it's so late, almost 11:00 at night. have you entered into the sweet dream yet? i haven't seen you for a long time. i miss you so much. can you hear my sincere words? maybe you'll never know i miss you so much!
do you still remember the happy days when we were all together? during those days we were full of sunshine. you and mum often took brother and me to the park. we always saw the ice-cream tear. sometimes, you stayed at home and cooked some delicious food for us. we often waited for you and played with you. you could lift me very high. we always had a good time. you also concerned about my lesson. but you have never chastised me and lectured me. you were full of thoughts for me. what's more, you were my best father in my heart. you were the envy of my friends. i was happy for a long time.but now, all things have changed. you can't take care of me. you aren't at home all day. sometimes, i go to bed late, but i still can't see you. are you busy? no! you often play cards with your work friends in the factory. so you can't go back home early. i'm angry to hear that! do you know? if you don't come back, we'll worry about you. i often see you and mum should divorce in my dream. i'm very scared, because i want to have a happy family. i can't control my tears and often suffer from insomnia the whole night.
dad, i want to see you and talk with you. but i have no courage to tell you. but i hope you can care our family. dad! could you hear my voice?
hope you keep healthy and best wishes.
your lovely daughter
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
上一个星期五,妈妈带我去蓬莱长岛玩,去旅游作文。我们一去两天时间,是星期五晚上8点半发车,到第二天早上7点多到达。
到了蓬莱我们先坐船打渔,下午乘坐大船到长岛的九丈涯、半月湾、望福礁。第二天早上乘船出岛,上午去海洋公园,下午去海边游泳。
令我最满意的是我和妈妈去海滩浴场游泳。我们坐车到了海边,我只想着去海边玩,游泳裤都没换就飞奔到大海。妈妈叫住了我,换好游泳裤,感觉自己是无比的兴奋,因为这是我第一次见到大海,第一次在海边游泳。下着毛毛细雨,虽然天气有点冷,但是我对大海喜爱依然不减,感受着浪花的拍打。一会儿我和妈妈玩抓住的'游戏。妈妈让我去抓他,妈妈向深处游,我向深处去抓,终于抓到了妈妈,可是我没看见一个浪头突然打过来,没留神大海淹没了我,喝了几口海水。真咸呀!怪不得人们都说海水不能喝,我们要保护淡水资源呢。
该走了,我恋恋不舍的离开了大海。坐在车上我不停想着这两天的情况,真是让我高兴呀,第一次出安阳市旅游让我感受到祖国的美好,山的雄伟和海的辽阔。旅游真好!
介绍旅游路线的姐姐拿出一本厚厚的旅游线路介绍单章出来给妈妈选择,妈妈一眼就看中了湛江这个旅游胜地,妈妈决定了,就去湛江吧!她在心里暗暗地想:“那里又有沙滩,我的'女儿和赖安迪姐姐又可以在那里冲浪、拾贝壳,真符合小朋友。还可以住四星极酒店,真是享受。妈妈让我在纸后面签我们四个人的名字,我认认真真地在纸后面写了四个大子:黄韦萍、 闭东英 、赖安迪、 钟华巧 、第二天,我们出发了我们四个很早起床,6:25都已经起来了,我们6:30在我们家楼下会合。我们背的东西大包小包,我们走到附近的商店里,我们才记得要带伞,我们又买了两把伞。我们坐的旅游把在东建世纪广场前面的,我们这么早起来是我们要到肯德机吃早餐。
我们第一来到,那里一个人都没有,肯德机都还没有开门。上面写着:肯德机7:00开门。也就是我们还要等,姐姐说:“天哪!早知道就不这么早来!”过了几十分钟,肯德机终于开门了。第一批客人是我们四个人,我们很饿了,就冲了进去。我们要了:两个鸡蛋鲜虾卷、一背奶茶、一碗粥。等我们打包完吃的,旅游车已经来到门口,我们赶紧上了车,在车上吃起刚刚点的早餐来。吃完了,我要调位,怎么调呢?本来是我和妈妈坐的,我和姐姐就说好了,吃完早餐就一起坐。现在,我吃完了,就和姐姐一起坐了。我们坐了五六个钟头的车,到达了吉兆岛的吉兆湾酒店度假村。酒店人员安排我们入住了别野,过了一会儿我们就去海滩游泳,那里的海滩是天然的,完全没有经过人工改造的。
我们租了两个救生圈,我和姐姐一人一个。我们坐在救生圈上,让浪冲过来。浪冲了过来,我们被冲上了岸,真好玩!真刺激。玩了一会儿,我们向游泳店里的人借了几个塑料袋,我们去拾贝壳。我们拾了好多好多奇形怪状的贝壳,整整两袋。会到酒店,我们洗了个澡,把沙子冲得干干净净。到了夜晚,在就店里吃了饭,我和姐姐就去打乒乓球。然后,我们大家去放烟花,我们买了大的烟花和小的烟花。我们把小的烟花放在地上围成一个小兔子的形状,再点燃它。它们燃烧起来,真像一只小兔子穿着闪光的衣服站在舞台上。我们又放大的烟花,看着烟花升上天空,我们真高兴。我们去买消夜吃,买了四只鱿鱼、八条香肠、和四只鸡亦。我们又买了四瓶黄老吉,防止喉咙痛。我们坐在酒店的花园里,津津有味地吃了起来。吃完了,我和姐姐练习唱歌。因为导游姐姐说,回去佛山的时候,让我们两唱歌。我练茉莉花,姐姐练牧童之歌,最后,我们两合唱大长今,她唱韩语伴奏,我唱粤语主唱。第二天,导游姐姐先请了最小的小朋友独唱老鼠爱大米和小微。第二个请的是一个男孩子,他唱2002年的第一场雪,导游姐姐叫他做刀郎。请到我和姐姐了,我先唱茉莉花,姐姐再唱牧童之歌,然后我们合唱大长今。导游姐姐叫姐姐做“迪迪”,叫我做“小长今”。回到了家,我对这次旅游回味无穷。
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