八年级语文作文写法技巧(八年级怎么写好满分作文)

八年级语文作文写法技巧(八年级怎么写好满分作文)

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八年级语文作文写法技巧(八年级怎么写好满分作文)

八年级语文作文写法技巧【一】

The story is rearranged by a real story. Hatchi is an unusual dog which belongs to akita. The real Hatchi, the dog in this story, was born in Odatr Japan in 1923. As soon as his master Dr. Eisabour Uero, a professor at Tokyo University, died in May 1925. Hatchi returned to the Shibuya train station the next day after professor died and for the next nine years to wait, until Hatchi himself died.

In the movie Hatchi crossed an ocean and thousands of miles of transportation by train, and then he met Parker (the main actor in a snowy day. Because it was snowing and the dog, Hatchi, was lost. Parker took Hatchi back to his home, and then kept it. Parker treated it very well and so did Hatchi. When Hatchi had grown up, he fetched parker to work everyday.

All these years they played together, bathed together, slept together and Parker gave Hatchi full-body massage everyday. They just look like a couple. Parker looks happy because Hatchi is happy, and Hatchi’s happy due to Parker being happy. But Hatchi never fetched ball for anyone even Parker, so he went to his Japanese friend, Ken, for help. Ken told Parker that the akita will never get the ball unless there are some special reasons. However, Parker didn’t notice what Ken told him. In the morning of last day of Parker’s life, Hatchi felt that something bad would happen to Parker, and it tried his best to stop Parker going to work, and Hatchi fetched ball for Parker to tell him to stop. But it was pity that Parker only paid all his attention to Hatchi’s first fetching and ignored the special reasons of fetching. He said “Come on boy, I have to go to work or I’ll be late. See you at 5. Stay! Go home! Go on.” Finally, the old professor, Parker, hadn’t come back as he said, and he will never come back. He broke the engagement he made with Hatchi. He left everybody on the earth up to heaven. As the old professor’s friends and relatives nobody could accepted the fact that Parker has dead. As the result, professor’s wife, Kate, escaped all the staff which will let she recall the memories about Parker, so she sold the house where they used to live and was away from the small town. Meanwhile she sent Hatchi to her daughter, but Hatchi always ran out of her house, and try its best to back to station, because Hatchi and professor had a deal to meet each other. He’s so firmly persisted on the engagement that Parker’s daughter, Andy, had to gave up and let it go. While, have you ever noticed the detail that how unwilling Hatchi was when it left professor, because Hatchi can’t apart with Andy, too. But he missed Parker too much, he had to Andy and his warm home.

Then Hatchi spent ten years waiting for his master, his only friend coming back. Ten years time, maybe it is just one-tenth of a human life, but for a dog that means its whole life. During those years Hatchi hadn’t exact place to live, just come and go to the train station everyday at the same place and time.

Have you even considered why Hatchi spent all his life just for waiting? After a long time consideration, I find the answer in the end. The only reason is that Hatchi have nothing but his master. The happiest time of Hatchi is the time with Parker; the most enjoyable time of Hatchi is the time fetching Parker to work.

Just one year after Parker’s death, Ken came to the station and had a look at Hatchi. He felt as sorrow as Hatchi. He tried his best to persuade Hatchi to leave because Parker’s never coming back. But he didn’t succeed, and said “If Hatchiko wants to wait, then Hatchiko should wait. You want to wait for him, didn’t you? Then, you most have a long life.”

Then ten years past, Hatchi became a dirty and rather old guy. Over these years, everything had changed but Hatchi’s endless waiting and loyalty had never changed. One day Parker’s wife backed to the small town and saw Hatchi was still stand there waiting. She cried and said “You, old thing, you are still waiting, let me wait for the next train together with you please.” Hearing these tough words and seeing the loyal dog I cried sadly.

This is Hatchi’s whole life. He almost spent all his life only doing one thing—waiting for its only friend Parker, waiting to complete the uncompleted engagement.

Hatchi’s story showed how great the power of loyalty and love is with all his life. He tell us what the real loyalty and true love is. Because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi spent all his life waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi sacrisficed all his youth just for waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi abandon the warm house of Parker’s daughter. I think that is the real loyalty, the ture love. However, in our human life, how many of us can be as loyalty as an animal; how many person can be loyal to another one for even ten years? I think nobody can.

