一个城市五年级英语作文【一】
深圳是我最喜欢的城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候，我可以去海边看日出，或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候，去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了，我要为这所城市作出贡献，让她变得更好。
一个城市五年级英语作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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一个城市五年级英语作文【三】
进入大门，首先映入眼帘的是花坛、喷泉和那平如明镜的'湖水。在大门广场的右边，是一个鸽舍。每天都有许多人到这来喂鸽子。瞧那一只只大腹便便、左摇右摆的鸽子多可爱啊！
继续向前走，不到50米便会有一些租船的码头。登上一只小船，任那春风吹拂着你的脸庞……春风吹起水浪，水浪拖着孤舟，鸟雀在树上欢乐地唱歌……一切都是那样地生机勃勃，让人仿佛置身于世外桃源之中，完全忘了这是在繁华喧嚣的城市里。
小船，渐渐地驶入了湖的深处；风景也越来越美。绿树怀抱着翡翠般的湖泊，鸟儿在漫天飞舞，花朵竞相开放，十分美丽。
之后，小船驶向中心，像一个小岛驶去。小岛不大，但是风景很美丽。岛上还有一个吊床。当你平躺在吊床上，仰望天空，便会不由的哼唱“蓝蓝的天上白云飘，白云下面马儿跑……”
在滨湖公园一片茂密的森林里，有一个面积不算太大但也不能说小的游乐园。这儿有飞毯、碰碰车、旋转木马……我最喜欢玩的就是卡丁车了。想象一下：你坐在卡丁车上，手握方向盘，脚踏油门与刹车，在赛道上尽情奔驰……那该是多么开心啊！
当夜幕即将降临，人们渐渐的散去时，来这儿散步最好。夕阳西下，在湖面上洒满了金光。仰望远方，一栋栋高楼大厦拔地而起，夕阳的余光洒在每一座大楼、每一户人家的窗户上，令人心旷神怡。此时此刻，那一座座大厦似乎在遥望滨湖公园这颗宝珠，如痴、如迷。而我也沉浸在了这一片美景中，如痴、如迷……
