在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换) literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
Directions: For this part, you’re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description ofthe picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
审题:本题的漫画反映的是一个社会现象。在漫画中,老师把一本厚厚的书交给学生,并对他说:“Just think of it as if you’re reading a longtext-message.”结合题目中的写作指令(express your views on theimportance of reading literature),考生可以得出这幅漫画所反映的社会现象:随着新的电子媒体的出现,文学阅读日渐式微。需要提醒考生的是,漫画中的text-message象征着当代层出不穷的新媒体,这里并不需要对其做过于狭隘的理解。
How bright the June sun is, and the bright sunshine brings us to the same heart. It's like this: Dad took a camera from school and took pictures for us these days. Dad organized us to play together today. In the afternoon, we rode on motorcycles and walked on the same road.
On the way, I was in a good mood when I suddenly saw a blue sea, the sea breeze blowing my body, comfortable, the sea breeze seemed to blow into my heart, blowing out all the unhappiness in my heart.
Soon we came to Shiyuan. We just walked into the poetry garden. Before I took the two step, I came to the gate. I thought, "Oh! How nice it is to take a picture here, so I hastened to shout, "Dad, please come and take Zhang Xiang to me." Dad hurriedly came over and took a picture of me with a click. Then we went on, when I found one of the rocks, just one that could make me do something, and when I was sitting, my father came over to give me a picture. We ran to the place where there was water and came to the side of the sea. I thought, why not take a picture with the sea? I put my posture ready for a picture. Dad came over again and gave me a picture.
At this time we came to the place where there was a pavilion, and everyone was ready to see this good place. You see your sister's posture so beautiful, and the brother also put a posture in the mother's arms. I started to prepare, when I suddenly saw a stone made goose. What I want to ride on it, how impressive and impressive. I got on the goose on top of it. Dad came to take a picture of me. My sister came to take a picture of the little fish next to him.
Then we came to the mosque, because we didn't have enough time, so we hurriedly made several photos.
When Dad took us to a place, there were two ships, and I wanted to experience the experience of the ship as a ship, but the steamer was not there. So we don't have a steamer.
I am very happy today.
Directions: For this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words.
审题:本题的漫画中有一对父子。儿子说:“Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste.”爸爸说:“If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”这幅漫画传达的是一个人生道理:想做大事,要先从小事做起。一屋不扫,何以扫天下?如果考生没有从漫画中看出这层意思,也可以结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big)看出这一点。
Today, as people live a better life, they chase for more enjoyment.
We can see from the news that when the holiday comes, there are so many people gather in the scenery site. People like to travel today, they can take a plane, take the bus or even take a bike. On my opinion, the best way to travel is by train.
First, it is very cheap. Compare with other ways, such as plane and bus, train is less expensive, people can save a lot of money.
Besides, taking the train is much safer.
People don’t have to worry about crush, which is more happen in the plane or bus. Second, we can enjoy the scenery in the train.
Though the train is very slow, we can have a good sight of the beautiful scenery, when we go to Tibet, we can see different colors and different mountains during the trip. Taking the train is the best way to travel.
今天,随着人们过上更好的生活,人们追求的娱乐。我们可以从新闻上看到当节假日来临的时候,很多人聚集在景点。现在,人们喜欢旅游,他们可以坐飞机,坐巴士甚至骑单车。在我看来,最好的旅游方式是坐火车。第一,这很便宜。和其他方式,如飞机和巴士,坐火车便宜很多,人们可以省下很多钱。而且,做坐火车也更加安全。人们不用担心坠毁,这地发生在飞机和巴士上。第二,我们可以在火车上欣赏风景。虽然火车很慢,我们可以好好看看美丽的风景,当我们去西藏的时候,可以在旅途中看到不同的颜色和不同的大山。坐火车是最好的旅游方式。
This may day Dad took me to climb Huashan, where all the plants and trees were unforgettable.
I have been to Jincheng Mountain in Yilong, where fruit trees are everywhere and green grass is everywhere. But I can't compare to the beauty of Huashan; I have been to the east mountain of Deyang, where the mountains are green and green, but they are still not as strange as Huashan; I have also been to the Zhongjing Pingshan, where there are many places of interest, but not in Huashan.
As soon as I set foot on the Huashan Road, I saw a mountain peak rising from the ground, and a dark green light on the mountain. I looked at it. Dad said, "Hey, go." I went up and said, "Daddy, look, what a beautiful view!"
As I walked, I saw that the mountain peak was bare and grotesque. Under such conditions, trees were still growing. There is a mountain with these one or two trees long, far from seeing, the mountain is different, the mountain is like the tota Li, the tree is the tower, how angry! We see a national protection tree - the Sophora japonica, more than 500 years history. The tree is thick and oval - dense and oval, and the more I climb, the more scared it is, but the joy is my motivation, and my family and I continue to climb and climb higher. I saw Xifeng. It was the place where incense sticks to save the mountain. I jumped up with joy. Then I walked a long way, and I saw the long sky plank road, which was connected by a plank on the edge of the mountain. Look at that 1000 foot building, straight up 87 degrees slope, straight into the sky.
The listens say: the sunrise in Huashan and the sea of clouds are also beautiful. The sun just rose from the horizon, the first to show a lovely smiling face...... Hey, down the mountain, ride the cable car, so high! On the cable car to see this side of the mountain is different. How fast can I believe that every passing pile on the cable car is very fast, and when it reaches the foot of the hill?
Time is too fast, or I'll conquer it again.
Directions: For this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof learning basic skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
审题:在本题的漫画中,一位老师正在教一群小学生乘法表,孩子们却面露疑色,其中一个学生向老师表达了大家心中的疑虑:“No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?”结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of learning basic skills),考生不难看出这幅漫画意在强调学习基本技能的重要性。
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