沈阳英语中考作文分数【一】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
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第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
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第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
沈阳英语中考作文分数【二】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
沈阳英语中考作文分数【三】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
沈阳英语中考作文分数【四】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
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第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
沈阳英语中考作文分数【五】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
沈阳英语中考作文分数【六】
“功夫不负有心人”。终于，在四年级的期中中，她夺得全班第一名，是班里唯一的满分。老师在班会课上表扬了她，使她更加地骄傲自大。
放学后，她碰到了朋友小薇，小薇问：“小美，你为啥这样高兴?”小美骄傲地说：“薇薇，你知道吗?这次考试，我是全班的第一名!”“是吗?”小美惊讶地问，“你得了全班第一名?”“是!”“美美，你真棒!小妹佩服佩服。不过，你可不要太骄傲，这样，你下次就不行喽!再说……”“住嘴!!!”小美恼怒了，“你怎么可以教训我?你算什么!!!”“哦，不不不，我不是这个意思，我是说……”“省了吧!”小美说完，头也不回地走了。
一会儿，她又碰到了朋友芳芳，芳芳也劝她不要骄傲，小美听了，生气极了。
她来到了家门口，妈妈看到她今天如此地高兴，便问：“美子，今天有啥事啊?”“妈妈!”小美大叫，“我是全班第一名!!!”“哦，宝贝儿真乖!你不能骄傲，知道不?”妈妈说。“妈，你就尽管放心好了!”小美胸有成竹的说。小美回到房间，打开电视机，津津有味地看了起来。
结果怎样呢?
期末考试到了，小美满怀信心地走进考场，90分钟的考试她只用半个小时就答完了，她检查都没有检查，就把考卷交给了监考老师。走出考场，她想：出题的老师也太没水平了，竟然出这么简单的.试题，把我当幼儿园的小朋友啊!
成绩揭晓了。小美断定她一定还是第一名，于是在前面找自己的名字。然而，前三名里面没有，前二十名里面也没有……找啊找啊，她在倒数十名里找到了自己，啊!她竟然不及格!全班倒数第五名!再仔细一看，当初被她指责过的同学各个名列前茅;而当初指责别人的她却名落孙山。
故事讲完了。你读了这个故事有什么想法?
学习成绩好是应该鼓励的、应该表扬的。但是，“满招损，谦受益”，不要太过分了，那样只会退步不会进步。
如果有位同学，他的学习成绩比你好，你会怎样?那不要紧，“择其善者而从之，其不善者而不为”嘛!我们要仔细想一想，他到底比你好在那里，自己学习学习，不是很好吗?
若有位同学对你有不满之处，你会虚心接受吗?其实，别人对自己提出的意见，也未必是对你的嘲笑，我们要“有则改之，无则加冕”。
同学们，你做的到吗?
沈阳英语中考作文分数【七】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
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第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
