museum写一篇英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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museum写一篇英语作文五年级【二】
孩子：
这次的期终考试你完全没有发挥出自己正常的水平，可以说你输给了自己。妈妈看到分数后很难过，很想恶狠狠的批评你。可是我知道：你自己肯定也很难过!妈妈又是急脾气，怕当面教育你，会忍不住对你发火，所以妈妈为了不和你”吵架”,打算写下来，只希望你学会反思，学会吸取教训，学会绝地反击。
首先，你要知道每一次的考试都是对自己最好的检验。所有平时的努力都是为了一次小小的检验，我们没有良好的考试运气，且运气靠不住，所以只能靠自己的实力，实力哪里来，取决于平时的点滴积累，平时的脚踏实地，平时的主观重视。
第二，一次的失利不代表什么，也决定不了你以后的人生，但失利以后的反思和觉醒是关键，你要学会从中找到原因并知道如何去弥补，今后不再犯同样的错误。人一辈子犯错的可能性很多，如何尽自己最大的努力少失利，少犯错才是毕生要思考的问题。
第三，希望你思考一下学习到底为了什么?你的学习目标是什么?达到这个目标你有多大的阻碍?你要如何克服阻碍实现自己的目标?人一辈子不能庸庸碌碌的活着，你可以另类，可以与众不同，但不可以对自己没有要求。妈妈说的要求，是让自己越来越成熟、越来越进步、每天都有良好的收获。
第四，物以类聚，人以群分。男孩子的朋友圈很重要，要交益友，交一些比自己更出色的朋友，那样从他们身上可以学到你自己欠缺的东西。对待损友，要避而远之，不要让他们身上的一些恶习影响到自己，同时要学会拒绝损友，有时必要的得罪人，也是不可避免的，但你得罪一次，起码以后这些损友不会再来纠缠你。
第五，读书的习惯一定要学会自己安排，坚持不懈。比如认真记笔记，比如错题本总结整理，比如制定学习计划坚持落实，比如遇到难题自己肯钻研攻克。这些习惯听起来很简单，妈妈也知道真正落实起来，没有决心、恒心和韧性往往就半途而废了，所以一定要学会自己不停的鞭策自己，这样的生活可能会很累，但习惯了，这就是一种生活方式，你也就不会觉得累了。接下来的寒假，希望你自己做好肯吃苦，不怕累的准备，好好总结自己学习上的薄弱环节，学会查漏补缺。
妈妈觉得这次的考试是你人生中第一次的失利，(因为这次的'考试挺关键的，而你没有正常发挥妈妈相信你的实力远远不止于286分。所以没关系，只有经历过失败后刻骨铭心的痛，才能为来之不易的成功而努力。妈妈相信你一定能面对此次教训，开始真正意义上努力。我们的小升初一定能打一个漂亮的翻身仗。
你愿意为了自己的人生而努力吗?妈妈期待着你的实际行动。所以擦干眼泪，不要让他白流。
妈妈
20xx年XX月XX日
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【三】
??个人在家-五年级某天晚上，爸爸和妈妈都出差了，只留下幼小的我待在家中。
爸爸妈妈走后，我兴奋地想：今晚只有我一个人待在家里，终于可以好好玩耍咯！我一脸开心地坐在沙发上，刚准备打开电视，突然，狂风大作，“轰轰轰的雷声也响了起来。我开始紧张，把自己缩成一团。“滴答滴答——闹钟走动的声音，“沙沙沙——屋外树木的声音，“呼呼呼——窗帘开始不断飘动……我的心跳得越来越快，但我还是打开了电视缓解我的心情。刚打开电视，“啊！我大喊，竟然是鬼片，我捂着眼睛，连忙关掉了电视。“啪！整个屋子突然黑了下来，心想：不会吧，这个时候跳闸！我小心翼翼地来到阁楼，脑子里全是刚刚鬼片的画面。在阁楼寻找电闸时，我清晰地听见一楼清脆的脚步声，我更害怕了，慌张地想：是僵尸吗？或者是女鬼？不行，得藏起来！我停止了寻找电闸的脚步，转身把阁楼门关上。但由于关门的声音太大，楼下的那个“鬼好似已经听见，我赶紧藏进了阁楼的隐藏隔间。
