学生摘抄优秀作文评语【一】
当我翻开《假如给我三天光明》，我心里是三分惊喜七分好奇。然而当我翻完这本书中每珍贵的一页，我心中是汹涌彭湃的，又是惆怅万千的。它带给我的是惊讶，是感动，更是一种强大的精神力量震撼着我。在整整的87年无光、无声、无语的孤独岁月里，竟磨练出一个如此勇敢、坚强，有着顽强的求生意志的非凡女子。对于一个常人来说，三天——也就是72个小时，能办成的事根本就寥寥无几。但是对于海伦来说，三天似三十年。如果她能拥有三天的光明，她的心里又会有多么满足，多么快乐……
有谁能想象年幼的海伦面对自己又聋又哑又瞎的现实也曾经堕落过，暴躁过，为上帝的无情而忿忿不平，但正是因为她在老师，莎莉文的帮助下，正确了自己乐观向上的人生态度，并依靠着自己对生命的渴望和对光明的追求，竟奇迹般地重新振作起来，用那仅有的却又蕴藏着不可思议的力量的精神去创造更多的奇迹！年复一年，日复一日，海伦成功了，她终于成功了！她借助了自己的双手看到了美丽的世界，听到了绚彩的世界。海伦终于又创造了一个奇迹……
海伦的不幸和生活在黑暗中的痛苦是我一辈子都无法的，但她对生命的永不放弃是令世人刻骨铭心的。我相信，即使在一百年、一千年后，还会有人提到海伦·凯勒，还会回忆起这个创造生命奇迹的女士，诉说着生命的珍贵与短暂……
海伦的生命是非常短暂的，同时也是一种可惜。而我们这些花样年华的青少年有着青春美好的时光，难道就让它白白流逝吗？海伦·凯勒说过："假如我有三天光明，我将把这三天分为三个阶段：第一天，我要看人，他们的善良、温厚与友谊使我的生活值得一过。第二天，我要在黎明起身，去看黑夜变为白昼的动人奇迹。第三天，我要在现实世界里，在从事日常生活的人们中间度过平凡的一天。"海伦的三天就如此而已，可我们的时间和机遇还很多，可以创造美好的生活。光明对我们来说不是奢望，声音也不是可遇而不可求。对我们来说，并不缺乏身体上的组织结构，我们需要的是意志上的顽强，不向命运投降的、自强不息的精神！更重要的是要拥有一颗积极、乐观、敢于创造奇迹的心！
上天赐予我们眼睛，是让我们看清这个世界；上天赐予我们思想，是让我们改变世俗，让精神世界更美好；而上天赐予我们双手，是为了让我们拥抱未来，创造出生命的奇迹！
学生摘抄优秀作文评语【二】
"Celebrity biography" perfectly confirms the old adage of Chinese people: the people of ancient and modern times are not only talented but also resilient. Romain rolland holds the three artists in their respective fields together to restore the high morality of 20th century literature and restore its colorful character. Beethoven from flash light to enjoy the reputation of the peak to the bottom of your life, poor tragic from childhood to old age in the pursuit of happiness the twists and turns of life, just as the Roman. Roland described as "his whole life was like a thunderstorm day". From it, I realized that Beethoven has always been in the struggle against the fate, and ideological struggle, even though he gives a person a sense of pride, but his heart a fragile, a strong, are people who do not know him unable to dig. The passion for creating the perfect song, the dedication to seeking joy, and the perfect encounter, made his life become a force of nature. A primitive force between the rest of the ingredients of that kind of engagement with nature, the Homer epic spectacle ", he in his own misery in casting, joy "with joy" pain is sufficient to enrich his life. Michelangelo was not "he is powerful, he was born to fight, to conquer, and he conquered -- he did not win." That's not what he's looking for." He was a spiritual aristocrat, a genius, but he was troubled by genius, and his spirit and soul were powerless. This crazy spark exists in an overly effeminate body and mind that cannot control its terrible life. From this I can see that his life is a sacred pain
As long as we understand the "celebrity biography to our high sublimation, and make the hero of the blood is in front of us at the moment, the hero of the red flag flutters on our heads, we will feel slowly, in the people from the sublime, farewell, lofty and the mediocre society, our soul has also been sublimed as a.
