2020初中英语作文评分档次【一】
This is a beautiful park. In the afternoon , many children are playing . They are very happy.
I can see some trees. They are big and tall. I can see some flowers . They are very beautiful . There are many butterflies on the flower . I can see some birds in the sky . They are flying happily. Under the tree , two girls are playing hopscotch. Some boys are playing with a skipping rope. The other two little girls are drawing a picture.
I m playing with the toy cars in front of the tree.
It s a beautiful afternoon.
2020初中英语作文评分档次【二】
I tried my best to calm down for a long time. Then I went to the platform to begin my prepared speech.
I felt my brain was blank when I was having my speech.
Before the election, I was confident for this position, but I still so nervous when I was in the platform. Thanks for preparing in advance; otherwise, I must be embarrassed. But the result was what I want. It’s a happy thing.
今天，我们班竞选班长了。`我成为了新的'班长。我很高兴，不过我现在仍然很紧张。竞选开始的时候，我好紧张，我都可以听到我的心怦怦跳了。我努力了很长一段时间才平静下来。然后我才走向讲台开始我已经准备好的演讲。在演讲的时候，我觉得我的大脑一片空白。在竞选之前，我对这一职位是很有信心，但当我站在讲台上时还是很紧张。幸好提前准备了；否则，我肯定很难堪。不过结果却是我想要的。这是一件值得开心的事
2020初中英语作文评分档次【三】
We take out our kites, mine are butterfly, my friends are birds, all are so funny. I start to let my kite fly, but it could not, so I run faster and faster, then my kite flies, I go let go it gradually. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites are also flying.
Seeing our kites flying, I feel so free. Today, I have a great time.
现在我已经放寒假了，我很开心，可以和朋友们玩。朋友们和我约定风来了，我们就去公园放风筝。今天风终于来了，早饭过后，我和朋友们去公园。我们拿出自己的'风筝，我的是蝴蝶样，朋友的是鸟的样子，都很有趣。我开始让风筝飞，但是飞不起来，因此我跑得越来越快，风筝终于飞起来了，我慢慢放飞。不一会儿，朋友们的风筝也飞起来了。看到我们的风筝飞着，我觉得很自由。今天，我玩得很开心。
2020初中英语作文评分档次【四】
Last Saturday,with all my classmates and teachers,I went on a trip to the nature park .We departed from school at about half past seven and spent about 40 minutes travelling to our destination.When we first entered into the park,all of us were shocked by the natural beauty and the hamonized ecosystem of the park.Then,happily we were playing games on the sand; swimming in the pool and taking with our friends on the grassplot.After lunch break,our programs were continued with an contest of story narating held and each of us was immerging within the funny stories We left the part at about 5 o'clock,and unitl now,most of us are still haunted by the beautiful memory of that trip.
2020初中英语作文评分档次【五】
Green grasses，blue lakes and beautiful mountains are waiting for you!Welcome to colorful nature pare!
There is a clean river. There are some colorful flowers. There is a beautiful mountain near the nature park. The air is fresh. The sky is blue. The clouds are white. The tree is green. The bridge is tall. The grass is green. I can run on the grass. There is a path near the lake. There are many fish in the lake. There is a forest in the nature park. There are many trees on the mountains. There are many flowers near the path.
Look! There are some birds in the sky. One, two, three…… oh! So many!
