lastweekend的英语作文六年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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lastweekend的英语作文六年级【二】
故事讲述的是关于温妮和塔克一家的故事。有一天温妮在森林里玩，他看到了不老泉，就被梅给绑架走了。温妮来到了塔克的家里，知道了一个惊天动地的秘密，那些泉水喝了可以让人长生不老。然后他就和他们一家人生活在一起。可是有一个穿黄色西服的人，一直跟踪着他们，秘密也都知道了。梅怕他说出去，就把他打了，但还住进了监狱。最后他们一家人和温妮成功的把梅给救出来了。他们一家人走了。但是温妮的长生不老水，自己没有喝，没有和他们在一起了。
我的感受：我在开始读这本书的时候，很想长生不老，因为我们之前读过《天蓝色的彼岸》这本书让我很珍惜生命，所以我不想。但是读完这本书后我才知道，长生不老也未必是一件好事。就像故事中的塔克一家似的。他们一家活的像小偷似的，干工作不能让别人发现，还要来回的换工作，一辈子都很穷。一点意思都没有，生不如。所以我认为生在世上度过自己一生要经历的事情，就可以了，老是活在世上也不是那么高兴的事情。大家都很像长生不老，但是生命只有短暂才会去珍惜，如果都可以长生不老，要珍惜生命干什么。
有时候我认为生命像个摇篮，随时都可能失去生命，所以这才可以让大家珍惜生命。真实的世界上没有不老泉，如果有我也不会喝，因为如果喝下去了，虽然永远都不会去，但是永远也感受不到幸福。所以只有那一段段的时光才是最好的时候。只有那一段时光才是最美好的，最幸福的。
我认为故事写的很好，可以让人从一个小故事中脱节对长生不老的渴望。看后一定会有意想不到的收获。我希望大家有机会也可以读一读。
lastweekend的英语作文六年级【三】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
lastweekend的英语作文六年级【四】
收到喆妈公益阅读社寄来的《不老泉》后，我欣喜若狂，很快我被这本获奖无数的经典小说所吸引，惊叹于美国儿童文学作家和插图画家&娜塔莉·巴比特的想象力，更为书中所蕴含的生命哲理而感动。
刚开始我为温妮在无意中发现不老泉的秘密，而觉得她很幸运。心想：假如她喝了那泉水，会让她长生不老。那么，她永远都停留在快乐的.童年，永远都是无忧无虑的11岁，她真是幸运的小姑娘。要知道这可是多少人们梦寐以求的事呀，可是继续往下阅读，特别是读到了塔特一家人的经历和遭遇后，我的观点彻底的改变了。
善良的塔特叔叔，为了让温妮明白生与是不可抗拒的自然规律，为了让她保守不老泉的秘密，以身边的船、水、生物、动物等举例，用自己一家人痛苦的经历和遭遇，告诉温妮不能违背自然生长规律的道理。世界上的万事万物，都要经过生长、变化，一切有生命的动物、植物都要经历生与的轮回，这个轮回就像一个旋转的轮子一样，转的永不停息。神秘黄衣人的贪婪和阴险让她明白，如果人们不遵循这个规律，都去喝那能长生不老的泉水，那么世界上的一切都会停留在原地不动，万事万物也会没有一切生机，那是多么可怕的永远停留啊！
书中的主人公温妮把杰西给她的一小瓶不老泉水给了自己受伤的好朋友蟾蜍喝，让蟾蜍永生不，自己却放弃了长生不老，放弃了活在无忧无虑的11岁里。我想：她一定也是不想一直为了隐藏这个秘密而东躲西藏，也不想让别人用异样的眼光看她。
生命就像一支笔，用铅书写自己的人生，享受书写过程中带来的乐趣！直到这支笔用完，这就是生命的轮回。比如我们，现在还是小孩子，将来是青年、然后是中年、最后是老年、亡，接下来又是新生……要是我们长生不老，光阴就被卡住了，眼看着时光轮回，自己却一点儿不变，不再是生命之轮的一部分，就如同路边的石头一样没有活力，多可怕呀！
我不要喝不老泉的水，我不想长生不老。我要经历时间的磨砺，享受成长的每一点滴！我也会更加珍惜、爱护自己的生命，因为生命对于每个人来说只有一次！
lastweekend的英语作文六年级【五】
这本书，为大家呈现了一个道理，有些人为了长生不老，跋山涉水，去找那口泉，可他们都并没有想过，自己喝完这种水，永远都不会再变，一直是那个摸样，这是一件多么痛苦的事情，而得知这个故事的主人公温妮，就有深刻的意识，没有去喝那泉水，从此，那口泉便无人知道。
这本书主要讲了温妮的父母和奶奶总是不让温妮出去玩，有一天温妮偷偷出去玩，发现了一个小男孩，从这开始泉水的秘密，便有人知道了，听完这个故事的温妮，对塔克一家微微地产生了一些好感，到后来，迈尔斯带她去钓鱼，杰西带她去玩，梅和塔克跟她谈话。渐渐地，渐渐地，渐渐地。温妮喜欢上了这个大家庭。
可惜的是，当初他们为温妮讲泉水的秘密时，没留意有人在偷听，最后那人想要卖泉水，这种过于贪图的人，终究会受到报应的，那个人就是黄西装，他为了可以长生不老，还要卖泉水，最后，在了梅的枪下。
我觉得这个故事告诉了我们，一个人不要太贪，因为贪会使你失去很多，虽然温妮可以选择喝下泉水，长生不老；也可以不喝泉水，过普普通通的日子。但是温妮不像有些人似的，选择了喝泉水，而温妮没有，她选择了过普通人的生活，这种选择是明智的。
人虽然不能长生不老，但是可以让自己活得很快乐，这就足够了。
lastweekend的英语作文六年级【六】
今天，我读了美国的著名作家纳塔莉·巴比特写的《不老泉》，看完后，我深有感触。
这个故事的主要内容是这样的：温妮·福斯特在家族拥有的森林里发现了一口泉，泉水竟然可以使人长生不老！但这也迫使小温妮进一步思考：永生究竟是一种福音还是一种诅咒？
喝过这口泉的塔克一家四口看着生命在身边流逝，而他们自己却永远不老，他们把这奇妙的经历秘密地像温妮道来……温妮最终没有去赴杰西的不老之约，她选择平平凡凡的过生活，选择经历生与。若干年后，塔克一家又回到了这里见到了温妮，不过见到的是她的坟墓。她已经去世了，活了78岁。温妮虽然没有长生不老，但是她已经领悟了人活着的真谛。
人之所以害怕亡，是因为亡总是伴随着各种伤痛，各种离别，各种恐怖，各种残忍。你可能还想和你心爱的人多说几句话，你可能还想多看这美丽的世界几眼，但亡断绝了你的这些希望。亡绝然地带走你的亲人，或把你从你的亲人身边带走，带走你的爱、你的希望、你的快乐和健康。可是永生，并没有表面上看的那么风光。
亡与出生就挨在一起，你没法儿只挑自己喜欢的，不要自己不喜欢的，完整的人生才是一种福气。人活着就得，所以我们这模样，不能算活人，这能算是人，是物，就像路边的石头。这是塔克先生说过的一句话。曾经，我也向往长生不老，这样可以和家人永远呆在一起，可看完这本书，听完塔克先生说的这句话，我顿时觉得自己错了，错的太离谱了，我发现如果永远不的话，那么你就不会去珍惜这个生命，去感悟这个世界！
所以，亡真的不可怕，真正可怕的，是像塔克一家一样，永远不了。
