一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
在远方的你,过得好吗?
我想你了……
你还记得吗?有一次,和你在网上聊天,出现在荧幕上的两个词如强大的磁场立刻吸引了我的眼球。“腊竹”“真气”,当时我想都没想就大笑起来,因为这是我从未见过的字眼。但刹那间眼泪又夺眶而出。因为,你是我的爸爸,一个没读过多少书,没有多少文化的爸爸。这两个词是你的专利,有你的专属味道。无论你的话里有多少错别字,有多少语病,你都是我的`爸爸。
我知道,你说的每句话,每个字都是为我好,虽然字错了,但我相信,你对我的爱是永远不会变的。
你曾给我们找了一个后妈。相处一段时间后,你问我她对我好不好,我说很好。其实,爸爸,我撒谎了,她对我很不好,总骂我是个败家子!还用手指着我说是我妈没把我教好,说我有娘生,没娘教……
爸爸,你知道吗?这些话一刀一刀刺进了我的心里,好痛,好痛……很多次,我想对你说,可话到嘴边,又咽了下去。因为,我不想在你面前提起妈妈,不想让你伤心。我知道,是她对不起你,可我还是希望你们能在一起。
还记得,在初中,你们常买着我最爱吃的苹果到学校看我。你知道吗?你们走后,同学们都对我说:“罗青,我们好羡慕你哦!你妈妈漂亮,爸爸又帅。而且,那么疼你!”当时的我感觉全身被蜜糖包裹着,觉得我就是这世上最幸福的人了。因为,我有爱我的爸爸妈妈,我有一个温暖的家……
可没过多久,你和妈妈离婚了。我问你为什么,你给我的理由是那么的简单:“脾气不和”。说完,你马上把头扭了过去,一副无所谓的样子。当时我根本无法接受这个事实,一直都在告诉自己,妈妈会回来的……刚开始,不知道真相的我还为了这件事和你吵了很多次,埋怨了你很久,甚至恨过你,因为是你让我失去了妈妈,失去了原本属于我的温暖的家,让我变成了一个没有妈妈的孩子,我认为这一切都是你的错。
到后来,我知道真相后才明白,当时你为什么要把头扭过去,因为,你在我面前总是那么坚强。爸爸,对不起,我错怪了你,你为了让我记住爱我的妈妈,才隐瞒了真相,尽管你知道我会恨你……
之后,我问你为什么答应离婚,你仰着头,说:“不管怎样,只要有我可爱的宝贝女儿和宝贝儿子在我身边陪着我,我是不会孤独的,你们是上天送给我的最好的礼物,哪怕要我孤独一生,我也愿意。”
后来,你又为了我们和后妈离婚了。现在的你又是孤身一人在外漂泊,整天都在为我们担心、劳累。现在我只想对你唱:世上只有爸爸好,有爸的孩子像块宝,投进爸爸的怀抱,幸福少不了……爸爸,你听到了吗?
爸爸,谢谢你!谢谢你对我的支持;谢谢你对我的信任;谢谢你对我无微不至的爱!
可惜,我不是画家,不能把你那慈祥的面容画得栩栩如生;我也不是文学家,不能把你对我的爱写得淋漓尽致;但是,我永远是你听话,懂事的女儿,你永远都是我的好爸爸!
爸爸,答应我,好好照顾自己,别再那么辛苦……
愿你一切安好,嘴角多添一个微笑;眼角少添一条皱纹,额角少添一缕白发!
nowadays, we can see some boys and girls who live in a small world of their own. they bury themselves among books and are proud of themselves. they think that it will make them lose their face if they do housework for they often think themselves very noble.
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single,yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true.however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
They are afraid we will have accidents as the river has no safty measures.
So, of course, we should go to the river for swimming. It may takes our life for no reason.
It is very cruel. Sometimes we can hear the news that someone die because of swimming in the river.
If we want to swim, we can go to the swimming pool with adults. This is safe. And we can also ask a teacher to teach us. Just remember, do not go to the river to swim secretly. We should take responsibility for ourselves.
大人们总是警告我们不要要江河水库游泳。他们担心我们会发生意外,因为江河水库没有相关的'安全措施。所以,我们当然不能去江河水库游泳了。这很有可能会突然就夺走我们的生命,是很残酷的。有时候我们也会听到一些新闻说有人因去江河水库游泳而丧命。如果我们想要游泳,我们可以在大人的陪同下去游泳池游泳。这样是安全的,我们也可以请教练教我们。一定要谨记,不要私自到江河水库游泳。我们要对自己负责任。
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single, yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true. however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
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