2020初中英语作文评分档次【六】
一是“源波讨源”、“依文论文”。“源波讨源”即要求阅卷老师要充分明白手头的作文，是考生在特殊场合和有限时间里写的“急就章”，且中学生阅历有限，因此阅卷老师应根据中学生的实际情况来评阅，按照中学生的思路来理解，不能按成人的标准来进行评价。“依文论文”就是，阅卷老师要按照文章的体裁来充分理解文章，是什么体裁（议论、说明或记叙）就按什么体裁标准来评价，不能有个人的好恶。
二是“立足给分，不立足扣分”。刘教授说，一般老师往往喜欢对学生的文章“找问题”，但考虑到考生写的是“急就章”，所以阅卷老师应立足于尽量发现考生的“闪光点”，今年作文强调感情真挚，内容充实，文体符合。此外还鼓励考生的个性发展，“个性”就是“闪光点”，因此在发展等级分方面，只要涉及标答中的一点，就可给分，直至满10分。
三是“以宽容开放心态评阅”。刘教授说，今年强调老师要以宽容、开放心态评阅考生作文。凡是和话题沾边（所谓“进了门槛”）的作文，都不当作偏题处理，当然要宽严有度。此外，鼓励阅卷老师敢于给考生作文打满分，“满分作文允许有个别瑕疵存在”。
四是“通过阅卷起到一定导向作用”。刘教授说，高考作文评卷要体现导向作用，促进教育向素质教育发展。比如说，现在倡导作文应告别模式化，端正文风，内容与形式统一，摒弃华而不实的、空洞的.东西。今年作文强调是否体现了考生的独自的、真实的生活和情感体验，思维状态是否清晰、有序展现，是否有“我”在（即个性化）。刘教授还说，今年对作文十分重视“符合文体”这一点。因此，像那种追求形式华丽、文体怪异的文章，将不受欢迎，“非驴非马”（即文体不正）的文章，不可能得高分。
据刘教授介绍，今年高考语文评卷还将严格控制速度，每位老师每天只能评120份试卷，落实到每份作文上，阅卷时间平均在4．5分钟左右。以前有媒体曾报道高考作文评分“90秒钟定生”，这在我省是无稽之谈。
2020初中英语作文评分档次【七】
Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus. It is about thirty miles from the city. We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.
As soon as we got there, we began to climb up the mountains. How great the sight is! We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty, peaeefulness and loveliness. There are hundreds of mountains, one after another. there are magnificent cliffs, one above another. We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily. As the sun was going down, we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill, where we had a big dinner, and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.
Before daybreak, we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark. Unaware of the cold wind, we stood motionlessly, with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east. Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky. As the redness deepened, some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky, dividing heaven from the earth. Just at this moment, up from the brightening far east rose the sun. It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes. and a slight applause from us. the amazed spectators, rang through the peak. Up, up it rose, adding to itself strength and glory at every step. It dazzled with vigour, driving away darkness, cold, and misery from the earth, and bring light, warmth, and happiness to men.
We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature. We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.
千山秋游
去年秋天我们乘公共汽车去千山游玩了一次。它距城市大约三十英里。为了第二天早晨看日出，我们计划住在那儿的旅馆里。
我们一到那里就开始爬山。那里的景色太美了!我们感到好像进入了另一个世界，一个充满美丽、和平和可爱的世界。那里有数百座山峰鳞次栉比：有壮观的悬崖层出不穷。我们精力充沛地向上攀登，贪婪地呼吸着新鲜空气。当太阳下落时，我们来到山下的一家小旅店，在那里美美地吃了一顿晚饭，然后早早地上床睡觉，以便恢复精力第二天早晨远征。
天亮前，我们经过在黑暗中艰难地摸索和爬行到达了最高的山峰。我们一动不动地站在那里，双眼凝视着远处的`东方，连寒风也没觉察到。突然间，薄薄的红光在天空中散开，随着红色加深，一些神奇的云朵在天空四散，把天地分开。正在这时，太阳从远处东方的光亮处升起。它是那样红，然而又那么娇嫩以致我们可以用肉眼来观察它。从我们吃惊的观赏者中发出的一阵轻微的欢呼划过山峰，太阳升得越来越高了，每升一步都给它本身增加了力量和光辉。它炫耀着威力，驱走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦难，并给人们带来光明、温暖和幸福。
这一奇观和大自然的伟大使我们完全惊愕了。我们像天真的孩子一样跳着、喊着，和山峰一起沐浴在太阳的晨曦中，流连忘返。
