励志回报社会类作文【一】
爱的回报每当我在整理书柜的时候，看到书柜上有个盒子我就会一次又一次的打开看，原来是读书郎点读机，它的样子可像手提电脑了!
但用处就不一样了，电脑是可以上网、玩游戏……。可我这只能用来学英语的，这不但可以让我喜欢学习，还能提高我的英语水平。每次一看到它，我就会回忆起这是去年我生日时奶奶送给我的一个最珍贵的礼物。也许有很多人会不约而同地问我：“为什么这也算是最珍贵的礼物?”我会毫不犹豫的回答：“这虽然是一个普通的礼物，但这表达的仅仅装是礼物吗?告诉你们吧!
这里面装有奶奶对我的一份心和关爱。”虽然这是一件普通的小事，也使我懂得了亲人对我的爱付出了很多很多，我也要懂得回报，学会做一个有感恩的心的好孩子。以后，我会时刻记着奶奶对我的关爱，一定会加倍努力学习，成为一个优秀的好学生，来回报亲人们对我的关爱。名师点评：小作者有一个读书郎点读机，它是小作者生日时奶奶送的，小作者在文中介绍了自己的读书郎点读机，表达了自己对奶奶的感谢。小作者认为这虽然是一个普通的礼物，但对自己来说有着独特的意义。小作者认为礼物中有奶奶对自己的一份心和关爱，于是想通过努力学习，回报奶奶。小作者真懂事呀!
年纪虽小，却懂得感恩。这篇文章叙述生动，主题明确，写得不错哦!
“看到书柜上有个盒子我就会一次又一次的打开看”改为“看到书柜上有个盒子，我就会一次又一次地打开看”。“玩游戏……。”改为“玩游戏……”“这虽然是一个普通的礼物，但这表达的仅仅装是礼物吗”建议改为“这虽然是一个普通的礼物，但意义却非凡”。
励志回报社会类作文【二】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
励志回报社会类作文【三】
我拿什么回报你，妈妈！从我呱呱坠地的那一刻起，你就背上了沉重的包袱，为女儿奉献出了你的青春。
我们家并不富裕，可你总是想方设法满足我。别的小孩穿新衣裳，你不会让我穿旧衣裳；别的小孩吃零食，你不会让我干瞪眼。我得到了小小的快乐，却不知道这份快乐是用你的艰辛换来的。
小时候的我，调皮捣蛋，有一次，记不清因何触怒了你，你从柜子里抽出一条皮带，狠心朝我挥舞，皮带呼啸着抽打在我稚嫩的肌肤上，留下了一道道伤痕。我痛得哇哇大哭，像战败的逃兵般东躲西藏。此刻，豆大的泪珠从你的脸颊上滚落下来。是呀，儿女是母亲的心头肉，打在我的身上，却痛在你的心上，若不是为我好，你又怎么会受这份罪呢？从那以后，我做事小心了许多，我不是怕挨打，而是不想让你伤心。
可上天总是考验我们，我7岁那年的一个夜晚，突然发起高烧，你吓坏了，匆匆忙忙把我送到医院。住院的第三天，我的病情恶化了，你哭着带我赶去另一家医院。一路上你都无语，好像害怕我在你的怀里瞬间消失，只是紧紧抱着我无声地流泪。恍惚中我感到一滴滴液体搭在我的脸上，滑至嘴边，有点苦，有点涩，有点咸。不知不觉中，我进入了梦乡。醒来后，一片刺耳的白色映入我的眼帘，感觉手很重，一看，手边倚着你已生出银丝的头。不忍心抽出手，你一定累坏了吧！几天来，几乎不曾合眼的你时刻为我担心……我的眼泪倾泻而下。经过几天的治疗，我的病情好转了许多。本以为一切会很顺利，却不了我的病情再次恶化，烧得浑浑畺畺的我挣扎在生边缘。那一刻，我想到了你，想到了你的眼泪，高烧便奇迹般的退下来了。
我拿什么回报您，为我默默付出一切的妈妈！
励志回报社会类作文【四】
知恩图报，施恩不图报，但是善良又往往容易得到回报，帮助别人实际上就是帮助自己。
曾经我听到过一场优秀的演讲：一个贫穷的小男孩为了攒够学费挨家挨户的推销商品。劳累一天的他饥饿难当，于是他敲响了一户人家的大门，开门的是个小女孩，他请求小女孩给他杯水喝，小女孩给了他了一大杯牛奶。
数年后，那位给小男孩牛奶的女孩得重病，医生们束手无策，当年的小男孩已成了大名鼎鼎的医生，他一眼就认出了躺在病床上的女子是自己的恩人，于是他专心研究治好了女子的病，当女子醒后翻开医药费通知单，如女子所想一样，那的确是一笔很大的费用，但一行小字儿引起了她的注意：医药费为一杯牛奶。
演讲结束后，现场寂静无声，有的只是那时不时传出来的抽泣声。其实这回报之果我也曾收到过。
那天从朋友家回来，只见一个小女孩骑着自行车，因为速度太快，在转弯口时车一斜整个人就摔在地上。我赶忙跑过去扶她起来，递给她一张纸，而后推着自行车送她回家，她的父母向我连连道谢，小女孩也低着头羞涩的说了声谢谢。
两个月后的某一天，我在厨房帮忙。这时门被敲响了，打开门，是这个女孩!我忙招呼她进来，她摇摇头递给我那些似曾相识的书，"姐姐你看下这书是不是你的。"我翻开一瞧，大惊，那书的确是我的。原来她去玩时在路边看到了它们，捡起一翻，上面写着我的名字，就是到我家来了。
我连连道谢，回去检查了背包，发现因为书太多，底部被撑裂了，我顿时好庆幸，幸好我曾帮过她，她认识我……
所以，可能你那一瞬间的善良和帮助会让你得到意想不到的回报。
励志回报社会类作文【五】
在十个道德的好习惯中，其中有一条就是要孝敬父母。作为一名小学生，我怎样才能做到这一点呢？
爸爸妈妈为了我的学习付出了很大的心，为了我读书也是很不容易的，我不能让他们为我的学习成绩和各方面而担心。
在学习上我应该自觉地努力地学习，养成良好的学习习惯。在课堂上，我应该认真听老师讲课，积极举手发言，虚心地向好的同学学习，在学校里和同学和睦相处，做好老师的好帮手，积极参加各种各样有益的活动。我要用优秀的成绩来回报爸爸妈妈，让他们觉得他们所付出的努力没有白花！爸爸妈妈上班也很辛苦的，我回到家里，只要有我能够做的小家务，我应该尽量去做掉，来减轻爸爸妈妈的家务活，在家里，不能像一个小皇帝一样把好吃的东西留给自己，应该留给爸爸妈妈，做一个听话的好孩子。
作为一个孩子，最大的孝心就是通过自己的努力，取得好成绩来回报爸爸妈妈，就是给爸爸妈妈最大的安慰。
