写秋天英语作文五年级【一】
我爱秋天，因为他是收获的季节。
秋天，虽然不像百花盛开的春天那样有魅力，也不像树荫成茂的喜爱谈那样处处充满生机，但它却以诱人的秋色和金黄的果实，吸引着人们。我爱中秋节的夜晚皎洁的月光，我爱看公园里美丽的秋菊，我爱排着队伍的大雁南去。
秋天百花凋谢了。但菊花迎着灿烂的阳光盛开，怒放的菊花有黄的、白的、紫的……像龙飞像凤舞，在微风中亭亭玉立、五彩缤纷。秋天，树叶逐渐黄了，但是松柏却依然那么苍翠，充满生机。满山的枫叶红了，红的像晚霞。他们像在和寒秋挑战，真是霜叶红玉二月花!
我爱秋天，我爱秋天多次多彩的景色!
写秋天英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写秋天英语作文五年级【三】
我爱秋天，因为它不仅是收获的季节，也是忙碌的季节。
路边的大树下，是什么进进出出，忙个不停？原来是蚂蚁。它们排成两列队伍，朝一大块水果“进军”。它们每个用尖尖的牙咬下一块，搬回去。慢慢地，说过被搬完了。它们又去寻找心的目标，准备过冬的粮食。
食品店边上，是什么叽叽喳喳，跳来跳去？原来是麻雀。它们低着小小的头，用两条小腿灵活地跳着。一边跳，一边用黄色的小嘴啄着饼干渣。它们的肚子圆滚滚的，可是还在吃。
公园里面，是什么藏藏躲躲，来回转圈？原来是松鼠。它们一会儿跳上松树，一会又蹿下来，怀里抱着一堆松果。一会儿，又把松果藏了起来。它不停地忙来忙去，没有一刻闲工夫。
秋天里，落叶告诉人们，一年的结束即将来临。在迟来的晨光中，上班的人们脚步越发急促；早到的黑夜中，在办公楼中纷纷亮着灯光，未下班的人们匆匆地筹划一年的总结和明年的规划。而我们要赶快学完心课，复习功课，迎接考试。在正午，爷爷、奶奶们带着小朋友在外面晒太阳，珍惜一年中最后的温暖阳光。
我爱秋天。大家都在忙碌着。我们都在和时间赛跑。秋天让我懂得了要珍惜时间，珍惜生活。
写秋天英语作文五年级【四】
拉开窗帘，打开窗户，凉爽的秋风瞬间吹打在我的脸上，使我一下子精神起来。舒爽的凉风过后，天渐渐阴沉下来，不一会儿便下起了小雨。“这下好了，今天应该是不用出门了。吃过早饭，我便回到自己的房间写作业。听到窗外劈里啪啦的雨声，我并不感到烦躁，经过了一个多雨的夏季，我已经听懂了那雨的美妙韵律，于是我打开窗子，洗耳恭听那凉爽的秋雨奏响的乐章。
窗子一开，美妙的声音扑面而来，说它是大自然的奏鸣曲也不为过。我静静地坐在窗口，陶醉其中。我听到了水滴落地的声音，小鸟鸣叫的`声音，楼下小猫的叫声，还混杂着树叶在雨中飘落的刷刷声。我就这样一直听着，一直欣赏着。
中午过后，天放晴了，雨后的天空显得格外蓝。也许是未到深秋，树木的落叶并不很多。人们都说，一场秋雨一场寒，街上行走的人们已经添加了外套。一向喜欢宅在家中的我，此时也忍不住走出家门，来到楼下，尽情地呼吸秋雨之后新鲜的空气，相比刚刚过去的夏季，此时的气温让人感觉非常舒适。漫步在街边的公园，树叶上积攒的豆大的雨珠从微黄的树叶上滴滴滑落，迎着阵阵凉爽的秋风夹杂着泥土的芳香，真是让人心旷神怡。
秋天的一阵风，吹走了夏季的炎热，秋天的一阵雨，滋润着广阔的大地。
秋天是一幅美丽的图画，向人们展示了一个清朗而充满希望的世界。
秋天是一个既美丽又让人感到舒适的季节，我爱秋天！
