12月雅思作文【一】
时间状语和地点状语，都是你的扩句好朋友，不信我们来看：
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语
即使是状语，也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。
9-12月雅思作文【二】
我双手撑到阳台上，面对黑絮般幽深的夜晚，我等待月出。
面对浩渺的天际，东方有个闪亮的光点，模糊不清；渐渐地，这个光点越来越亮，越来越大，接着，月亮露出了唇角……哦！她还是个害羞的姑娘呢！
蓝色的“浪花”簇拥着，露出小半截的月姑娘睁不开眼。逐渐，这位“骄小姐”好不容易挣脱云彩，亮了起来。转眼间，月姑娘以魔术般的露出了脸庞……这时，皎洁的明月冲破云层。冉冉升上深蓝的天空，向大地洒下一片银辉，给人添加了无数的
神秘感。
在银河这块舞池里，云朵们甘愿成为场景；星星们成为月亮的伴舞；他们簇拥着这位出色的舞蹈家，尽情的跳着，变化着……瞧！月，一会儿如天使一般可爱，露珠般清纯；一会儿又如魔术般可爱！
多少年来，无数的人为之赞叹，为之神往……
我多么喜爱这美丽、清纯而又神秘的月姑娘。
9-12月雅思作文【三】
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做：Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法（exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非，然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
9-12月雅思作文【四】
一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试，不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家，过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例：Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
因此，首先考生应了解，举例是一种常见的论述方式，特别在论述某一些比较抽象的话题的'时候（比如文化类或跟艺术相关的话题）。但是，并不是每个段落都需要例证法，举例过多或过分牵强会影响文章的正式感，甚至给考官喋喋不休的感觉。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们要注意以下原则：
9-12月雅思作文【五】
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神，总是在主旨周围绕圈子，不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病，看似八九不离十，却总也不愿把话点破，让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中，因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由，再扩展其结果，这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前，若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”，难免缺乏说服力，但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟，若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”，那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展，点头认同。由此可见，善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼，事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有：Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有：so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
9-12月雅思作文【六】
我双手撑在阳台上，面对黑絮般幽深的'暗夜，我等待夜出。
看着浩渺的天际，东方有一个闪着光的亮点，模糊不清；渐渐地，这个亮点越来越亮，越来越大；接着，月姑娘终于露出了唇角。哦，她真是个害羞的小姑娘！
蓝色的“浪花‘‘相互簇拥着，使已露出小半截的月姑娘睁不开“眼‘，朦朦胧胧；逐渐，这位“娇小姐‘好不容易挣脱了云彩，亮了起来；转眼间，月姑娘已魔术般露出了整个脸庞。这时，皎洁的明月冲破云层，冉冉升上深蓝的天空，向大地洒下一片银辉，给人增添了无数的神秘感。
在银河这块舞池里，云朵们甘愿成为场景，星星们成为月姑娘的舞伴，它们簇拥着这位出色的舞蹈家，尽情地跳着或变换着。瞧！月姑娘，一会儿如天使般活泼，花儿般可爱，露珠般清纯；一会儿如魔术般神秘。
多少年来，无数的人为之赞叹，为之神往。
噢，我多么爱这美丽，清纯而又神秘的月姑娘！！
9-12月雅思作文【七】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
9-12月雅思作文【八】
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.（一项调查显示。。。）
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