In the end of the film Parker’s grandson asked Kate “Where did grandpa found Hatchi?” She answered “I suppose that Hatchi happened to found your grandpa.” I believe that as soon as Parker and Hatchi happened to meet, Hatchi had already found its own destination, and then the loyalty and love was built.

Loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you and it won’t change in the next ten thousand years; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I will wait for you for the rest of my life; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you beyond myself. However, loyalty is a sense of responsibility; loyalty is a sense of selfness, loyalty is a sense of concern.

The word “loyalty” is consisting of 7 letters, and I think each letter stand for different meanings:

L —— Life

O —— Obligation

Y —— Yes

A —— Attention

L —— Love

T —— Total

Y —— You

Actually, to be loyal to someone is easy is easy to say, but hard to do. To be loyal, you should never forget anyone that you loved.

八年级语文作文写法技巧【二】

一、基础知识要复习到位。

1、本册课文中的生字词、古诗、要背诵的课文段落、练习中的熟记成语、积累……一定要背得滚瓜烂熟,听(默写正确。每次,看拼音写词语、按课文内容填空、古诗默写、名句填空等都是必考题,而且占的分数比例较大,如果这一类的知识牢牢地掌握了,考试必然不会太差。小学低年纪的形近字组词,也是考查的项目,我们在复习生字时,还可以联系到其它的形近字组词,让思维扩散开去。

2、学会梳理练习中的知识点。

语文的基础知识头绪较多,但每个学期都会有所侧重,这里的侧重训练点往往在练习中反映出来,因而我们在复习时不能忘记对练习的内容复习。如根据部首写字组词、改错字病句、关联词填空、加标点……这部分知识的复习,除了会做练习中的题之外,还应学会举一反三,解决这一类的问题。

二、阅读复习要注意方法。

小学中高年级,阅读在考试中占的分数比重较大,这一类题目怎样才能复习好呢?我们不妨翻看平时练习中的阅读题,看看出题的类型,平时错在什么地方,是答题不完整而失分,还是答题思路有偏差?找出错误原因之后,考试时注意纠正。做阅读题,不要一看短文就下笔,我们可以先看一遍短文,再读题,根据题目,找出短文中相应的内容,再读一读,联系前后文进行回答,答题之后,再读一读看看是否妥当。

三、的复习。

作文在考试中一般占试卷分数的30%或35%,我们复习时可以将自己平时写是较好的作文读一读,想想这篇文章写得好的原因是什么。考试时间有限,如果再来构思,可能就不一定来得及,我们在认真审题后,仔细想想平时写过的好作文是否有与之相符的,若有,则尽量用,这样省时,也不容易走题。

四、把每个单元的试卷再过好关。平时我们每个单元都会有小测验,到复习阶段,老师大多会将试卷发回,我们可以将试卷装订好,认真订正,查缺补漏。

复习的形式也可以多种多样,可以自己做好复习计划,有顺序地复习;可以同学之间结成学习对子或学习小组,相互竞赛地进行复习。只要找到适合你自己的复习的方法,认真复习,相信同学们一定能考出好成绩。

八年级语文作文写法技巧【三】

老师看着我们疑惑不解的表情,就宣布了游戏规则:以开火车形式说关于“笑”的词语,如果火车在哪里断了,就请那位同学上台表演节目。我们听了,都跃跃欲试。

游戏开始了,首先是第一组列火车先开动。“冷笑”、“爆笑”、“大笑……”一个个词语好像珠子一样从同学们口中迸出来,第一组顺利过关。接下来是第二组,前面的同学很顺利,但轮到睿希时,她说了几个词都是前面的同学说过的,老师让她上台抽签,准备表演节目,看她那一脸忐忑不安,便知她有多紧张,我们都替她捏了一把汗。她抽到了“哇哇大哭。”睿希很难为情,小脸憋得红红的,站在那里,一动不动。我想:睿希平时那么文静,可能不会做这个动作。出乎意料,她犹豫了一会儿后就握紧拳头揉着眼睛,哇哇地“大哭”起来。演得真像!教室里掌声雷动。游戏继续进行。钦鑫的.运气也“不好”,他冥思苦想,嘴巴像塞了棉花似的一声不吭,只好上台抽签。抽到的是什么?是“哈哈大笑”。这个表情容易,我恨不得冲上台表演。但是他做的表情很奇怪:张开嘴巴,又愁眉苦脸,好像在哭,又好像在笑,同学们都被他逗得哈哈大笑起来。

