英语五年级综合作文【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语五年级综合作文【二】
一进大门，展现在你眼前的是一座摇摇晃晃的太平桥，两边的扶手是由铁链做成的，有手指般粗细，长约50多米，人走的地方是用木板铺成的。你走上去，敲在不停的摇晃，似乎要把你甩下河似的。但只要你抓住两边的扶手，一点一点往前走，你肯定不会被桥甩下去的。
离开了惊险的`太平桥，我们来到了射击场。那里枪的子弹可不是一般枪的子弹，而是红外线。只要你瞄准目标，扣一下扳机，就会射出一串红外线，只要你瞄准的目标爆了，就说明你射中了，哈哈！真有意思！
离开了有意思的射击场，我们就来到了整个综合公园里最好玩的海洋馆。里面有海豚、海豹、白鲸等。其中我最喜欢白鲸的救生表演。驯养员和小白鲸一起上场时，驯养员脚下一滑，“扑通”一声，掉下了深深的水池里，观众们发出一声声尖叫，都为他担心，再看那只小白鲸，飞快地游了起来，不一会儿就把驯养员驮上了岸，真是虚惊一场，大家都为白鲸的精彩表演报以热烈的掌声。
综合公园除了以上三个景点，还有许多其它好玩的地方呢！比如地震房展区、小小世界、温室等景点。
啊！多么好玩、多么令人流连忘返的公园呀！
英语五年级综合作文【三】
通过观看这几节《综合实践活动课》案例，我进一步明确了综合实践活动是一门贴近学生自身生活与社会生活，由学生自主实践和探索，体现对知识综合运用的全新课程。综合实践活动可以使学生把生活中感兴趣的问题作为学习的对象，自然地，综合地学习，这种学习是出于自己的兴趣而非老师强加。
综合实践活动的主体是学生，如何真正发挥和体现学生的主体性，综合活动课题的选择尤为重要。综合实践活动课题越贴近生活，贴近学生的，贴近学生的兴趣，贴近社会现实，学生越能够较好的操作，越有积极性。
但并不意味综合实践活动课程强调学生是活动的主体，强调要通过学生的实践来获得直接经验，而不需要老师的指导。教师不是活动的旁观者、组织者、领导者，而且还要与学生共同探究实践的过程。教师的指导任务贯穿学生综合实践的全过程，包括活动中方法的`指导及交流形式和总结整合的指导。在整个综合实践活动过程中最重要的就是要教给学生获取知识的方法，培养学生多种技能。
毫无疑问，任何形式的教学，学生是主体，综合实践活动也不例外。但综合实践活动在一定程度上更注重——“动”，动脑、动手、动口，因此必须千方百计地创设各种有利于实践的环境来促“动”。
综合实践活动也不是培养少数学生的特长活动，同时要面向全体学生。因此，除了“激发兴趣”出发，“鼓励+赞赏”的教学理念是全员参与的重要保障，给予每个学生自主活动的机会，鼓励每一个学生大胆展示自己，赞赏每一个学生的点滴所得，都能促进学生积极参与。
英语五年级综合作文【四】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语五年级综合作文【五】
3.1三观指导下全方位综合治癌策略，适应于所有癌症患者。几十年来，由于科学技术的高速发展，癌症的治疗取得了可喜的成就，但也有在有过度治疗的趋势，严重影响了癌症疗效的提高。大剂量、长时间反复应用，使五脏六腑、奇恒之腑、脉经络、气、、精、津液、孔窍、四肢、百骸、皮毛腠理均受到不同程度的损伤，严重的影响了患者生活质量和脏腑功能，忽视了病者的承受能力，只按所谓规定、方法、剂量进行，致使患者治疗效果不良或恶化，严重影响着患者的生活质量。因此，“三观指导下全方位综合治疗策略”的理念急需树立，严格按照全方位综合治疗的依据、原则、方法施治，应用中医药辨证施治，改善目前过度治疗的不良倾向，提高患者的'整体素质和高疗效目标。
3.2医生在医疗行为中，必须贯彻三项基本治疗，即心疗、食疗、动疗必须全力保证，一个不能少，特别是情志心理治疗这条红线，必须贯穿在全方位综合治疗过程的始终，以保证治疗的成功。特别是人性化服务理念尤为重要。中医学有“恬淡虚无，真气从之，精神内守，病安从来”之说，西方医学奠基人希波克拉底斯说:“身为医生，在治疗的过程中，首先不要再制造新的伤害，其次，要尊重自然痊愈力量。”马克思说:“一种美好的心情，比十副良药更能解除生理疲劳和痛苦。”美国执业医师约翰辛德勒研究认为，人类76%的疾病都由不良情绪所引起。上述这些精典均说明了情志与健康和疾病的密切关系。因此，疏肝解郁、调节情志常为临床所施。
3.3特别强调的是宏观调控、微观调治，健后天之脾胃、固先天之肾精、疏肝解郁、调节情志、活瘀通络、软坚散结的核心治疗必须铭记，以中医药为主，适时、适度、适量的整合其他学科领域之优势，发挥最大的医药活性，以期达到疗效好、生活质量高、生存时间长、无复发和转移的理想目标。
作者：陈璐 邵梦阳 单位：北京中医药大学 河南省肿瘤医院
