贵阳中考英语2024作文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
贵阳中考英语2024作文【二】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
贵阳中考英语2024作文【三】
今年，我和爸爸，妈妈一起去了阳。我非常喜欢这个地方，称它为爽爽的贵阳。贵阳为什么是爽爽的呢？让我来告诉你们吧！贵阳是一个四处环山的地方，树木茂盛，整个城市大部分都被森林覆盖，充满了绿的生机。特别是雨过天晴，清风悠悠吹来，凉丝丝的还带着绿味的清香。
我和爸爸、妈妈一起去了青岩古镇。那是一个历史悠久的小镇，古老的建筑，传统的文化。这里还有许多我从未见过的新鲜玩意儿。有装饰品、首饰等许多有趣的物品，我和妈妈一起跑进一家具有民族风格的小店，妈妈给我买了一枚漂亮的小花戒指，自己买了几条手机挂链。
我们来到了美丽的花溪湖畔。那是一个以水闻名的地方，走到这里，就能看见小溪小河。这里有我从未见过的水草，这些水草一条紧挨着一条，像一条条长长的水中“地毯”，我们还一起坐了小船，欣赏了湖畔两旁的美景。
贵阳有一个好玩的儿童欢乐世界，我们一起玩了海盗船、过山车、摩天轮、飞舟冲浪等，看了4D电影，玩得可爽了！
贵阳的气候也非常凉爽，丝丝凉风吹过来，仿佛像风儿轻轻抚摸着你的脸儿。
凉爽的贵阳，爽爽的贵阳！
贵阳中考英语2024作文【四】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成\"总—分—总\"结构
贵阳中考英语2024作文【五】
离开了恩施大峡谷，我们又来到了贵阳的黄果树瀑布。
听领队说黄果树瀑布景区面积可大了，如果步行到瀑布那里得走好一阵呢。景区有电瓶车，但是妈妈说不坐，要走一走看一看路上的风景，没办法只好走路了。一路上，我们就像进了百花园一样，各种花花草草争相开放非常漂亮，越往前走，瀑布的声响越大，离瀑布也越来越近了，我拉着妈妈的手飞快的往前跑着，妈妈跑的上气不接下气，连声说慢点慢点。就在这时一个巨大的瀑布映入了我的眼帘，扑面而来的\'水雾让人为之一震，瀑布直泻而下，一泻千里，力量非同小可，水落到地面发出震耳欲聋的声响，惊天动地，溅起不计其数的水花，阵阵微风吹过，把瀑布吹得如烟如雾，落到每个人的身上，好像下过蒙蒙细雨一样凉凉的，感觉很舒服。
我们不断向上攀爬，来到了第二个山腰观景台，只见瀑布从山顶以不可阻挡的力量以泻而下，这时候因为站在高处，瀑布的声音并没有很大，但却像千万只小鸟统一鸣叫那样悠扬，我现在的感觉非常的惬意。
我们又返回到山脚下，远望去，万丈青山衬着白银，像一条带子挂在山上，清澈的水流从山上真泻下来撞击着岩石，飞溅起一朵朵水花，整个瀑布好似一个珍珠织成的屏。
美丽的黄果树瀑布！
贵阳中考英语2024作文【六】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
贵阳中考英语2024作文【七】
今年暑假，我们来到了贵州西江千江苗寨。当天晚上到达时，从木制吊脚楼的窗子往外望去，一幢幢的吊脚楼楼顶，被一盏盏橙黄色的灯勾勒了出来。这些只能看见轮廓的房顶，远远近近，连成一片，像一条条龙舟在夜幕下一比高低；又好似一颗颗星星被天上的仙女们洒落人间，美极了！
住在苗寨的清晨，我往往被窗外潺潺的溪水声唤醒，随之一股凉气扑面而来。这股凉气新鲜、湿润，甚至连青草与木头的香气，也被它带了进来，随即，那一夜的疲倦便消失了，取而代之的是一种心旷神怡、沁人心脾的感觉。
在苗寨时，不论在哪儿，不论在什么时候，只要你看到了苗族姑娘，她们不是戴着银光闪闪的银饰，就是头上扎着一朵还含着露珠的娇嫩鲜花。而苗族壮年男子，他们身着黄黑相间的背心，头扎一根黄布条，下穿马裤，足穿黑布鞋，很有一副好汉的气慨！
在苗寨，我还欣赏到了苗族舞蹈。只见被银光闪闪的银饰与五彩斑斓的苗族服饰打扮的花枝招展的苗族姑娘们，一个个排成一列，踩着轻盈的小碎步出场了。她们的舞步与着男子们演奏的节拍，头上戴着的银铃“叮当叮当”地响，声音是那么地清脆。
欣赏完了苗族姑娘们的民族舞蹈，我们还品尝到了苗族人特有的“长桌宴”。顾名思义“长桌宴”就是就餐的人围坐在一张由好几张长方形的桌子拼成一个特别长的长桌边吃饭。宴席上，好客的苗族姑娘们唱着山歌欢迎远方的客人，她们还把象征着吉祥、如意的红鸡蛋挂在客人们的脖子上。在我们桌边，还饶有兴趣地坐着另一桌人，他们中有老有少，还有很多外国人，这，也体现了“长桌宴”人人平等的寓意。
西江千户苗寨被我们游完了，但是，这个散发着浓浓民族气息的村落，被我用大脑拍了下来，永远存入了我的脑海中。
