写你对北京的了解英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写你对北京的了解英语作文五年级【二】
大家都知道去北京必须去的旅游景点吧!没错，那就是长城、故宫、天坛和鸟巢水立方，我今天就去了我今天就去了长城，都说“不到长城非好汉”不去那儿怎么行呢?
我们来到了长城脚下，景象却令我大失所挫，这哪是长城呀这完全就是个集市嘛!长城脚下的纪念品琳琅满目，各式各色样样都有，我们随便找了一个人问才明白：原来长城还没有到，还要往上走。这时大家看到了缆车，都要去做，不过，我们小孩不同意，但是少数服从多数，大人们凭借着人多的优势把我们拉去坐缆车了。在缆车上我们往下看，哇塞，只见长城像一条大蛇一样，在陡峭的山上滑行似的，我现在真惊叹古代人的工艺呀!
到了一半，我们就开始爬了，爬了一会儿，我发现长城每隔一会儿就会到一个“回”字形的一个小碉堡，是供古代人站岗和休息的，让我不禁想起了“烽火连三月”的情景。大家都说长城奇是奇在建在陡峭的山峰和长的，但我认为长城奇还因为虫子种类繁多，这里到处都是虫子，七星瓢虫、红蜘蛛、黑寡妇......样样都有!还有一些不知名的小虫，在长城上，你只要随便一看，都会是虫子!刚开始爬都是，我们一起的，可是后来，家长们越爬越慢，路越爬越陡峭，于是我爬一段陡峭的地方就等一下后面的家长，等他们过来后就继续追前面的妹妹他们。当我们登上长城时，又做了滑道下来，滑道是一个非常危险的体育运动，稍有不慎，就有可能被抛入山野中，我是和妈妈做的，我来控制快慢，往前推就是快，往后拉就是慢，妈妈叫我，一直慢慢的走，可是后面的爸爸一直追着我们不放，我们只得快一点点，到了最后一个弯，我跟妈妈讲，都最后一个弯了，就刺激一下吧!妈妈同意了，于是我把杆子往前使劲一推，滑轮立刻飞快的冲了出去，哇，太刺激了，就像是墨杜萨台风袭来一样!就这样我们回到了长城脚下。一路上，我都在回味那儿的景色。
亲身体验的比从书上看到的就是不一样!
写你对北京的了解英语作文五年级【三】
自从学了关于首都北京的课文，我就一直向往着去看一看，想不到这个暑假完成了愿望。有一天清晨，妈妈忽然发现过两天的高铁有票，于是马上抢，居然抢到。因为外公家族那边都是铁路人，所以我很想坐一坐据说最快的铁路——高铁。这样就可以一次过满足了我的两个愿望——坐高铁去北京！
当我踏上高铁，感觉许多东西都很新奇。车厢里很干净，没有其他火车那样有股异味，车上有洗手池，冷热热水，每个车厢还有显示列车的时速，最快居然达到309公里的时速，好快啊！
经过八个小时的车程，我们在下午到达了北京西站。因为妈妈去过许多次北京，而且做好了攻略，所以很快就到了入住的酒店——北京首都大酒店。听说这酒店以前只接待外宾的，但现在我们也能入住。晚上我们去了附近著名的王府井大街。北京街头有许多警察，北京西站有，王府井大街这也有。我们去了很出名的全聚德吃烤鸭。虽然味道不错，但我觉得还是我们广东的＊＊＊鹅更好吃更便宜。
接下来几天，我们没有去人挤人的著名景点，因为妈妈说北京城里都是景。我们去了恭王府、北海公园、北京＊＊＊等，还去了许多很有特色的胡同。恭王府听说是清朝一个的家里，真的好大好大，我们足足逛了一个多小时才走完。府里面有许多房子，还有山和湖，就好像一个大公园一样。这次旅程北京＊＊＊是我们必去的地方，因为课本上写得很好。我们是下午去看降旗的，虽然＊＊＊广场非常大，但很多人，当看到解放军叔叔降下旗，护旗经过金水桥进＊＊＊时，大家都很激动。北京的胡同真多，而且很漂亮，在一处街头，我看见一间很有中国特色的房子，他的屋顶是尖尖的，门窗红红绿绿的，最漂亮是那些窗子上的玻璃，七彩缤纷，好漂亮啊！
北京真的很美，怪不得以前的皇帝都把这作为首都。这次的五天旅行实在不够，我希望有时间再来！