几分钟之后，藏在隔间的我听见响亮的开门声，我开始震惊，“鬼已经来到了阁楼？那我岂不如同猎物被“鬼寻找着？我捂住嘴巴，眼泪悄无声息地流。许久之后，脚步声停止了，我从极小的`门缝观察着外面的一切，我喘了一口气，打开了门，“轰！一声雷响再次把我吓到，我连爬带滚地回到隔间，刚刚的一切让我感觉到难以置信。我开始冷静下来，认真分析：世界上不可能有鬼，一定是我的幻觉，估计是爸爸妈妈呢？我开始不再畏惧，勇敢地迈出第一步。我打开门，听见有人在说：“哎呀，我找不到她！天那么黑，不可能跑出去玩了！我像疯了似的跑了下去，看见了妈妈在打电话，我妈一脸生气，我抱紧妈妈，大哭了起来。最后我才知道，刚刚的脚步声原来是寻找我的妈妈。
一个人在家，真是一件可怕的事，但这件事，也让我不再畏惧。
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【四】
这次五一我玩的真是太痛快了，像李白醉酒。你们知道这是为什么吗？因为我和爸爸、妈妈一起到武汉玩。有在那里有许许多多学不尽的知识，就让我给大家讲解这段美好的“武汉游乐记”吧！
我向老师请假后就和家人们搭上了向武汉开往的火车妈妈在路上给我讲了武汉的旅游胜地。大概就在8点多钟的时候，我们就来到“汉口火车站”为什么我们来到的是“汉口火车站”，是因为武汉分为三大区有汉口、武昌、汉阳，武昌是学校区，汉阳是工厂区，汉口是商业区，所以我们来到的是汉口。
第1天，我们“武汉动物园”里玩，在那里有许多珍贵的动物。这里最威武的要数"非洲豹"，只见它一身乌黑发亮的皮上呈现出暗色的梅花状的图案，这种暗花需迎着光才能看见，还有四只雪白的爪子，一双发光的眼不时的扫过人群，不停地走来走去。我想如果不是铁网拦着，它早就回到它的家乡和伙伴们在一起嬉耍了。它专吃牛羊不说，还吃鳄鱼呢！
第2天，我们来到科技馆，真是不看不知道，一看吓一跳。有趣的是：我们一进门就看见一个悬在半空的没有水管的水笼头，正向下流着水，你能知道这水是从哪儿来的呢？呵，让我告诉你吧：它是运用水循环让人产生了错觉。好奇的是：风力发电。它是通过把大自然的风转为电能，风速越快，电能就越多。利用大自然为人类造福。还有好多知识，有关于利用光制作的喷雾电影、利用凹凸镜原理制作的看得见摸不着的东西……哇，真是科技真奇妙，我直觉得自己的知识太薄浅了。
你们看了报纸上介绍的武汉的"光谷"了吧，我顶着太阳来到了光谷场，一至三楼都是动漫世界，最让我兴奋的是四楼，这里简直就是一个科技大世界，里面是四核电脑，听介绍这些电脑都是戴尔公司从美国空运过来的，我们也在这些电脑上耍了一盘CS，太过瘾了。还开上了宝马F1赛车，坐在里面的滋味就是不一样。还有激动人心魔兽世界中韩对抗赛，在万人呼喊中，中国队获得了冠军。
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【五】
敬爱的老师：
您好
现在，我特别珍惜与您相处的日子，因为在过八十多天，我就要将离开母校，离开朝伴的老师了。您给了我多少关心和帮助，我的每一次成长和进步都凝着您的心。
记得我刚入学的时候，我胆子特别小，不敢与同学交往，下课总是一个人完。您发现后，亲切的与我交谈，您说，不要害怕，去完吧，从此我有了朋友，以后又增加了好多好多的朋友。
我记得有一次，我的作文的不对，你细心的给我讲，不是让我自己去写，你给我讲完后，我终于把作文写好，我从今以后，我就在也不怕写作文了。
啊!亲爱的蒋老师，您为我们付出了多少汗水和心，而今您的脸上又平添了几道皱纹，您的头上有多了几许银发，老师请您放心我决不会辜负您的深恩。
