今天又是无聊的一天啊,我躺在床上,无所事事的。心想:唉!如果有点有意义的事做该多好啊!突然,一个念头在我心中蠢蠢欲动,那就是帮妈妈做家务。 首先,我帮妈妈扫地。我拿起扫把,把一楼扫一遍,再拿起拖把,把一楼拖一遍。这两件简单的事就花我半天功夫,让我满头大汗。
可是我刚要收拾的时候,又把水桶踢翻,地上满是脏水。我拿起拖把,慢慢地吸光所有的脏水,可是我又不小心踩到拖把,把一半的脏水挤出来。没办法,只好重新再吸一遍。 接下来,我就帮妈妈擦玻璃。我拿起抹布,花九牛二虎之力,才擦好一面玻璃。可是一块地方怎么也擦不掉,仔细的看一下,原来是水泥,我用尽全力,才擦掉这一小片水泥。突然,脚下一打滑,我从椅子上摔下来,可真够疼的!等我擦好所有玻璃,都已经中午。
顺利的'一项。我把被子甩平,再把被子的两角对折,把对折的两角跟另外一边的两角对折。然后再把被子对折一次,就完成。 这个忙碌的上午使我懂得:妈妈日日都是很辛苦的。我暗暗发誓,以后一定要多孝顺妈妈。
英语作文(2观点论述类
People from differentbackgrounds would put different interpretations on the samecase.
不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towardsthe issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。
Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It isquite understandable that views on this issue vary from person toperson.
俗话说,""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
To this issue, different people come up with variousattitudes.
对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。
There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goeswithout saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。
When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but otherpeople regard ...as ....
提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., butother people think as...
提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ....There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,butpeople who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。
Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
Many people claim that...
很多人认为_____________。
A majority of 绝大多数
A large number of 很多人
Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages
有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处。
Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of thecities.
觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。
Some people advocate that ....
有些人在坚持认为_________。
They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons(grounds
坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据。
Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing highpraise of it.
那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...
有人会认为___________。
People who support ... give some or all of the followingreasons.
那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。
But others hold the view that ...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。
观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,setforth, put forward等。
But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people whostrongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。
However, there are a large number of people who hold a differentview concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。
However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。
However, there are also some others who contend that...
然而,也有人认为__________。
But other people set forth completely totally different argumentconcerning this case.不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
Some people examine this issue from another angle.
有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly...
另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。
According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ...rather than...
根据我的.个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。
Personally, I side with the latter (former opinion...
就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者___________。
Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。
To my point of view 我认为
To my mind, the advantages far overweigh thedrawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings我认为,优点胜过缺点。
For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..
就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of thelatter view.
在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。
After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of thelatter view that...
经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。
If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...
如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of ...... has been brought into publicfocus.
近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities andinnovations, and great changes
have taken place in people’sattitude towards some traditional practice.
现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not ... has been in thelimelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.
近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to .... has aroused a heateddiscussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Bothsides have their merits.
目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversialissue.
对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。
People from different backgrounds would put differentinterpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towardsthe issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。
Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It isquite understandable that views on this issue vary from person toperson.
俗话说,""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
To this issue, different people come up with variousattitudes.
对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。
There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goeswithout saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。
When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but otherpeople regard ...as ....
提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., butother people think as...
提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ....There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,butpeople who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。
Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
Many people claim that...
很多人认为_____________。
A majority of 绝大多数
A large number of 很多人
Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages
有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处。
Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of thecities.
觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。
Some people advocate that ....
有些人在坚持认为_________。
They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons(grounds
坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据。
Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing highpraise of it.
那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...
有人会认为___________。
People who support ... give some or all of the followingreasons.
那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。
But others hold the view that ...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。
观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,setforth, put forward等。
But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people whostrongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。
However, there are a large number of people who hold a differentview concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。
However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。
However, there are also some others who contend that...
然而,也有人认为__________。
But other people set forth completely totally different argumentconcerning this case.不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
Some people examine this issue from another angle.
有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly...
另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。
According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ...rather than...
根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。
Personally, I side with the latter (former opinion...
就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者___________。
Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。
To my point of view 我认为
To my mind, the advantages far overweigh thedrawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings我认为,优点胜过缺点。
For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..
就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of thelatter view.
在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。 After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of thelatter view that... 经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。 If asked to make a decision, I would prefer... 如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。
刚吃完饭,我想:每天都是爸爸妈妈做家务,总是衣来伸手饭来张口的。今天我一定要帮妈妈分担家务——洗碗。于是我自告奋勇地说:“今天让我来洗碗吧!”妈妈用诧异的眼光看着我,疑惑地说:“你能行吗?”我坚定地说:“没问题的!”
说干就干。我先打开水龙头,装满一盆清水,倒入少许洗洁精,一瞬间一大堆泡泡冒出来,从我的手指缝里钻来钻去。我玩一会,才想起我的重任。我把一个个脏兮兮油腻腻的碗放入盆中。然后把碗里里外外都擦一遍,遇到有点脏的地方就多擦几遍。一开始我一帆风顺,后来我越来越骄傲,一不小心,一个调皮的碗从我手中溜出去掉落在地上炸开花。碗被摔个半身残疾。我开始小心翼翼的洗每一个碗,最后我终于征服那些调皮的碗,可我已经满头大汗。我想:洗碗还真不是一件容易的事。以后要多为妈妈分担家务啊!
