一次北京旅行英语作文五年级【一】
7月21日，我们起床之后，赶紧准备东西，去爬长城。
我们要爬的是慕田峪长城。今天的天空阴沉沉的。天气预报说，今天会有暴雨。但这并没有扫我们的兴。我们带好雨衣，拿好雨伞，出发了。
我们上了车。车足足开了两个小时左右才到达目的地。这时，雨已经开始下了，不过只是毛毛雨而已。穿上雨衣，我们到长城的售票处买了票，便进去了。
我们坐缆车到了长城。慕田峪长城多建在外侧陡峭的崖边，依山就势，以险制厄。墙体高七八米，墙顶宽四五米，建筑材料以花岗岩为主。我看了一下，每块石头大约长2米、宽0.5米、厚0.3米。而且，在建长城时，人们并没有水泥，砌长城用的是一种特殊的配方，主要是糯米。而那种配方的硬度并不亚于高级水泥，这就是古人智慧的力量，才使这座长城千年不倒。
我们登上了长城。这时，长城上云雾缭绕，爸爸说，如果没有雾，就可以看到长城最雄伟的景。长城很宽，可容得下三辆小汽车同时行驶。每隔数千米，都会有一个烽火台。每个烽火台大约有十二米高，大约有七米宽。走到里面，里面有很多间室，还有一个楼梯通向烽火台顶端。我爬上去后往下面看，只见长城两边是原始森林，根本无法想象以前人们是怎么把大石块运上来的。
都说在晴朗的天气里爬长城最好，可是我今天却看到了不一样的长城。白色的雾一部分被风扯成一条条的，撞击在长城上。走进雾里，感觉在仙境里一般。在这里完全不会感受到夏日的酷热，只是凉爽的风。
雨一直不停，我们必须得赶回去了。可开到安定门前的时候，路彻底被淹了。叔叔开着大别克车，小心翼翼的往前挪，周围不断有车冒烟火。叔叔、爸妈都心急如焚，妈妈不断的祈祷。终于，半小时的路，我们用了两个小时，从一堆火的车里，挪了出来。回到酒店，我们打开电视，才知道，我们遇到了多年难遇的大雨，同时看到电视直播抢救那位遇难司机的过程。。
一次北京旅行英语作文五年级【二】
偶然翻动书页，竟从中滑落一片银杏叶，纵式的纹理在叶面上凸显，好似褪去金黄色外衣的古老油纸。
记忆的船缓缓摇进时间的河。那一次，我与北京相约。
火车驶了一夜才到北京，一下车便仿佛步入一个鼎盛的王朝。飞檐流金，霓虹溢彩，城门与高架桥齐飞，名园与广场一色，传统元素与新潮流相处和谐，我不禁高呼：“北京，我来啦！”
犹记得老舍的《四世同堂》中，那草木葳蕤的小羊圈胡同，沉淀着爱国主义者的深情，承载着亡国的苦难。辗转乘了几次地铁，出站南锣鼓巷，眼前并无高楼，而是用朴素的灰铺就的迂回巷道，如走进老屋时撞见的插在旧瓶中的一支芦苇，虽朴素平常却拨动内心的弦，百转千回。
北京人是善于在平凡中寻找情趣的。“总布胡同”“炒豆胡同”，从这些名字中依稀可以窥见那牵动人们生活的炊烟，轻轻淡淡地笼住几声鸟鸣，继而在蓝天散去。走入一条胡同，蓦然与一宅院邂逅。据说那是清代某户贵族的府邸，一道道高墙封住了闺中人对秋天的所有情思，唯见一棵银杏似哨兵高高瘦瘦地立着，小扇似的金叶缀了满满一枝头，风吹叶摇，一纸一纸的金黄翩跹飞落，似蜻蜓颤动金色的翅膀。
休息片刻，便去了香山。面前不是五岳般的险峻山峰，而是绵长开阔的缓坡，两旁的店铺鳞次栉比：暖黄的葫芦上飘着红丝带；京剧的生旦净丑，或巧笑倩兮，或怒睁嗔目，或花脸招摇……这一切怎能不唤起对传统文化的认知？
香山的枫叶只尖上泛点点朱色，似小姑娘脸上泛起的红晕。倒是银杏花枝招展，戴着金色的步摇，一步乐，一步一欢笑。
“那里，那里！”循着人们欢喜的目光看去，一棵枫树，“小枫一夜偷天酒”，秋日的醉意给它抹上了烈焰红唇，舍不得碰——红得那么透明，那么彻底，是秋日天空下璀璨的红水晶。于是乎，捡一落叶，聊以纪念。
火车穿过无边的田野，回头看，京都的轮廓渐渐淡出视线。掏出那枚红叶再看，它分明描绘了古都的历史，绣出了明日的辉煌。
一次北京旅行英语作文五年级【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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