游戏在欢笑声中结束了。这节课我们不仅学到了许多词语,还收获了无限的快乐。

八年级语文作文写法技巧【四】

今天,是环球国际英语组织夏令营的第四天。晚上,老师给我们看了一场电影——《忠犬八公》。讲的是:

主人公帕克在车站捡到一只毛色金黄的小秋田犬,并把它带回了家。帕克的妻子十分不满意,总是让帕克送走小狗,但似乎是命中注定,这只小狗竟没人要。于是,妻子勉强同意了。帕克用小狗项圈上的数字给它起名“小八”。

一天,帕克和女儿正在院子里给小八练习捡球,妻子趁机打电话给朋友,问她要不要一只小狗,这时,妻子看到帕克脸上那可爱的笑容,突然对朋友说狗已经被送走了,就挂掉了。从此,小八就留了下来。

这几天,小八都在车站等主人帕克下班。有一天,帕克正要去上班,不八突然有点不祥的预感,从来不捡球的它叼起飞奔到帕克身边,不让他去上班。可帕克还是去了果然,帕克心脏病突发,了。但小八依然坚信他会回来,依然每天在车站门口等他……

看到这里,我的眼泪不禁涌出,是小八对帕克的爱感动了我!看完这部电影后,我想,其实动物有时比人更懂爱,只是动物不善于表达爱!

八年级语文作文写法技巧【五】

昨天,跟妈妈一起看了《忠犬八公》的电影,看了以后,觉得是一部很平淡的电影,一位教授、一只八公狗,还有很长时间的火车站的场景,但是当我看到电影的高潮的时候,从教授不幸后的每一分每一秒,小八都在火车站等着教授,我也从那时候起,泪流满面,妈妈也哭了起来,我们顿时控制不了自己的眼泪。

小八的坚持,小八的\'忠诚……这不禁让我想起了小八在想什么,九年,整整九年,小八都在等待,没有一刻休息过的,除了晚上睡觉,早上继续道火车站等着。我希望小八的每一天都是幸福的,小八每天希望教授的出现,可是最后又是失望,一天又一天,一年又一年,整整九年,最后的场景是小八变得十分苍老,也许这就是小八生命的最后一天了,教授夫人坐着火车回来了,看到小八还在等待,简直无法相信,就对它说:“我和你一起等下一班车,好吗?”这个时候妈妈和我又一次控制不住的情绪,大哭了起来。最后,小八慢慢地合上了眼睛,它在梦中肯定等到了它的主人,在回忆美好的生活。

多么忠诚的秋田犬,狗是人类的朋友,我们应该好好对待它们。希望人类不要暴力对待狗,因为它是我们忠实的朋友!

八年级语文作文写法技巧【六】

故事发生在1923年。一只可爱的小狗出生在日本一个寺庙里,它的名字叫“八公”。在它出生不久之后,它被作为礼物送给了美国的一位教授。从此,八公就和教授生活在一起,不管风和日丽还是风吹雨打,八公总是在车站接送主人。但不幸的是,它的主人因为突发心脏病在1925年去世了,可是八公还是执着地赶去车站等待主人的出现,这一等就是10年,最终,它还是离开了这个世界。

八公是一只了不起的狗。它有一个可爱的外表。披着一身金色的皮毛,一双能够看透人心思的眼睛和毛茸茸的身子。还有一个聪明的头脑,难能可贵的是它有一颗纯洁忠诚的心。在它很小的时候,一次,它的主人外出,它想送主人,但院子的围墙挡住了它的去路,于是它在墙角挖了一个洞钻了出去;由于他天天接送主人,日积月累,它和主人结下了深厚的感情,情同父子。它的主人去世后,它还是坚持去车站就是10年,最终忧郁而,满足了和主人在天堂团聚的愿望。

八公就是一个纯洁忠诚的化身,一个人间的天使。

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