进行时态的作文英语五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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进行时态的作文英语五年级【二】
每当月亮下班，天色朦胧，小鸟就早已飞上枝头欢叫；每当黄昏降临，天际的云朵被映得五彩斑斓。坐在窗前，小品一杯香醇的茶，手捧一本名书，浓郁的茶香伴着书的幽香，真让人感到惬意！
梦想，如书籍一般伴随着每一个人。不同在于，书是无处不在，伸手可得的.。而梦想却忽近忽远，让人摸不透，抓不着，怎么样才能追上梦想的脚步呢？今日，让我们迎着夕阳余晖，品着香茶甜点，慢慢的切入真题吧。
梦想，相信每个人都有吧，不管他多么伟大或多么渺小。遥遥梦想路，需要的书籍不止一本。每一个职业都需要一本书，一本内心认为有用的书，一本充满名人至理、世间人情、知识丰富的书。
像我们班，每一个同学书包里都备着几本课外书，一到课间无作业时就拿出来看几页，放松一下紧张的大脑。我，可以说是标标准准的书呆子，不信，瞧！寂静的夜，房子里的灯光依旧通明，我坐在床上，手捧《爱的教育》滋滋有味地看着，不一会儿，就响起了妈妈对我这样做的不满声：“我的小祖宗啊！11点34分啦！你开着灯让人怎么睡啊？”切，言下之意就是让我别在这么晚看下去了。哼，难不倒我！我下楼跑到客厅，打开灯继续看。
由上所述，孜孜不倦的读书，天天坚持着积累。定能让你向着你的梦想前进！当然，每个职业都离不开书籍：医生需要医书；工程师需要建筑书；糕点师需要甜点书；老师需要一本教科书……这年头，就连家用电器都有一份说明书，你说，你能不读书吗？
我曾读过一首诗：“盛年不再来，一日难再晨。及时当勉励，岁月不等人。——陶渊明。”陶渊明是中国第一位田园诗人。后世称靖节先生，田园诗派第一人。他爱读书。这首诗告诫人们要珍惜时光，好好读书。连热爱田园生活的陶渊明都已告诫人们了，我们能不反省并且开始读书吗？
书，多的可以铺成一条路，为什么我们不走这条充满幽香的路，而选择另一条有许多未知数的路呢？尽管有许多人不得不选另一条，可是你们真的争取了吗？我在此种下一颗种子：请中国人民人人手持一本书，没事读一读，让中国成为“书香之国”！让上海成为“书香城市”！我希望并不是我一个人浇这颗种子，我期待它长成参天大树！
最后，让我们一齐，由书香伴着，踏向梦想之路，完成我们的梦想之旅！
进行时态的作文英语五年级【三】
教室墙壁上被调皮鬼涂鸦成“大花脸”，窗户盖上一层厚厚尘埃“被子”。班长拿起扫把敲锣鼓似的敲起垃圾铲，说：“开战！”话音刚落，同学们倾巢涌动，热火朝天地开始大扫除了。
首战告捷
我提着桶，迅速地跑到厕所接水。我提着满满的一桶水，小心翼翼的走进教室，倒上洗衣粉，拿起抹布，放在水里搅动，一个个色彩斑斓的泡沫蹦了出来，浮在水面上。我的桌子已是满目疮痍：五颜六色的彩笔印记、铅笔印痕、钢笔印痕，惨不忍睹。我从桶里捞出毛巾用力的擦桌子，但是水太少了，我干脆提起桶往桌子上到上一些水，水顺着桌面边沿“吧嗒 、吧嗒”地往下流，我趁机拿起抹布给桌子“洗澡”，笔印、污垢慢慢消退。桌子立刻崭新如初，我长长地吁了一口气。
泼水大战
