六年级英语手写作文【一】
—题记
那天，我刚输完液回家，妈妈就让我去洗手，我再三推辞。
“妈，水太凉了，我不想洗。”
“宝贝儿，医院的细菌太多了，妈妈给你兑好热水，洗洗吧！”
“不，我不洗，我不想洗，等会儿手又出了。”
“妈妈给你洗好吗？”
我勉强答应了。
妈妈打开水龙头，将水温调到合适的温度，握着我的手，伸向水龙头，水缓缓的留下来，有一丝温暖。我看看妈妈的手，眼睛里有些晶莹的东西在打转。
原本，我以为妈妈的手还是像她年轻时那样白皙、细腻，可是，我错了，妈妈的手就像那干枯的树皮，失去了那以往的光泽，和我那嫩白的小手似乎格格不入。那晶莹的东西在眼眶里溢出来，或许是水的缘故，妈妈买有察觉到。妈妈把洗手液打在手心里柔柔的搓成细腻的泡沫涂在我的手上。以前妈妈打洗手液时，总会有很多泡沫，可现在，妈妈的手里没有那样丰富的泡沫了……
洗好了，妈妈用柔软的毛巾将我手上的水擦干，将护手霜涂在我的手上。
“妈，你也涂点吧！对手的皮肤好。”我的声音有些颤抖。
“不用了，妈妈的手再涂也没用了。”
我紧紧地握住妈妈的手，老年斑、皱纹在悄悄地爬上妈妈的`手，光泽、白润都像逃兵一样，从妈妈的手上溜去。我的眼泪再次落下。
妈妈，时间的流逝，将你的青春带到了那美丽的国度。妈妈，您辛苦了，女儿永远爱您！
文章立意独特，且文章以对话的方式进行叙述。通过叙述妈妈对“我”手爱护有加，自己的手却干枯没有任何光泽。行文思路清晰，语句通顺，对伟大无私的母爱进行礼赞。
六年级英语手写作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级英语手写作文【三】
三个八路军在火车上以微薄的力量抗击几十个日本鬼子和一架日本战斗机。他们用几把枪和他们的机智勇敢，就将阻碍他们的日本鬼子一一击退。当那架战斗机在天空中对着火车头扫射时，我得心不免有些紧张，会不会打到火车头？会不会引起爆炸？八路军会不会就这样牺牲？日本鬼子会不会抢走国宝？一个个问题都是那么扣人心弦。但当那架战斗机仅仅八路军用机关枪打落时，我松了一口气，同时也暗暗喝彩：“中国人好样的！”
最痛快不已的一刻
女大学生误将猪食当作饭盛给日本鬼子，两个机智的小男孩把自己身上那带有腥味的水和癞蛤蟆装进了鬼子们的\'水壶里。当看到日本鬼子吃着老百姓们为他们“精心”准备的这些食物时，全场的同学都大笑起来，笑得那么的痛快过瘾。我还隐约听有同学说道：“日本鬼子就是应该吃猪屎。我们中国的猪也比这些可恶的日本鬼子强。”真棒！相信如果我们这群孩子生在那个年代里，也一定会用我们的聪明智慧来对抗日本鬼子的侵犯。“中国人好样的！中国的娃娃头也不赖！”
最振奋人心的一刻
当那块藏在西瓜中的炸弹爆炸时，当那个进入这个村庄的日本鬼子的队长被炸得粉身碎骨时，当这支日本鬼子军被打得七零八落、四分五裂瓦时，我笑了，十分振奋地笑了，中国人不可能被威胁的，我们会奋起反抗，因为我们每个人的心里都有一个信念，就是日本鬼子会在我们国土上双手举起手投降，然后像老鼠一样灰溜溜地逃出我们神圣的领土。“我们生长在这里，每一寸土地都是我们自己的。如果谁要强占去，我们就和他拼到底。”有许许多多的让我们中国人为之喝彩的一刻，那是难以用手中的笔和语言所形容的。孩子们露出了无忧的笑容；老奶奶露出了信欣喜的笑容；广大群众露出了胜利的笑容。歌声回荡在山谷，笑脸映红了天边。
“日本鬼子，举起手来！！！”
六年级英语手写作文【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