妈妈看见,不但没责怪我,还开心的笑,表扬我说:“你懂事,会洗碗!”我听心里乐滋滋的。
一、何为“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”。
很多雅思写作考题的提问方式都是“Do you agree or disagree?”或者“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”。很多刚刚接触雅思的学生甚至是老师认为对于这种提问方式无非就是yes或no两种答案,所以文章的观点也就只能是同意或者不同意了。其实,对于这类提问,也可以采用“折衷”的观点,即“partly agree,partly disagree”(部分同意,部分不同意)。但是前提是一定要在文章中从支持和反对的两方面都阐述一些理由,而且最好再提出一种“折衷”方案。例如,考题问“现在很多人用动物做试验,你同意吗?”,考生可以在文中分别讨论支持和反对动物试验的理由,最后提出动物试验既有好处也有坏处,这就是一种“折衷”观点。除此之外,作者还提出了是否能用动物来做试验主要是取决于试验是否能给人类生活带来显著的改善(比如帮助人类发明治疗Aids的药物),这就属于“折衷”方案。
二、“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”的几种形式。
那么如何提出“折衷观点”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种形式呢?下面笔者将对常见的几种安排折衷观点和折衷方案的'形式,结合相应的考题进行总结。
(1) 兴利除弊
“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特别常用。即在分析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,我们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:
The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在讨论完英语作为全球性语言的利与弊之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷观点:
To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread of English as a global language. What we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.
(2) 平衡发展
很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的提问要求。很多情况下,文中说到的两种观点表面上看来是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,可以用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观点。例如考题:
Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷方案:
We should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.
(3) 取决于……
有时在讨论完A和B两种观点以后,可以提出类似于“同意A还是B要取决于……”这样的折衷观点,前文讲到的动物试验是否可以进行取决于试验的性质就是属于这样的方案。再比如下面这个例子:
Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
在讨论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段可以这样提出观点:
From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. It largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. But what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ecological equilibrium.
(4) 解决方法
很多双边讨论型文章中所讨论的两种观点其实是可以通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
在讨论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡差距)与弊(年轻人丧失自由)之后,我们可以提出这样一种解决方案:
The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.
有些材料不一定新鲜,但如果考生能别出心裁,从另一角度进行开拓,也能提出新的见解、新的观点。运用发散思维,能开拓思路,扩展视野;运用逆向思维,则能推陈出新。2010年高考语文安徽卷作文以诗“交流四水抱城斜,散作千溪遍万家。深处种菱浅种稻,不深不浅种荷花”为材料。可根据的后两句体现“因地制宜”的规律,联想到因人制宜、因事制宜、因文制宜,因国制宜,因楼制宜,因价制宜等。也可从水的角度构思,水抱城郭,深处可种菱,浅出可种稻,不深不浅处可种荷花,无水的岸边可住人家。水有上善之德,泰勒说:“水是万物本源。”水影响了整个生态和世界的变迁,由此还可以联想到一切作为本源的东西,如炎黄、风、儒家文化圈等。还可从美的角度立意,本诗用明白简练的语言描绘了吴兴的美景,“美”是从阅读整诗的感受的角度提炼出来的哲理。马克思主义美学观认为“美是主客体的和谐统一”,即“和谐为美”。可以联想五官和谐之美、自然和谐之美、人际和谐之美、国家和谐之美、和谐世界理念。不和谐的是强拆、污染、贸易战争、世界霸权等。
五、通过事理,引申一步
同一个材料可从不同的角度引申事理,要在一般人的思路共集处的基础上,引申一步,提出更新更深的观点。如2010年高考语文上海卷作文材料是“丹麦人钓鱼”的故事和孟子关于捕鱼的论述,素材表达的核心思想是“可持续发展”。材料中的“鱼”可以是自然资源的借代,也可以是一切资源的借喻。那么,可持续的就不仅仅是自然界,还可以是人类自身,是孩子,是自我,是社会,甚至世界本身。材料中的丹麦人、孟子,尺子、渔网,小鱼、大鱼都可以成为构思角度。若从小鱼的角度构思,对渔网和人们心目中的尺寸做反思,呼吁给予它们成长的空间,以便发展、壮大,引申开来可以谈青少年的成长,呼吁给予青少年成长更宽松、自由的空间,谈创新产品的孵化,谈新型文化的命运等,更容易给人以启迪。再如2010年高考语文广东卷作文“与你为邻”,“你”,可以是身边的朋友、同学、同事、领导、孩子、同龄人、长辈等;可以是非身边的,历史上的、社会生活中与自己有一定距离的、文学艺术中的、未来时空中的人物,如苏轼、李清照、洪战辉、丛飞、保尔、林黛玉、甚至是火星人等等;还可以是一种主义、一种信仰、一种理想、一种信念、一种关系、一种意识等。可以从“与你为邻,让我学会了如何做事;与你为邻,让我懂得了如何做人”“与你为邻,说出真话。与你为邻,给出善意。与你为邻,找出美感”“寻找真邻;寻找善邻;寻找美邻”等方面立意。通过事理,做进一步联想,并引申发生开去、会从文题中提炼出好的观点。
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