2016广州中考英语作文【一】
今天我急忙忙的回到家，在书房里看着书的时候，爸爸给我看了一张照片，顿时我惊呆了……
照片上有一个大姐姐和一个可爱的男孩。那个大姐姐好像十三十四，那个小男孩也就八九岁。这时我发现，照片上的两个人正是我的爸爸和老姑。
老爸说“你能从照片上看出什么?”
“你和老姑，那个房子!”我说。
“还有吗?”
“老姑应该出去挣钱了，嗯……”
老爸看着我，说：“你看这里，是一个稻草屋，这就是我们的家。你看这些衣服，这个红褂子，是你老姑给的，当时男生怎么会穿红衣服呢?瞧!里面的衣服一看就知道是老姑给的，这里还有补丁呢。这裤子是你奶奶加工而变短的，你老姑的衣服还是你奶奶给的，当时生活很艰苦啊!买了新鞋都舍不得穿啊!”
我说：“那个稻草房是你们的家，那下雨天和冬天怎么办?”
老爸说：“下雨天就房顶多加稻草;冬天不是冷吗就在周围多加一些稻草。”
“那衣服真破啊!”
“那肯定的，可不像你现在这样，有校服穿，你妈妈还给你买那么多衣服，你还天天跟她吵，有衣服穿不就行了吗?还有啊!那会儿上学哪有班车啊，你还在那么好的学校学习，有吃有喝有书看多好啊!你说呢?”
“是的，老爸，我大概明白你的意思了。”
“嗯!行了，你可以去玩了。”
话刚落我就拿这照片走了。
看着那张照片我想着：亲爱的朋友们，现在的生活是多么富裕、美好。可是以前的生活确实那样艰苦。朋友们，让我们珍惜现在的时光吧，珍惜我们的美好时光!
2016广州中考英语作文【二】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
2016广州中考英语作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
2016广州中考英语作文【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
