四级作文模板什么样子【一】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文模板什么样子【二】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级作文模板什么样子【三】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
四级作文模板什么样子【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文模板什么样子【五】
当阳光和秋风共同吹熟了金灿灿的稻穗时，当一群群大雁从空中划过往南飞时，当绿叶被风霜煎熬发黄从树枝悄悄的落下时，当湿润的晨雾掠过我耳际愈来愈觉得有些冰凉时，我突然忆起了夏天，忆起了夏天难忘的夜晚。
通常夜晚是静寂的，静得可怕，然而夏天的夜晚与一般的夜晚截然不同，它不会像春天那么静得巧妙，也不像秋天那么静得揪心，更不像冬天那么静得可怕，而是动得出奇；还有夏天夜晚的天气与白天的天气大大不同，它不会像白天那么炎热难熬，而是丝丝凉风，吹得让人们把所有的烦恼和忧愁都通通扔在脑后，心情特别愉快，特别舒坦。在如此美的夜晚，我特别喜欢和爸爸妈妈，还有整个院子里的人，在院坝里一边纳凉，一边欣赏夏夜免费的露天晚会。
当夜幕渐渐降下时，我和家人总是早早的吃过晚饭，先把板凳和椅子搬到院坝静静的等待这一时刻的到来。大约10点钟的时候，晚会正式开始了：瞧！有几只荧火虫飞进了院子内，好像灯光师一般，给我们略显黑的院坝内打亮了灯光。哇！院子里真是热闹极了。几个小朋友和一个大人在做老鹰捉小鸡的游戏呢！有两个八九岁的男孩子在表演翻跟斗，还有两个小女孩拿着棍子在比弄武术。看，天上的星星也不示弱啊，他们在变魔术，有的星星在闪着自己又大又亮的眼睛，而有的星星好像在和月亮捉迷藏。听！大型的合唱开始了：从院坝栅栏旁传来欧洲漂亮大美人蟋蟀小姐清脆响亮的英文歌《唐老鸭之歌》；紧接着从不远处的稻田里传来亚洲大帅哥青蛙先生雄浑、高亢的歌声；世界大美女蝉儿小姐也闪亮登台来了一曲《山路十八弯》；偶有不知名的雁鸟从头顶飞过，也顺便奏上一曲；还有一些不知名的小虫子。”咿“——”哦“——”咿“——”哦“简直好听极了。累了的小朋友们，在美妙的音乐声中静静的躺在爸爸妈妈的怀里直打呼噜。也许我的眼睛也坚持不住了，悄悄地我离开了晚会现场，但晚会还在梦中继续，那美丽的夜晚真是让人陶醉。
我怀念夏天，但我更怀念夏天的夜晚。
四级作文模板什么样子【六】
夏天到了，妈妈带着我来到乡下的姐姐家，感受感受夏天乡下的夜晚。
夏天的夜晚是热闹的。乡下的田野里，青蛙”呱、呱、呱“地唱个不停；树枝上，知了”热了、热了“地喊个不停。犬吠，鸟叫，更是多了几种旋律。动物们在一起，奏起了夏天的乐曲，我觉得可以和贝多芬的奏鸣曲攀比。农民们忙了一天了，回到家里，和亲人们谈笑风生，甭提有多高兴了！出来散步的人们三五成群，这儿一丛，那儿一堆，有说有笑的。
夏天的夜晚是漂亮的。天空是那么的湛蓝，上面点缀着一颗颗闪耀的小星星，它们正在向我们眨眼睛。多么美的小星星啊！我相信，每个见到它们的人都会发出这样的感叹。小星星有暗的也有亮的，有大的也有小的。姐姐告诉我，7月5日晚上，在我们的正上方，可以看到北斗星。我按照姐姐和我说的，仔细地找着。终于发现了！它处在楼房的正上方，是一个勺子的形状，由7颗小星星组成的。其中，有3颗小星星特别的亮。我好高兴啊，这是我第一次看到北斗星。而且我还发现，夏天乡下的夜晚的天空是那么奇妙，有无数颗小星星都等着你来发现。晚上，如果你的运气好的话，往田野里一望，就会发现有许多盏灯。告诉你吧，这是农民们晚上在捉黄蟮、青蛙头上戴着的小灯。这些小灯虽然没有大灯的明亮，但是却戴着它很方便，而且在黑暗的田野中还是显得很明显，像大街上的霓虹灯那样，变化多端。
夏天的夜晚也是千奇百怪的。为什么天气这么热，人们还要出来散步？为什么还有人在黑暗的屋檐下摸索？为什么动物们都愿意在夏天的夜晚奏乐曲？为什么……
我第一次发现，夏天的夜晚原来有这么多新鲜的东西等着我们去发现。夏天是个多姿多彩的季节。夏天的夜晚好美啊！
四级作文模板什么样子【七】
在一个盛夏的夜晚，我和妈妈一起在小区里散步。
随着夜幕降临，白天的炎热似乎被吓跑了，徐徐的微风拂过我的脸庞，将大地上的热气吹的一干二净，身子顿时感觉到丝丝凉意。放眼望去我看到每一栋居民楼都灯光闪烁，树下的长椅上到处是一些聊天的阿姨，还有一些三五成群的孩子们正在快乐的玩耍，嬉戏，有的玩滑板，有的在溜旱冰，有的骑单车……那是夏天的夜晚要比白天热闹啊！
走着走着，我们就来到了小区中心，只听见一曲优扬动听的音乐缓缓响起，在灯光的照射下，一群女士们跳起了优美热情的广场舞。
那些不起眼的小花小草们也在风娃娃的鼓动下向大家热情的招手；大树上的树叶也跟着风而一起摇晃；不再是活力不现；可爱的小狗们也不再是白天的气喘吁吁的样了；树上的蝉在枝头开音乐会；一群群提着小灯笼的萤火虫为它们点亮灯！蟋蟀也为它们弹奏钢琴来伴奏，美丽的蝴蝶也在乐曲中翩翩起舞，好一个动听的夏啊！
不知不觉，我们散步到了荷花池，只见荷叶挤挤的，有的中间还有几朵荷花，甚至有一些和花谢了成了一个个大大的莲蓬。风一吹，那荷叶、荷花、莲蓬都会摇曳生姿，仿佛是一群热情四溢的巴西女郎在跳动着。看，那里还有一些小孩光脚在荷花池里玩耍。有时一些调皮的小鱼也会啄一啄他们的小脚，惹得孩子们大声尖叫。还有的孩子们泼一泼水，水珠在荷叶上滚动好像一颗颗美丽的钻石，漂亮极了。小鱼儿在水中游来游去，小青蛙也在荷叶上”呱呱呱“的叫着来凑热闹，好一个热闹的夏啊！
我这时抬头望天空，只见繁星点点，皓月当头，这给迷人的夏镀上一层银色的光辉。这夏天的夜晚，小区里真热闹。这夏天的.夜晚，正是太美了！
