四级作文官方短语（四级作文常用句子和短语） - 作文仓库

四级作文官方短语【一】

2.文句短。长句表意丰富，含蓄蕴藉，行文舒缓，给人严谨缜密之感。然而，无深厚的文字功底，加之时的思想紧张，句子一长，极易顾此失彼，造成病句。短句构建快捷，简洁明了，凝练生动，写之顺畅，读之清楚。因此，应力求多用短句，少用长句，长短结合，参差错落。

3.段落短。行文分段不宜太长，段落短小，层次分明，条理清楚，文思脉络显而易见。长段大段，组织不当，便有内容庞杂，冗长累赘，思绪紊乱之嫌。写时尤须力戒“三大段”，防止中间一段连篇累牍，又胖又长，如猪之肥腹，有失雅观。

4.结尾短，范文《议论文点评短语》。抒情怀、凸旨意，不枝枝蔓蔓，不拖泥带水，不画蛇添足，干净利落，戛然而止，余韵悠然。

5.篇幅短。大家知道，中考阅卷正值炎热天气，阅卷工作量大，且有规定的时间，既紧张又辛苦，“鸿篇巨制”显然是不合适宜、不受欢迎的。短小精悍才是选择的上策。当然，通常中考大多都有字数限制，一般在600字左右，写时自然必须按要求去做，但是如果不加控制，过度增字加长，一发而不可收，以致成了“老太婆的裹脚布——又臭又长”，势必让人反感。

6.议论短。议论有画龙点睛之功效。或述感怀或表见解，或评或论，析事剖理，闪金铄玉，当精粹简练，要言不烦，切莫又多又滥。

四级作文官方短语【二】

Dear all,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.

It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.

Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.

Yours,

XXX

四级作文官方短语【三】

Dear Mary,

You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:

Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.

Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.

Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.

Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.

I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.

Yours,

Anne

四级作文官方短语【四】

前不久，有的地方随处可看到“你丑你横穿”“我在天桥对面等着你”之类的话语。网友随即将它拍到网上，这些“文明用语”在网上引起了注意，网友们纷纷点赞。违反交通规则的人也少了不少。这一仗，官方用于就败给了别样用词。

一些官方用于在平常时就容易被人忽视，然而把它转化为别样用词反而会引起大家的注意，这是为什么呢？

一方面和其所处的时代有关。80年代时，条件艰苦，没有人敢把这些略带调侃的用词放到大众里。而且，那个时候，也没有现在一样车来车往。

另一方面，和他们的敢于创新精神有关。现信息时代的`人们，动不动就“萌萌哒”“欧巴，撒拉嘿”亦或者是“蓝瘦，香菇”······在大众创业、万众创新的时代，官方用语就已经被人们淘汰了，现在的人一口一句英语，那简直就是“soeasy”啦！

以此类推，官方用语就已经完败了。那么，别样用词就真的可以替代官方用语吗？

答案就是不！

放眼到国外，他们用的也是英语版的官方用语，但他们的违反行为更是少之又少。看来啊！别样用词在国外也兴不起来呀。

在中国，别样用词相比官方语言，也不是有多大的用处。虽然两者并没有必然的因果关系，但两者都是为了人们的身心健康而产生的。

事实上，官方用语在许多地方仍然使用。没有官方用语的基础，别样用词如何改编？

我们可以拿到别样用词来提醒人们，但不可以以此来误导人们。两者有好也有不好的地方，但从种种数据可以看出，别样用词在大众中更受欢迎。别样用词也只要做到监管有用，责任不留白，我们才能真正挥别官方用语。

四级作文官方短语【五】

Dear my father and mother,

This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.

During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.

You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.

With best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

四级作文官方短语【六】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.