写家乡英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写家乡英语作文五年级【二】
国庆节，许多人都喜欢去黄山、庐山、西湖……而我喜欢去我的家乡玩，我的家乡有一个非常漂亮的湖，那就是洪泽湖。
我的家乡在洪泽湖畔。这里风景优美，物产丰富，人杰地灵，是一块漂在水上的黄金土地。
洪泽湖是一幅画，一首诗，一支歌。波光粼粼的湖面，时而波涛滚滚，大浪排天;时而风平浪静，水平如镜。极目远眺，白帆点点，鱼鸥翻飞，机生隆隆，南来北往的运输队，川流不息，左右穿梭的渔船，鱼肥仓满，争相辉映，构成一幅美丽动人的图画。
岸边树木葱茏，百里长堤，有着1800年历史的防洪屏障，宏伟的土堤，壮观的石墙，青翠的绿柳，远远望去，宛如一条移游欲飞的巨型青龙。那茂密的林荫，新鲜的空气，清脆的鸟鸣，和煦的'湖风，人行其中，尤如步入仙境，心旷神怡，流连忘返。
甘泉般的湖水，养育着千百万人民。湖内既有鱼鳖虾蟹，又有鸡鸭鹅鸟，还有各种各样的水植物，朱坝锅贴、黄集羊肉、岔河大米……闻名遐迩。
洪泽湖不仅风景优美、物产丰富，而且还有美丽的传说。
传说 孙悟空大闹天宫后，偷吃了太上老君的仙丹。李老君无法，只得避开孙悟空，架起云头直往西去，想找一个安静的地方炼丹。李老君站在云头看到下面有一座青山，山脚下是一眼望不到边的绿草。老君降落到地上一看，正是洪泽湖南岸的老子山，正好又有一个山洞。李老君就在这老子山采药草炼丹丸，孙悟空急得到处找李老君要仙丹，就是找不到。后来他架起云头直往西下，一看到洪泽湖南岸有一座大山，就降落下来，在山南坡看到一个仙人洞，就进去了，到里面一看李老君正在忙着炼神丹。李老君看到孙悟空，连忙把神丸装到葫芦里，架起云头就往天上跑去。孙悟空紧紧追上，伸手就来抢葫芦。眼看仙丹就要被孙悟空夺走，李老君一气之下举起大铁棒打破葫芦。孙悟空连抓带抢得到几粒神丹，其余的仙丹都落到洪泽湖里去了。鱼、虾、蟹都争着来吃仙丹。从那以后，洪泽湖里的鱼类肉鲜味美，可口好吃，直到现在仍然远近闻名。
我要大声赞叹洪泽湖，真是“此景只应天上有，人间难得几回闻”。
