这是指文章的描写功夫。好的记叙文应该充满着生动形象的描写,精细入微的刻画:人物的语言、行心理,事件的动态,景物的变化……可想而知,,这样的文章一定会获得高分。
如《打工》一文,在描写语言上就很见工夫:“我努力地干着与我年龄极不相称的活,拚命地抬起二三百斤的铁笼。超重的负荷压得我浑身骨骼‘吱吱’地响,我咬紧牙努力地把自己的脊背弯成一张弓,两只脚命地扣紧地面,两只眼球鼓成了弹丸,时刻都有射出眼眶的可能。太阳直射在我身上,背上的皮肤仿佛被烤焦了,随时都有撕裂的可能。汗水淌进了我的眼里,辣得睁不开眼,而鞋子里早已像和泥一般滑,我就这样拚命地撑着……”这段文字通过生动形象的描写,精细入微的刻画,传神地写出了“我”打工的体验,充分表现了作者高超的语言表达能力。
保安人员英语对话50句
1、先生/女士,您好!
Goodmorning/Goodafternoon/GoodeveningSir/Madam
2、请问有什么可以帮您?
HowcanIhelpyou?/MayIhelpyou?
3、请您出示您的住户证。
PleaseshowmeyourIDcard.
4、请问您去哪个单元?
WhichApartmentareyougoingfor?
5、不好意思,我不懂英文。
Iamsorry,Idon’tunderstandEnglish.
6、请问您会中文吗?
DoyouspeakChinese?
7、您有翻译或者有会中文的朋友吗?
DoyouhaveafriendwhospeaksChinese?
8、请您在登记本上填写您要去的单元。
PleasewritedowntheApartmentnumberonourregistrationbook.
9、谢谢您的合作。
Thankyouforyourcooperation.
10、请您用对讲机或电话和您要去的单元联系一下好吗?
Please,canyouuseyourphonetocontactthehost/proprietor?
11、能否请您要去单元的客户下来带您进去。
Couldyoupleaseaskthehost/proprietortocomedownandtakeyoutotheapartment?/Pleaseaskyourfriendtocomeandleadyoutotheapartment?
12、请您稍等,我找同事带您进去。
Pleasewaitforamoment,Iwillaskmycolleaguestotakeyoutotheapartment.
13、您好,需要我帮您提这些物品吗?
Hello,doyouneedmyhelptocarrythesethings?
14、地上有水,请小心地滑。
Theflooriswet,pleasebecareful./Caution,wetfloor!
15、抱歉,这个情况我不是很清楚。
Iamsorry;Iamnotsoclearaboutthissituation.
16、请您稍候,我联系服务中心。
Pleasewait;Iwillcontacttheservicecenter.
17、请您和服务中心联系。
Pleasecontacttheservicecenter.
18、不好意思,小区内禁止单车、电
动车进入。
Iamsorry;bicyclesandelectro-carareforbiddenintheresidence.
19、不好意思,这里不能停车。
Iamsorry,parkinghereisnotallowed.
20、请您将车辆停放到指定位置。
Please,parkyourcarintheappointedparkinglot.
21、请您关好车门车窗。
Pleasemakesureyouclosethecardoorsandwindows.
22、请不要摆放贵重物品在车内。
Please,donotleaveyourvaluablesinthecar.
23、车辆可以停放在(具体位置根据服务中心自行制定)
Carscanbeparkedin(definiteaspecificplaceinaccordancewiththeservicecenter
24、请您配合我们的`工作。
Pleasecooperatewithus./Weneedyourcooperation.
25、真不好意思,这个是小区的规定。
Iamtrulysorry;thisistheruleoftheresidence.
26、为了安全,请你拴好狗绳。
Forsafety,pleasefastenyourdog’stie.
27、如果您有什么疑问,可以咨询服务中心。
Ifyouhaveanyproblem,pleasecontacttheservicecenter.
28、服务中心电话是:。
Theservicecenter’stelephonenumberis:
29、您搬出的物品有放行条吗;
Doyouhavethepermissionshiptoremoveitems?
30、请您到服务中心办理放行条。
Pleasegototheservicecentertoapplyforthepermit.
31、请您稍等,我需要核对一下搬出物品。
Pleasewaitforamoment;Ineedtocheckthearticles.
32、这里需要您的签名确认。
Pleasesignhere./Ineedyousignaturehere.
33、您有什么需要我们帮忙的吗?
Doyouneedanyhelpfromus?