下一个战场就是窗户了。我爬上了凳子，拿起抹布灰奋力挑战灰尘，灰尘立刻消失的无影无踪，窗户透亮透亮的。像空气一样透明。我正干得起劲，不知道哪个同学把水泼到我背后，把我淋成了“落汤鸡”。还有几滴脏兮兮的水乘机钻进我的嘴巴里，咸咸的。气煞我也！我扯着喉咙骂道：“可恶的家伙！谁干的？要是被我逮到，非要把你打成蜜蜂窝！”我还没骂完，教室里顿时水花四溅，有的同学拿起抹布甩水、有的同学干脆一手提着桶一手泼水，有的`同学拿矿泉水瓶做成水枪朝别人射水、有的同学狼狈出逃……教室里硝烟四起，一场泼水大战正式开始了！笑声、猪般的尖叫声、大喊声萦绕在教室的上空。
王者归来
一场激烈的水战后，地板上洒满了水，同学们纷纷拿起武器——扫把，风卷残云般把水、垃圾赶出门外。但是教室似乎要和我们作对，像出汗似的，总是有一小部分水来回游动。最后老师想出了一个好主意——用抹布吸水。经过我们热火朝天的奋斗，教室焕然一新。 同学们都像打完胜仗的战士列起了长龙队，在教室里雄赳赳气昂昂走着、庆祝着。
虽然大扫除很累，但是也是令人回味无穷，同学们团结在一起实力真强大。
进行时态的作文英语五年级【四】
今天一早，春游的车子还没有走，同学们开心的聚在一起：有的在讨论今天中午吃饭谁和谁一组，有的玩石头剪刀布，还有的玩一米一米三。过了一会儿，我们都开开心心的上了车。
大约过了一个小时，我们到了目的地------雨花台。那里的人可真多啊，还有好多军人在巡逻。一路上，大家说说笑笑，陈立卓还把她的帽子借给了我，我把帽子戴了上去。陈立卓、陈雨璇、方泽凯都说我像淘气包马小跳，这时有一些解放军叔叔看见了都在笑我呢。
接着，我们又上了车，这次我们要去科技馆了。没过一会，我们就到了科技馆。刚到那边我一口气喝掉了整整一瓶水。一进去，大家就看见了五个大字：虫虫总动员，这是一部电影的名字。然后我们进了科技馆。我们看到了宇宙里面的：地球、火星、水星、木星、土星、天王星、海王星。下面我们去吃了午饭，之后导游带我们去看了一部电影，名字我不大记得了，不过电影主要讲的是雪人和圣诞老人。
最后我们依依不舍的离开了科技馆。愉快的一天过去了。收获疲惫的同时也收获了很多知识。
进行时态的作文英语五年级【五】
今天，我非常兴奋，因为今天要去春游。到了湖滨北路的集合地点，我发现全校同学都在那，简直乱成一团！我在人群中找来找去，终于找到了我们班。休息了一下，我们上车了，可是车厢里好吵，所以我用玩手机游戏来打发时间。
过了一个多小时，终于到达了目的地南沙滨海公园。这里有好多游乐设施。导游让我们先坐的是滑行龙。等到我要坐的时候，我又害怕又好奇，坐在龙身上，龙开始滑行了，一开始还不怎么快，到了转弯时，龙就好快了，我都差点呕吐了。紧接着下一个项目是旋转秋千，坐上它，你会感到像飞起来一样，这个秋千还会旋转，可以让人感到是在天空畅游。
我们玩的最后一个项目是旋转木马，很多同学还没坐的时候都说：切！幼稚！干嘛坐这么无聊的！可是坐的时候和之前说的话的感觉完全不一样了，木马一摇一摆地感觉还有一点刺激。
在吃午餐的时候，有几个同学把食物扔来扔去的，其实，是某个同学想给自己的好朋友分享食物，可好朋友不想吃就扔回去了。爱护珍惜食物是很好的习惯，千万别抛在地上浪费了！
饭后休息时间，蒋浩楠同学看到很多同学拎着小鸡，小鸭，倉鼠。于是，他也想买一只小鸡，并叫我和他一起去，我答应了。我们去问那已经买了小鸡的同学，他们都把手指指向一个地方，到那里，只有一筐小鸡了,没有看见卖小鸡的人。蒋浩楠有点胆小就没去问别人，所以这次就空手而归了。第二次，我们去问旁边的阿姨，没想到她就是老板娘。我没有买，因为我记得学校旁边有卖的才两元一只，这里全是卖十元一只。
最后老师把我们带到一个大草坪，在那里我们可以自由活动。
哈哈！春游可真开心！
