上海五年级英语作文天气预报【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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上海五年级英语作文天气预报【二】
今天，我去了上海复旦大学和中国馆。
首先，我在复旦大学的体育馆里打了羽毛球，又在学校的食堂吃了一顿午饭。然后参观了一下校园，觉得真美啊！著名的大学果然不同。
接着我离开了复旦大学，来到了中国馆。它外观以“东方之冠，鼎中华，天下粮仓，富遮百姓”为构思主题，表达了中国文化的精神与气质。它的大红颜色和特别的造型，看起来很雄伟。
后来我们到内部参观了清明上河图。清明上河图被媒体改造成动态的图画，里面的人、车、马、船、鸟、河流……都会动， 还 分白天和晚上。白天人们辛勤的劳动，黑夜安静极了。整个画面长达100多米，壮观极了。
接着看了哈定的艺术作品展，画的太像真的了。还有他学生的画，著名画家陈逸飞就是哈定学生之一。
最后我在轿车上兜了一圈，看见了月亮船形状的沙特馆、飞碟形状的奔驰展览馆，和美丽的世博园，可是因为天色已晚，所以没进去参观，有点遗憾！不过没关系，可以下次再来。
美丽的上海，快乐的一天！
上海五年级英语作文天气预报【三】
星期天，学校组织春游，我有幸参加了。
在去的路上我十分激动。到站了，我冲下车，跑向大门。大门景色真美！我班的七位同学一组。拉。项目有很多：蚂蚁王国，四维电影，上海滩……我们的第一个目标就是上海滩，里面的游戏有很多：大摆锤，鬼屋，过山车，碰碰车……其中最令我深刻的是大摆锤。看着他们从高空摔下，又从低处甩到高处……心不由得砰砰砰跳：如果我现在不玩的话，必会被同学们笑话。我决定了一定要玩。顺便挑战一下恐高的我。我心中暗暗的给自己加油鼓劲。上一批结束了，现在该我们了。我摸遍全身，把钱和发夹，全部放入橱柜。又蹲下身来把鞋带系紧。我慢慢坐上椅子，按下安全口开始游戏了，先是慢慢的左右摇摆，之后越摇越高，越摇越高，大约七八层楼高，上面的风大极了。吹的我几乎无法动弹，接着甩倒最高空时，在空中倒挂停留三秒左右，那是我几乎快要抓不住了，马上要掉下来心一直在冒汗，感觉马上就要被甩到湖里去了似的，这种感觉来回了好几次。我的心脏快要崩溃了。我在上面不停的尖叫，快要哭出来了。停止后，我慢慢的从椅子上下来，总算松了一口气。当脚触到地面时，我的脚发软，必须要扶着栏杆才行。
我不由得赞叹，好刺激但又很恐怖。我下次再也不敢玩了。真的好恐怖，还有更多刺激游戏等着你。胆大的你，敢去吗？
