上海五年级期中英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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上海五年级期中英语作文【二】
刚进大门，我们就先看见一座大钟塔，钟面上印着米奇的图像，米奇的两只手竟就是时针和分针，米奇好像就是这个乐园里时间的守护者。
我们来到了神秘的“米奇大街”。仔细观察，我发现建筑的每一层都会比下面一层矮一些。因此才会产生一种奇妙的感觉：我变高了！
走完“米奇大街”，经过“迪士尼小镇”，我们到了“明日世界”。“明日世界”里有在空中飞旋的喷气背包飞行器，有充满互动的巴斯光年星际营救，还有《星球大战》系列的精彩电影片段欣赏……
但我还是玩了全球迪士尼乐园中速度最快的过山车之一——创极速光轮。我排了两个小时的队，终于轮到了我。门打开了，里面灯火一片，赛车沿着轨道停了下来，我坐了上去。当广播发出“三、二、一、零”的`声音后。赛车“咻”的一声飞驰起来，顿时眼前一片漆黑，风从我耳边“呼呼”地吹过，速度快得我都无法呼吸。赛车一会儿快，一会儿慢；一会儿向左，一会儿向右；一会儿往上，一会儿往下，翻来覆去地左揺右晃。过程中，不断有人发出刺耳的尖叫。我却轻松极了，感觉就像在驾驶着一辆属于自己的赛车。
出了“明日世界”，我又去玩了“梦幻世界”、“奇想花园”、“宝藏湾”和“探险岛”里的各种游乐项目。
到了晚上八点半，我们还观看了城堡上精彩的烟花表演，我觉得自己收获满满。
上海迪士尼乐园之旅真是一次充满创造力、冒险精神和快乐的旅途！
上海五年级期中英语作文【三】
一天，妈妈带我去上海科技馆，我高兴地一蹦三尺，上了汽车，我听着轻松的音乐，不知不觉，就来到上海科技馆，一开始，我看到了许多动物模型有斑马。有长颈鹿，有猛犸象，还有骆驼……形态千奇百怪，五花八门。接着我们又去蜘蛛馆，我一进去就不禁冒出一身冷汗，只见一只巨大的蜘蛛，它张牙舞爪仿佛一口想把我给吃掉。
在蜘蛛馆里还有一个游戏，它向你提出问题并会摆动蛛丝，让你猜猎物是什么或者有几只。参观完了蛛蛛馆有去图像室，每个人站一边中间有个视频，球是一个图像，如果球过来人只要手一挥就能体验到打排球的感觉，然后我又来到虚拟体验室，我坐上小艇就想是在波涛汹涌的海面上漂流，我站在一个小跑步机上跑就想在悬崖上走钢丝，然后我脚上套着滑雪板拿着两根滑雪棒就像是在白雪皑皑珠穆朗玛峰上滑雪，最后我又去看三维电影。我做到椅子上视乎随手一摸就能碰到地球，感觉自己身临其境一般……时间就像飞一样过去了，转眼就到了我们回去的时候了，我只好依依不舍的告别了科技馆坐上汽车向家的方向驶去。
上海五年级期中英语作文【四】
看着夏天只留下了一个小尾巴，在我们的软磨硬泡后，爸爸终于答应我们去上海自驾游。我高兴了好一会儿，
这天高速上时晴时雨，加上爸爸那120码的速度使我心惊胆战。过了一个半小时，沪昆高速四个大字出现在我眼前，我欢呼道：上海到了。大约再行了一个小时就到了“锦江乐园”。爸爸把车停好，我们便向“锦江乐园”进军。
走进大门，迎面来了一座60米的高塔，附近的花散发出迷人的香味，使我感觉清新无比。我们先去玩了“步步惊心”，一进门就出现了一个女妖，接着出现各种妖魔鬼怪。出来时每一个都是脸色苍白，不愧是步步惊心。接着我们来到海盗船下，检票员阿姨接过票后，我们便上了船。船开始摇晃，摇晃越来激烈，尖叫就越大声。渐渐船恢复平静，一下船我们便直奔厕所，“大吐不止”。
时间接近黄昏，在我的提议下，我们稍作调整，去做温馨的摩天轮。在摩天轮中，我们决定做一下过山车就回家。我们陆续坐上过山车，只听见“呜”的一声，过山车出站了，我提心吊胆的，生怕机械出故障，过山车又“呜”的一声进站了，一下来我手心都是汗。
在黄昏的照映下，我们又回到了迷人的家乡，虽然只有短暂的一天，我却觉得，只要和爸爸妈妈还有姐姐一起玩，就很愉快。
