五年级英语五个国家作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语五个国家作文【二】
的北京，阳光灿烂，凉爽的秋风把欢乐的我们送到了蟒山国家森林公园。
一下车，我们就按班级依次在空地上集合，等侯老师的冲锋号令。小喇叭里终于响起了年级主任的声音：各班注意，10点40分停车场集合。同学们呼啦一下就散开了，一个个争先恐后地向659米高的蟒山山顶进发。我也不甘落后，甩开脚步向前追赶，良好的身体素质使我很快就进入了登山的第一集团军。上山的台阶越来越陡，路越来越窄，左右的同学也越来越少，每登上一个台阶，都要大喘一口粗气，豆大的汗珠在我的额头上跳起了欢快的舞蹈。但我心里只有一个念头：再累也要登上蟒山山顶。
功夫不负有心人，经过三十五分钟的艰辛努力，我终于站在了山顶上。站在山顶，我贪婪地吮吸着山上清新的空气，心中充满了无限的自豪与喜悦。仰望天空，我看到深秋的天像大海一样湛蓝，好像用秋雨洗刷过，朵朵白云犹如扬帆起航的轻舟，慢悠悠地飘浮在我们头顶，好一个秋高气爽啊！山顶那条150米的长廊，好似一条长龙俯卧在云雾之中，长廊中那一幅幅壁画又仿佛是在向我们轻轻诉说着那一个个古老的传说。站在山顶，远处那连绵起伏的.山岭，微波粼粼的十三陵水库尽收眼底。近处的山上有几棵枫树，枫树叶火红火红的，好似天边的晚霞一样迷人。正像诗人杜牧所写的霜叶红于
二月花。这山顶的景色可真美呀！哪怕看一眼，准叫你心醉！时间差不多了，咱们下山吧。同组小伙伴的一声召唤，提醒我集合的时间快到了，我恋恋不舍地向山下走去。
集合了所有的同学，我们又向蜜蜂谷进军。走进蜜蜂谷，就像进入了蜜蜂王国，里面关于蜜蜂的知识应有尽有，为数不多的几只小蜜蜂围着我们飞来飞去，热情地欢迎我们这些小客人。走出蜜蜂谷，早已饿得饥肠咕噜的我们终于可以在那尊石雕大佛像前开餐了。这是一尊面目慈善的弥勒大佛，高达9。9米，重1500余吨，由200块5―10吨重的花岗岩雕刻砌成，是目前我国北方地区最大的一尊石雕大佛。我们纷纷爬上大佛和它合影留念，感受它的慈爱和宽容。此时，我忘记了一切烦恼，把自己的整个身心溶入到了大自然中，我感到无比的快乐。
这次秋游让我深深地明白了秋的美丽，秋的喜悦，也深深地到了山的深情，山的伟大，更重要的是我感悟到了我们学习不也是在登山吗？不错，我在学习上确实遇到了前所未有的挑战，碰到了许多困难，但我坚信自己通过努力一定能战胜困难，去攀登知识的高峰。只有付出，才有收获，我要用百倍的努力去迎接期中的检验，这就是我此次秋游登山最大的收获。
五年级英语五个国家作文【三】
坐在开往太姥山的车上，我的心开始飞扬，飞向那个神奇的海上仙都——太姥山。“夫妻峰”、“金龟爬壁”、“七星洞”、“一线天”……一个个，魂牵梦萦的景点向我招手，仿佛我已经置身于这个神奇的世界中。
秦屿到太姥山的路口从山脚一直延伸到山上，弯延曲折，像一条白玉带，随风起舞。不知不觉，我们已经到了太姥山。门口雄伟的建筑让你眼前一亮，凉爽的山风涤去身上的`浊气，倍感神清气爽。
今天，来到太姥山旅游的人特别多，有各种各样的人，人山人海。我和爸爸妈妈刚走了一段路，就碰上了一个外地的旅游团来这里旅游，只见导游姐姐挥着小红旗，戴着小红帽，手提着一个小喇叭，一边走着，一边介绍太姥山的历史文化。爸爸看到，神秘兮兮地说：“不如我们也跟在他（她）们的后面吧！也可以听导游的介绍，了解太姥山的文化和传说。”
太姥山的景点有非常的多，我看得眼花缭乱，仿佛置身于现代抽象派雕刻大师的艺术展厅中。 “夫妻峰”向你讲述亘古不变的爱情故事，“九鲤朝天”告诉你做什么事都不能偷懒、“金龟爬壁”会使你明白要超凡脱俗必须过得了“美人关”“金钱关”……只要你用心欣赏，从这些传说中尼会学到许多书本上学不的知识。
太姥山的“洞异”是一绝，对于我来说，最好玩的是钻洞。
“葫芦洞”、“七星洞”、“一线天”……每个山洞都那么的神秘，那么得吸引人。“七星洞”，因为抬头向上望去，在阳光的照射下，像七颗星星散布于天空。“葫芦洞”，洞中套洞，大小不一，宽窄相差极大，小的仅容一个人侧身通过，宽的可以让几百位同学一起上课……
不知不觉，一天时间就过去了。我们要下山回家了，真得舍不得离开啊！真想在山上大喊一声：“我爱你，太姥山！”
五年级英语五个国家作文【四】
故事的内容是这样的.：赵光是一个孤儿，是下沟村的乡亲把他拉扯大的。小时候没有衣服穿，人们叫他赵光腚，到了岁数娶不上媳妇，人们叫他赵光棍，如今靠劳动致富，人们又叫他赵光荣了。赵光在县表彰会上，将相亲用的一万元钱捐给了福利院的孩子。这一举动引起了新闻媒体的关注，面对摄像机，善良、热情、易冲动的赵光说出：“愿为所有孤儿院的孩子当爹”。结果在他结婚的那天，二十五个孩子跑到他的面前，跪下来喊着：“爹”这可把他给吓坏了。从此，他抚养起了这二十五个孩子。
赵光是多麽的伟大呀！当孩子来的时候，妻子让他和孩子之间只能选一个的时候。他却选择了孩子。要知道，他致富不容易，花了一些钱娶媳妇。这些钱可是汗钱。现在钱泡汤了。妻子没有了，却还要担任二十五个孩子的父亲。生活费从哪里来呢！他还要去辛辛苦苦的去劳动。二十五个孩子呀！一天要花多少钱啊！此外，赵光还自己当老师，教二十五个孩子念书。这是一种无私的奉献啊！要知道，这二十五个孩子跟他没有任何缘关系。在赵光生日那天，二十五个孩子亲手做面条给赵光吃。并说：“爹，对不起，今天惹你生气了，祝您生日快乐。”这些孩子拥有着一颗感恩的心。而在我们实际生活中。有谁会记得父母的生日？又有谁在父母生日时送过一件小礼物？或只是一句简单的问候语呢？
孩子们生病了，送去医院，可是没有钱。医生就不给看病。对这一点，医生的做法实在是太过分了。一生的职责本是：救扶伤，一位白衣天使的形象。”可如今呢！却是铁石心肠的形象。赵光都给跪下了呀！如果一个病人伤得很重，本来可以救活，而没有钱，你们不治。那个人了。那你们岂不犯了大错。生命无价啊！
我发誓，我现在一定要好好学习，长大了，开一家医院，给那些没钱治病的人，免费治病。
