成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
We take out our kites, mine are butterfly, my friends are birds, all are so funny. I start to let my kite fly, but it could not, so I run faster and faster, then my kite flies, I go let go it gradually. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites are also flying.
Seeing our kites flying, I feel so free. Today, I have a great time.
现在我已经放寒假了,我很开心,可以和朋友们玩。朋友们和我约定风来了,我们就去公园放风筝。今天风终于来了,早饭过后,我和朋友们去公园。我们拿出自己的'风筝,我的是蝴蝶样,朋友的是鸟的样子,都很有趣。我开始让风筝飞,但是飞不起来,因此我跑得越来越快,风筝终于飞起来了,我慢慢放飞。不一会儿,朋友们的风筝也飞起来了。看到我们的风筝飞着,我觉得很自由。今天,我玩得很开心。
In the early winter, the wind is a little strong, at this time, it is perfect to fly the kite. I am so excited about this activity, my friends and I will always compete to see who can fly the highest kite. When I see the kite, I play with my friends and we have the good time. Running in the playground makes me so happy.
早期的`冬天,风有点大,在这个时候,是非常适合放风筝的。对这个活动,我感到很兴奋。我和我的朋友们总是竞争,看谁能飞最高的风筝。当我看到风筝,我就会和朋友们一起玩耍,我们度过了美好的时光。在操场上奔跑让我感到快乐。
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