五年级英语作文黄山【一】
我一见到那雄伟的天都峰，就想：我一定要爬上去！我看看地图它的高度有1810米，啊，真叫人发颤！于是我们开始向上爬。刚爬到四分之一的路程，我就害怕起来，因为下面到处是悬崖峭壁。这时我看到一位老奶奶也在爬天都峰，满头白发，她说今年有70岁了。我想：难道我都比不过她么，那就太差劲了！我马上鼓起勇气，指着天都峰大叫：“天都峰，我和你拼了！”在我的前面有许多的难关，如：钻山洞、上石阶、过陡坡。。。。。。在钻山洞的时候，有的人侧着身子慢慢的`过去，有的人扭着过去，还有的蹲着爬过去。在上石阶的时候，所有人都得小心翼翼，因为它是垂直90度的，看上去是一条竖线。终于，我们一家人来到天都峰最难的“关卡”——鲫鱼背。鲫鱼背宽不到一米，长有十几米，向鲫鱼的背一样弯起来，两边是万丈深渊。这时我吓得都要哭出来了，怎么也不敢过。老爸说：“别怕，爸爸先走，我会扶着你的。”而老妈是拄着拐杖在后面保护着我才过去的。最后我们克服了那个胆小鬼的我来到了山顶！老妈指着远处的山顶说：“你看，那是很美的天际线。”
后来我们又爬到对面的迎客松站，听导游说，这是一棵1200多年的迎客松，每年都有很多游客来看它。因为人太多了我们都没办法和它好好照个相，妈妈告诉我它长得样子就像做出欢迎你的动作，所以叫迎客松。
今天我成功地度过了一次难忘的人生考验！
五年级英语作文黄山【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文黄山【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文黄山【四】
开始，我们从山底下向半山腰爬。一路上走走停停，累了就休息一会儿。经过我们的努力，在爬上半山腰之后，我们又开始向着光明顶出发。好在我们不怕辛苦终于来到了山顶。我站在山顶上感叹到：“黄山的山真高啊，像一把利剑直插云宵。黄山的风真柔啊，像母亲温暖的怀抱。黄山的水真甜啊，像甘甜的乳汁。过了一会儿，起风了，黄山的云雾千变万化，一会儿像一条腾空而起的龙；一会儿像一位亭亭玉立的`少女；一会儿像一朵盛开的荷花，美丽极了。
在下山的时候，我看到了盼望已久的迎客松，迎客松真名不虚传。这株举世闻名的松树，已有一百多年的历史了。经过无数的风吹雨打，依然纹丝不动，挺拔的屹立在黄山山顶。这株松树有笔直的树干，有翠绿的，一簇堆在另一簇的上面，全部集中在两根一高一低的树枝上，从远处看，松树像个专业的服务员在欢迎游客的到来。从迎客松的树枝上垂直向下看，树枝正好对着上山的石梯，这样一来，就更像服务员在招呼游客了。
后来，我们又看了黄山著名的奇石。我的眼睛最尖，看见“梦笔生花的旁边还有一个石老人，手里握着一根渔竿，这就是“姜太公钓鱼了，“姜太公还回头看我们，好像在和我们打招呼呢！再左右一瞧，忽然间又发现姜太公的旁边有另一座山峰，上面有一对夫妻，正在面对面谈天。在听过导游的仔细解说后，我才了解到，原来这就是“夫妻谈心石，心里不禁感叹到黄山的奇石可真有趣呢！
一天下来，登山过程的确实让我们感到很疲惫，可一路上美丽的风景让我们忘记了疲劳，我们看了黄山的迎客松、光明顶、奇石……看到了黄山的雄伟，黄山的秀丽。我们从不同的角度看发现了它不同于寻常的美，真是移步换景，风光无限。黄山确实是名不虚传啊！
五年级英语作文黄山【五】
今天是我在婆婆家的最后一天了，所以舅舅一大早就带我们出去爬“黄山了。呵呵，偷偷得告诉你，此“黄山非彼黄山。“黄山全名是黄石山，当地人都简称它为“黄山。
我们一路上跌跌撞撞，哼着小歌，愉快地到达了目的地。我们继续开车上去，但是这边山路比较陡。舅舅刚加速上了一个坡，但眼前马上就是一个下坡路。车里顿时一片尖叫，犹如坐了一辆刺激的.过山车，惊心动魄极了。
我一下车，就看见了雄伟的黄石山的准大门，我迫不及待地冲了过去。此刻，我闻着花草的清香，听着鸟儿欢快的鸣叫声，感受着新鲜的空气，觉得生活充满了无数的乐趣。
我们越爬越累，不知如何是好。这时候机智的舅舅站了出来。他像福尔摩斯一样想了想，然后说：“我们可以找一根长树枝柱着走，这样就可以减轻点咱们的压力，是不是?我们想想也是。于是开始四处寻找树枝。我左找找，右找找，始终没有找到满意的树枝。正当我准备放弃的时候，我一不小心被一个东西绊着了。我看了看地上的东西。顿时两眼冒光，因为这是一根粗细刚好的树枝。这简直就是“踏破铁鞋无觅处，得来全不费工夫呀，我高兴坏了。
在爬上的过程中，我了解到黄石山是中国四大砚山之一，当地生产著名的黄石砚。这可把我激动坏了，连忙拍下照片收藏，回去后可以向同学们好好炫耀一把了。
但时间好像被按上了加速键，一转眼就到了晚上，我们只能恋恋不舍地回家了。如果下次再有机会，我一定会带上我的小伙伴们，一起来好好玩玩哦!
