一次旅行经历英语中考作文(我的一场旅行英语作文初一)

一次旅行经历英语中考作文(我的一场旅行英语作文初一)

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一次旅行经历英语中考作文(我的一场旅行英语作文初一)

一次旅行经历英语中考作文【一】

不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。人生在世,总有一些让人难以忘怀的经历,在经历过一些风风雨雨之后,我们总能成长起来。

在我所经历的事情中,有欢笑,有泪水,而最让我难忘的一次经历则是去年暑假的夏令营。

那是我第一次一个人出远门,也是第一次参加夏令营这样的活动,临走的前一晚父母难免会唠唠叨叨个不停,而我自己心里也有些害怕与不安。

到了营地,已经是深夜了,天上的星星眨了眨眼仿佛在跟我们问好,我们驻扎在郊外,扎起帐篷,铺好床铺,准备休息。虽然我们是六个人住在一个帐篷里,但我的心里还是伴随着恐惧感,在这样的情况下,我怎么也睡不着,就这样度过了一个漫长的夜晚。

第二天,天刚蒙蒙亮,我们就被一阵哨声叫起,按照今天的活动行程,我们要去爬山,我心里想:“爬上好玩,多有趣啊。”哪知爬山是没有那么轻松的。我们到达了山脚下,老师让我们分成两组人马比赛爬山,一组六人,分别从山的东边和西边开始爬,没有带队的老师。我们一听可吓坏了,没有带队的老师我们几个孩子万一出事怎么办,万一遇上狼,种种不祥的预感在我脑海里浮现。不管它了,走一步算一步吧,世上无难事,只要肯登攀。我们要拿出点勇气来。

比赛开始了,刚开始我努力的往上爬,但未爬到一半就已经筋疲力尽了,这是我的通判搀扶着我往上爬并给予我鼓励,我又有了很大的信心使劲全身力气晚上爬。爬了一半多的路程已经到中午了,我们坐在一个小石头上吃饭,大家都拿出自己的食物互相分着吃,每个人脸上都洋溢着笑容,我想这就是分享快乐吧。吃完饭后,我们继续往上爬,不料途中出现了意外,我们队里有一个人脚扭伤了,大家十分焦急,这可怎么办是好呢。于是我们冷静下来商量了一个对策,每个人轮流背着她上山,事不宜迟赶紧行动。途中我们有好几次想要放弃,但有种意念让我们坚持了下来,终于爬到山顶了,我们一个个满头大汗,但是我们赢了,在老师宣布我们胜利的那一刻,我们高兴极了,这就是我们互相团结互相帮助换来的胜利。“我能勇敢面对困难了,我长大了。”我高兴的对着山谷大喊。这次夏令营教会了很多我在书本上学不到的东西,是它让我成长起来,让我知道了遇到困难不退缩大家要团结一致的道理,我永远忘不了这次美好的夏令营。

这就是让我难以忘怀的一次经历,这就是让我刻骨铭心的一次经历。

一次旅行经历英语中考作文【二】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

一次旅行经历英语中考作文【三】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

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