34、您可以在这里指出您需要项目。
Youcanindicateallyourneedhere.
35、我要投诉。
Ihaveacomplaint.
36、我要服务中心电话。
Ineedtheservicecenter’stelephonenumber
37、我要找电工帮我维修。
Ineedtofindanelectricianformaintenance.
38、我要找快递。
Ineedanexpressdelivery.
39、我想找人来收废品。
Ineedrecyclingservice.
40、我旁边的住户打扰了我。
Mynextdoorneighborisdisturbingme.
41、我楼上的住户打扰了我。
Myaboveneighborisdisturbingme.
42、我们家的宠物丢失了,请帮我寻找。
Welostourpet,pleasehelpustolookforit.
43、我需要电召出租车。
Ineedtocallataxi.
44、我想找订餐电话。
Ineedtofindtherestaurant’sphonenumberforHome-Delivery-Service.
45、服务中心怎么走?
Howtogettotheservicecenter?
46、我想咨询搬家的事情。
Pleaseconsulttheproceduresofmovingout.
47、我想咨询管理费等费用问题。
Ineedtoconsultaboutthepropertyfee/propertymanagementfee.
48、我想咨询关于会所的问题。
Ineedtoconsulttheproblemabouttheclub.
49、我想咨询游泳池开放的时间。
Ineedtoknowtheopeningtimeoftheswimmingpool.
50、我想咨询收取垃圾的时间。
Ineedtoknowthetimefortherubbishcollecting.
总之,一篇优秀的记叙文,一定是包含了上述因素的。
aboutasto
getacquire(knowledge/skills
offerafford(jobopportunities
expectanticipatechanges/difficulities
solvetackle/grapplewith
raiseelevate/heighten
mostimportantoverriding/override
combinesynthesize
supportuphold(ournationalvalues
deepen
weak
usetoomuch
becauseof
satisfy
learn
finally
right
know
miss
dotogether
boring
balance
difference
prettybutlessuseful
fresh
happenagain
good
difficult
perfect
urgent
sad
many/toomuch
fast-growing
maketrue
should
control
broadenone’shorizon
spendAonB
AisimportanttoB
finishsthby
decidetodo
sthisimportant
finditdifficulttodofuelvfuelconflictssap/one’sconfidencestretchnaturalresourcestothelimitattributeto/ascribetomeet/begearedtoward+sthdrawonothers’experienceendupdoing/endwithmakesensenaildownpassuppitchinsitthroughequilibriumecologicalequilibriumdistinctionnicetiesnoveltyrecurringpaindesirableundesirable:notgoodchallengingflawlesspressingbittermounting/awealthofburgeoningpopulationfulfillbesupposetoholdfasttoone’sdreamexpandone’soutlookdedicateAtoBAbeanessentialingredientof/bepartandparcelof/bethecornerstoneofBexploreeveryavenuetowardmakeitapointtodobeamilepostinbehard-pressedtodo/haveahardtimedoingsth
conflictbeatoddswith
few/littleverylittle,ifany
opposefrownon
befullofbeinundated/saturatedwith
todoharmtobelikelytofallpreyto/bevulnerableto
concerncausegraveconcern/concernshavearisenabout
meanspelldisaster/troublefor
makesthsthAhasrenderBsth
tootosthhasreachedsuchproportionthat/…tothepointwhere…mostimportantmorethananything,/andaboveall
growtheproliferationoffast-food/cybergames
seesthobjectivelyputsthinperspective
thinksthmostimportantit’shardtooverstatethesignificanceofneedsthnecessitate/entail
bedevotedtobebenton/upon
showmirror/embody
differentthewholespectrumof
turningpointbeawatershed
accordingtointheeyesof
affecthinder
ageera
aimtargetv
andalongwith/aswellas
andsoonthelike
appearmushroom/springup/sproutup
applyputintopractice
askconsult
aspectsphere
attachenclose
attracttempt/appealto
audienceviewer
basisfoundation
beabletobecapableto
beconvenientatone’sconvenience
begoodatbeskilledat
behelpfulbeofhelp
beimportantbeofimportance
benearbearoundthecorner
beobviousitgoeswithoutsayingthat…/itisarguablethatberisingskyrocket/rocket/soar
besuretobeboundto
besurprisedatbeamazedat
beuselessbeofnouse
bearbeloadedwith
becauseofdueto
becomefashionablecomeintoafashion
