我眼里的春天英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我眼里的春天英语作文五年级【二】
冬的情趣， 四季之中是谁也比不上的。瞧啊，雪花给大地和房屋铺上了一层厚棉被，北风把流淌的`小河冻成了晶莹的玉带。这些都是冬天送给我们的礼物。
所有的窗玻璃上都结了一层薄霜，像一幅幅奇异的窗帘。上面有卧龙般的山，奔腾的骏马，还有热带雨林的花草和小动物。这些大自然的杰作，好像要把人带到世界各地去旅游。
冬天里，孩子们最高兴了。每当下雪的时候，小朋友们总是兴高采烈地在雪地里进行激烈的雪球战，有的也在堆雪人。他们的脸个个都冻成了‘‘红苹果’’，手被冻成了“胡萝卜”，但是还在雪地里追逐嬉戏。看，那几个女孩子堆得雪人多么可爱呀！上面还有粉色的蝴蝶结呐！
冬天还要过春节呢，到时候，我们小孩子又可以吃饺子、贴春联、放鞭炮了，家里老小欢聚一堂，是多么的喜庆和热闹！
风吹来，玉屑似的雪沫纷纷扬扬。眺望这美丽风光，真有“千树万树梨花开”之感啊！冬天，虽然好冷，但给大家带来了无穷的欢乐！
我眼里的春天英语作文五年级【三】
很久以前就想写写父亲了，但拿起笔却无从下手，父亲对于我来说太沉重了，用语言不能轻易表达，我把父亲给我的爱珍藏在心中。
按说，人到中年，应该是精力最旺盛的时期，而父亲却因日夜的操劳，白发已悄然出现在头上。父亲不是大款，他没有足够的钱财让他的子孙可以一辈子受益；父亲也不是教师，他没有丰富的知识来教育他的子孙。但父亲每一句话，每一个眼神，都让我欢喜。特别是父亲的手，那是一双饱经风霜的手，一双勤劳善良的手。他的手粗糙得像木头一样，爬满了一条条深深的“沟”，长出了几个硬硬的茧花。手上面的每一个印记，都是父亲辛苦勤劳的见证。这双手创造了财富，使我们一家人生活得幸福快乐。
父亲教会了我做人的道理。我在上小学的时候，有一天和一位同学吵架，为了报复他，我把他的书本扔了。后来被老师知道，告诉了我父亲。周末回家，父亲毫不留情地给了我一把掌。事过之后，父亲又耐心地教育我，使我懂得了要团结同学的道理。
父亲有严厉的一面，但更多的是慈爱和温暖。还记得那个雨夜我发高烧，爸爸不顾一切抱着我走到医院。虽然，当时我被烧得迷迷糊糊，但是，我感觉到了他的温暖。在医院里，我躺在病床上打着点滴。他抚摸着我的头，轻声地说：“小丽，快睡吧！睡一觉就好了，睡一觉身上就不痛了！”
我时常望着父亲忙碌的身影想，爸爸我该如何报答你呢？
我眼里的春天英语作文五年级【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