身体健康工作愉快
您的学生张少康
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【六】
亲爱的杨六斤小朋友：
你好！你最近学习好吗？今天，我们班举行了一次“手拉手”活动。刚谈起这个话题，我便想起了远方的你，于是我决定写一封信给你。
我叫王子阳，今年12岁。我是一位“小四眼”，有一双“小咪咪”的眼睛，一个高挺的鼻子和一张小小的嘴，我本觉得这张嘴挺好，可是数学老师却说这是一张“樱桃小嘴”，真是气得我直跳脚，我还有一对招风耳和一头乌黑油亮的头发。我很瘦，妈妈常笑我犹如一根修长的竹子，再戴上那副椭圆形眼镜，绝对是翻版的哈利。波特！
我热爱写作。我经常在爸爸妈妈的陪伴下来到户外，去体会生命的乐趣，一次微笑，一次皱眉，一次惊讶，一次经历，一次回忆……我都会用笔将它一一记下。由于我的作文真情实感，诙谐幽默，经常得到老师的好评。在休息的时候，我会弹一弹钢琴，那优美的音乐陶冶了我的情操，使我的性情变得很温和。此外，我还是一个名副其实的小书迷。书房里、客厅里……到处都有我的书。我常常因为看书而耽误了吃饭、睡觉，如果你有机会来到我家，我一定会邀请你一起观赏我的书籍哟！
我有一个美好的家庭，我的爸爸妈妈都很爱我。他们在我的学习中给了我莫大的帮助。妈妈总是陪我一起学习，并常常在我灰心丧气之时给我鼓励；在我成绩不理想时，她会耐心地给我找出失足之处。她是我学习之时最好的伴侣。在我的记忆中，她总是慈祥的。我的爸爸和蔼可亲，总是笑眯眯的，因此他的人缘很好。他是我家的顶梁柱，他不仅工作努力，而且关心家人。在闲暇时他常常带着我和妈妈去乡下游玩，使我那沉重的学习压力得以释放。在我的眼中，他们是天底下最好的父母！
怎么样？愿意和我交朋友吗？你能告诉我你的情况和家人吗？期待你的回信，希望我们能成为好朋友，让我们一起学习，一起进步……
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【七】
亲爱的西部的朋友们：
你们好！
虽然我们没有见过一面，但我愿意将真诚的心献给你身边的朋友，我叫赵晨旭，今年十三岁了，我是一个活泼的小女孩。也许你和我一样有着远大志向的小女孩或者是一个无忧无虑的小男孩。不管你那里的环境多么恶劣，但我们已经融入了对方的心里面，享受无限的友情，让我们手拉手，心连心，架一座友情的大桥。
我是瑞安市第二实验小学里面的学生，正在五年级下册，我们学校环境优美，每次节日都有组织节目，让我们看，让我们玩，如果心动了的话，赶紧过来到我们学校好好参观参观。
为了表达我的真诚，开展手拉手活动，我有几点建议：
1、可以写信，然后回信，就可以知道对方的情况。
2、每当重大的节日，把你们请过来看表演，玩游戏。
3、可以运用腾讯qq进行交流。
祝你
学习进步，更上一层楼！
你的朋友赵晨旭
20xx年3月1日
museum写一篇英语作文五年级【八】
亲爱的杨老师：
虽然这些话我可以当面对你讲，但我还是选择用书信告诉你。
你说你打字打得很慢，一个字大概要打十秒，基本上中午都没休息，都在帮我们打作文。我猜，如果有几篇文章审核未通过，那打这篇文章的时间就被白白浪费了，对吧？所以，我看见一篇审核通过的作文，就仿佛看到你开心、欣慰的笑脸，就觉得你心里在想：这么多天的努力，值了！
老师，我明白你的努力，或许你也想过放弃，但一想起我们作文发表时明媚的笑脸，心中燃起了斗志，又有了工作的动力！老师，感谢你对我们如此的认真。今天，我就此搁笔，因为您对我们的爱千言万语说不尽。
亲爱的老师，希望你以后不要这么辛苦了，要多多休息，可不要把身体搞坏呀！
祝你工作顺利，天天开心！