becomehappycheerup
beforeoriginal
buildfound/putup/shape
buyafford
byoneselfallalone
carefulattentive
causeattributeto/leadto
changemodify/shift/fluctuation
changewithvarywith
cheatingdeception
choosefrommakeachoicebetween
clearevident/self-evident
comefromstemfrom/springfrom
comeoutcomeforth
complainplaceacomplaintagainst
considerconvince/figureout/givethoughtto
consider…..importantattachimportanceto/laymuchemphasisuponcontinuegoahead
controlinthegripsof
cooperatejoinhandswith
decidedetermine
deepprofound/far-reaching
dependonhingeupon/counton
dependononeselfliveonone’sown
developcultivate/buildup
difficultybarrier
diligentindustrious
dogoinfor/carryout
dogooddofavor/helpv
dropdecline/ontheebb
eatlessgoonadiet
emphasisputahighvalueon/treasurev/valuev/cherishv
enablefacilitate
encouragespursbonto/motivate
endangerjeopardize
enforcestrengthen
engagemajorin
enjoybecrazyabout
enlargebroaden
enoughadequate
evaluatespeakhighlyof
explainuavelthemysteryof/accountfor/beresponsiblefor
facebefacedwith/faceup
failfrustrate
failurefrustration
fameprestige
famousprominent
famouspeoplegalaxy
feelingpassion/sentiments
findlocate
findoutsortout
finishaccomplish
firelayoff
fixinginstallation
focusoncenteron
forexampleacaseinpoint
foreverpermanent
futureprospective
getacquire/regain
getridofeliminate
givegrant/issue
give/supplyprovide…with
giveattentiontogivepriorityto
globaluniversal
goonbringforward
goalheart’sdesire
goodbeneficial
goodstudentstopstudents
goodsnecessity
greatenormous/dramatic
greatprime/utmost
greetingsregards
growflourish
happinesswell-being
havepossess
havearelationshipwithbeontermswith
hopelookforwardto
hopetodosthbeeagertososth./longtodosthhopefulpromising
ignoreneglect
illnessdisease
importantessential/vita
improveenhance/boost/upgrade
improvementadvance
ingroupsintwosandthrees
includemakeup
increasesoar
influencemold
intendtargettodosth./bemeanttodointerestedcrazy
interestinglywithgreatinterestintroductionprospectus
investigationsurvey
joboccupation/employment
joinmaintain/holdonto
keepmaintain/holdonto
killoneselfcommitsuicide
knowgrasp/beawareof/knowaboutknowledgecommand
leavedepartfrom
likepreference
limitconfine
loadburden
lookaroundexamine
lookforruninto/huntfor
lookup…inreferto
lowerinferior
makenervousplacestrainon
makeprogressmakeleapsin/pressforwardmakesureguarantee
makesurethattoseeitthat…
manyberichin/countless
meetruninto/comeacross
messchaos
necessaryindispensable
needbeinneedof
nothesitatefeelfreetodosth
notknowbeignorantof
number
obvious
occupation
offer
only
outcome
overcome
pass
payattentionto
people
perform
period
与“材料新鲜”一样,内容真实是记叙文的生命保证。那些胡乱编造的所谓“感人”故事,只会让读者反感。有一些同学为了表明自己的“崇高”,文章始终不离“助人为乐、希望工程、捐钱救灾”等,事实上,我们希望社会充满爱,充满关怀,可是我们不希望我们的文章里始终充满假话、充满谎言。
我们作文时应牢记:只有真实的,才是动人的!如果我们一味地为了打动人而胡编乱造所谓的动人故事,只能让阅卷老师反感。当然,我们所说的真实并不是要大家把生活原封不动地照搬上去。我们所谓提倡的“艺术的真实”实际就是在真实生活的基础上进行技巧性的加工,如设置悬念、修饰语言等。它和内容的虚假是完全不同的。
如后面选登的安徽中考满分作文《打工》就完全以真情实感取胜,如果没有真实的体验,是写不出如此传神的细节的。正是这种“真实”的力量打动了阅卷老师。
议论文一般只能有一个中心论点,但有的议论文有多个分论点,而没有中心论点。如,巴甫洛夫《给青年们的一封信》就用分论点对青年们提出了希望。
议论文对论点的要求是:正确、鲜明、集中、一致。即作者的立场、观点、态度和方法应正确;赞成什么,反对什么要旗帜鲜明;中心论点只有一个;论点前后要保持一致。
为此,要注意中心论点的这些特点,看中心论点出现的位置。有的议论文中心论点出现在开头,也有的出现在中间和结尾。
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