2016安庆市中考英语作文【一】
第一天很幸运来到长江边老大的家乡，让我的国庆不会无聊那么多天。晚上到汤沟，吃过晚饭后去黑暗一片的路上行了一圈，嗯，值的一提的是差点被当作小偷了。
第二天，去钩鱼，运气不错，比老大人品好，我终于钩到几斤重的大鱼了，很开心。哈哈。
第三天，在长江，本来上了长江黑船，不过因为可能长得不是很帅的原因，船老大不给我们站在甲板上，所以最后坐车渡了，因为能站在甲板看到长江，还省去了船费。说到船费，值的一提的是，从池州回来也是坐这船，他还是没收我们船费。除了我们长得比较吓人的原因，我实在想不到他为什么收别人而不收我们的船费，而且我们还跟别人站一起。
最后我认为还是老大的这个不坐黑船的'决定有先见之明，我是这样理解的，如果我们坐黑船的话，我们肯定没那船老大长得吓人，说不定他还会收我们多一倍的钱。在池州，我为政府提供免费自行车这个政策感到无比的支持，不然我跟老大就不会在只有60块的情况下而游了一天的池州，最后还留有20多。
回来汤沟，想不到还有惊喜在等着我，老大邻居在办酒席，老大带我去见识了一下我以前听宿松的某人说的安庆传说中的喜庆酒席，酒席还没结束，而我们那桌的人都几乎吃饱走光了，而菜还没上完。我完全按照老大说的，“只要埋头吃就行了”，但最后我还是没等菜上完就饱了。没将那桌酒菜完全吃光，不得不说是一个我的一个最大的遗憾。只能感叹它的菜真多。
2016安庆市中考英语作文【二】
哈哈！五一劳动节我和母亲、父亲一起去无锡玩，游太湖。
太湖，大家见过吗？听导游说：太湖有两个澳门，一个香港那么大！太湖无边无际。又听导游说：原来太湖叫“大”湖，太湖实在太大了，又在“大”字上加了一点，就变成了“太”字，所以现在叫太湖。··········
听着，听着，我开始激动起来。我真希望汽车轮子抹了油一样，跑得飞快，想早点到达目的地。
美丽的太湖到了，我们先来到无锡最著名的风景区----鼋头渚。那里，人山人海，黑压压一片，他们都准备去坐游船，我兴高采烈来到长长的队伍中，焦急地等候着。盼望着、盼望着，游船你快点来呀！船来了。轮到我们，我像一只快乐的小兔，飞奔着跑到了游船里.游船开了一个小时左右,我们看见了中央电视台影视基地------水浒城、三国城，小学二年级作文《游太湖》。游船继续开，到了一个小岛-----太湖仙岛。我们一边走一边欣赏美丽的风景，岛上树木郁郁葱葱，山花五彩缤纷，小草绿茵茵，还有别具一格的厕所，形状各异的菩萨，《西游记》中的人物，蔚蓝色的天空，棉花似的白云。组成了一副色彩艳丽的画卷。我好像在画里游玩一样。父亲和母亲不断地给我拍照留念，把美丽的'倩影带回家。
时间太短了，我们的游程结束了。我们恋恋不舍地离开了太湖仙岛。
太湖真美啊！美就美在太湖水。我要把这太湖风光永远留下来，留在我的脑海里。
2016安庆市中考英语作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
2016安庆市中考英语作文【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
2016安庆市中考英语作文【五】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
2016安庆市中考英语作文【六】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
