今年暑假,我们一家三口开车自驾游,第一站就选择了美丽的海滨城市——连云港。连云港位于江苏省东北部,东临大海,素有“东海第一胜境”之称。
来到连云港后,我们首先前往连岛海滨浴场。在这里,首先映入眼帘的是蔚蓝的大海和金色的沙滩,海滩上有许多海浪冲刷之后留下的贝壳、海螺、海藻,真是美不胜收啊!我们迫不及待地换上游泳衣,套上救生圈就直奔大海。啊!水好凉、浪好大啊!随着海浪的起伏,我感觉自己仿佛变成了一条自由自在游动的小鱼,真是惬意啊!游累了,我们就在海边玩沙子,把沙子堆成各种造型,充分享受着这优美的海边景色。
第二天,我们来到了我早已心驰神往的地方——花果山,这里就是传说中的齐天大圣的老家哟!花果山果然名不虚传,在登山的途中,不断有猴子在我们身边出没,有的在树藤上荡秋千,有的在路边吃着游客扔的零食,看上去非常调皮可爱。这里还有传说中的水帘洞,洞口有一条瀑布飞流而下,溅起片片水花,壮观极了!我们钻进水帘洞,欣赏着里面幽深的景色,仿佛自己变成了美猴王。
在连云港游玩了两天,转眼间就要结束这段愉快的旅程了,我们依依不舍地离开了这优美的海滨城市——连云港。
去年国庆节,妈妈、我和妈妈的好朋友宋梅阿姨与她的儿子一起去连云港游玩,我们坐了七个小时的客车才到连云港。
到了连云港已经是中午了,导游带我们去连云港的大饭店吃饭,保存好体力下午去玩。
终于到了下午,导游带我们先去坐轮船,坐在轮船上,看着那无边的海景,听着海鸥的叫声,我戴着小墨镜,躺在甲板上的小睡椅上,悠然自得地沐浴着阳光,嘴里还哼着小曲:“蓝蓝的天空小狗追着小蜜蜂,我在这里看着大海......”
悠闲的“轮船渡假”渡完了,接下来该我们打海球了。
来到海边我和宋梅阿姨家的孩子-----邱振宇一起呼喊着:“大海啊!我来了!”结果都没注意脚下的两个桶“扑通”一声我俩摔了个狗啃泥,弄得哭笑不得。我让妈妈帮我买个排球,准备和宋梅阿姨她们打沙滩排球。
排球比赛开始了,我先上来一个:“海狮顶球”直接过网,对方也不甘示弱,来了个“如来神掌”一掌拍出球场......,最终我以10:1的绝对优势得到冠军。
第二天,我们去了连云港最著名风景区——花果山。花果山是个5A级的景区,也是齐天大圣孙悟空的出生地。
我们坐着旅游车来到花果山的顶峰——仙女峰。最先映入眼帘的是一座梦幻般美丽的的仙女石雕像,她婀娜多姿,飘飘欲飞,像嫦娥。我还和她合了影,希望她带我去天宫一号看看。
下了仙女峰,我们直奔水帘洞。到了水帘洞,我就看到一个大胡子叔叔在那里吆喝着:“和小猴子照相,十元一张。”我以迅雷不及掩耳之势——“刷”地拿出十元跑去照相了。在照相的时候,那只小猴居然在我的手上尿尿,我气得刷地从他手上抽出钱把小猴交给主人。找水洗手去。洗完手稍作休息,蓄势待发,准备去冲水帘洞。
“冲啊!”我没注意脚下的大水池,结果掉到了大水池里,差点儿被淹,,可当我反应过来的时候,才发现水池的深度才到我的.腰部,我顿时脸红了。
这次二日游,我不仅快乐无比,还让我懂得了做事不能鲁莽,更让我明白了“一失足,成千古恨”这句话的意思了。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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