1、激发兴趣。CAI出示学生想象的各种人和物及好的作文题目。
2、自读自评习作:想不想给自己打个分呢
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
雨,还在下着。这绵绵的细雨,就像我的思绪一样长,一样永无尽头,我站在外婆的坟前,眼泪又一次地流了下来……生:特定的景,特定的情,让人感受到怀念的沉重。
师:先请大家就所选的《琐忆》的开头谈谈看法。
是啊,5年的学习生活,顾老师慈母般地悉心照料着我们这群不懂事的孩子,当我们都已长大懂事了,她又要去迎接另一批不懂事的孩子。她不是我们的亲妈妈,但她却是世界上最伟大的母亲!
1:有抒情笔调,但语言罗嗦。
2:“慈母”“亲妈妈”“母亲”三种说法不统一,最后一句宜改成“她不是我们的亲生母亲,但比亲生母亲给予我们的更多”,这样前后关系会更和谐。
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